LLL PLAYOFF[season25]: RD1 daveDILLY vs hello there (DAVE WINS)

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Due 12 days





@hello there
@daveDILLY

Czech.

here
good luck

"I gazed over the marsh, and the swamps,
and took in the beauty of the blue bayou."
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Howdy! Now listen, faggot:
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I'm phonin' the cops - call 'sir vagrant' & go roamin' his spot..
Then get paid $10k to put his home in a box..!
Bend ur shit.. I roh, then fire: make you duck & get down quick..
Cause this opp'a ang-uish, like I'm fuckin' a brown chick..!
"Bored, dead lovin'" -- that's what she said. Your whore meant nothin'..
But when I backshot your kids? That's tor-ment fuckin'..!
Oh... ... no... ... let's slow down, folks:
Last bar was for heads only, this a low-brow joke..!
Been floggin' his dyke, like... the suppositive type..
Till she's tellin' Dave "back up!" while I'm cloggin' her pipe..!
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This is the playoffs, retards.
Break down the bars for yourselves.




Expos
1. Survey grants
2. Aang Wish
3. Tor - It's a pedo creampie joke
4. Forhead

telling peeps you winning this will end wit you dead..
go ahead, allege 2 beat me, ill put ya teeth on 1 & stomp the back of ur head
ur in a league of ur own - dropping weak shit, u neva be known..
If you ask who da wackest?? 1st thing out my mouth is hello like answering the phone
i got glockz stuffed in tube socks - & I’m not friendly were I go..
u see me waving that arm - u can bet no1 will ever see hello
u don’t think i fucks with the steel? 4real? let me get 2 cookin..
wen i cock back - I’m sending therefore, thus, or hence this ass whooping
so sit down, ima win this - my written’s are renowned..
If your lyrics move me it will be quickly 2 the next round

telling peeps you winning this will end wit you dead..
go ahead, allege 2 beat me, ill put ya teeth on 1 & stomp the back of ur head
allege was a cool flip just too wordy my dude
ur in a league of ur own - dropping weak shit, u neva be known..
If you ask who da wackiest?? 1st thing out my mouth is hello like answering the phone
this was cool also, but wackiest or wackest lol idk hello out of my mouth was cool though
i got glockz stuffed in tube socks - & I’m not friendly were I go..
u see me waving that arm - u can bet no1 will ever see hello
didnt like the back to back plays
u don’t think i fucks with the steel? 4real? let me get 2 cookin..
wen i cock back - I’m sending therefore, thus, or hence this ass whooping
cool idea here meh punch
so sit down, ima win this - my written’s are renowned..
If your lyrics move me it will be quickly 2 the next round
seen this too many times

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owdy! Now listen, faggot:
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I'm phonin' the cops - call 'sir vagrant' & go roamin' his spot..
Then get paid $10k to put his home in a box..!
yeah idk man
Bend ur shit.. I roh, then fire: make you duck & get down quick..
Cause this opp'a ang-uish, like I'm fuckin' a brown chick..!
i dont get it, and i tried too..
"Bored, dead lovin'" -- that's what she said. Your whore meant nothin'..
But when I backshot your kids? That's tor-ment fuckin'..!
Oh... ... no... ... let's slow down, folks:
Last bar was for heads only, this a low-brow joke..!
Been floggin' his dyke, like... the suppositive type..
Till she's tellin' Dave "back up!" while I'm cloggin' her pipe..!
dude il be honest idk tf im reading here..

vote dave not the best ive seen from ya buddy but idk maybe ya read his verse and figured you didnt need much here.

Vote dave.

Opener

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Allege & therefore

Dave was stronger here, hellos got good attempts but the wordplays were a little light n weren’t really flipped to pack a ton of sting

Vote Dave

Hello There

'm phonin' the cops - call 'sir vagrant' & go roamin' his spot..
Then get paid $10k to put his home in a box..!
this was cool.
Bend ur shit.. I roh, then fire: make you duck & get down quick..
Cause this opp'a ang-uish, like I'm fuckin' a brown chick..!
nope. not feelings this one
"Bored, dead lovin'" -- that's what she said. Your whore meant nothin'..
But when I backshot your kids? That's tor-ment fuckin'..!
bored, dead lovin.not even to force a rhyme should you have written that. the punch wasn't hitting either
Oh... ... no... ... let's slow down, folks:
Last bar was for heads only, this a low-brow joke..!
explaining last bar in a punch is okay. but low-brow didnt really hit. the connection is established but there is no "wow" or "ah" factor here.
Been floggin' his dyke, like... the suppositive type..
Till she's tellin' Dave "back up!" while I'm cloggin' her pipe..!
this is a light diss butt there but not really creative, just straight forward with little pretense
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This is the playoffs, retards.
Break down the bars for yourselves.
ok bet


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daveDILLY

telling peeps you winning this will end wit you dead..
go ahead, allege 2 beat me, ill put ya teeth on 1 & stomp the back of ur head
this was ok. i didnt care too much for the wording.
ur in a league of ur own - dropping weak shit, u neva be known..
If you ask who da wackiest?? 1st thing out my mouth is hello like answering the phone
i fuck with this one. lol
i got glockz stuffed in tube socks - & I’m not friendly were I go..
u see me waving that arm - u can bet no1 will ever see hello
eh light
u don’t think i fucks with the steel? 4real? let me get 2 cookin..
wen i cock back - I’m sending therefore, thus, or hence this ass whooping
ok
so sit down, ima win this - my written’s are renowned..
If your lyrics move me it will be quickly 2 the next round
ok


v/daveDILLY

i have dave taking this one pretty handily. harder hitting punches. Hello There had some good ideas going on there but they didnt have the impact and felt a bit more like they were for audio or a bit fillerish.

I think hello there had a couple of good ideas but I’m not sure any of them really worked in an attacking punchline but I rate his creativity, daves verse was okay, hello there and the aledge bar were decent but nothing real to note outside of that. I think hello could be a decent battler with a bit of tweaking coz his creativity is good

V/dave

i have to go with dave, hello was forcing way to much... even some of the puns some ppl said hit were a far reach... idk .. but thats how i see it

v-dave

dave wins