Little freestyle (feedback)

I like violence like every other mind who watches tv or plays them games
Thats just me though
Caz I rather see the presidents get shot while runnin campaigns
im hard to tame caz Im respected in every line of fame
Like the Game who was sellin big
I can buy his house and put it inside of my plane
I ride them jumbo jets with the casino and strip bars
And Im like a car sells man who purposely rigs cars
Im a crippler who never eats sleeps or thinks about losing
I refuse the though of it so I make my battle style amusin
Im choosin big cats to pick off like im a big shot
and kill off any nigga who threatens to destroy Hip Hop

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

It was a good Freestyle M
kinda short though
but tight
i liked your flow man

i had no idea what you was tawkin bout at all in dis drop....you need to elevate a lot more....work on your structure and makin your pieces more complex by adding vocab...i dont know but dis wasnt very nice..