30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
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30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
CHECKIN IN FASHO:D
ayo
signing in dis biyatch
my ill~ass lyrics for this week:
I just took pills with alcohol an injected heroin In my dick
So I can have a mental block and still flow so sick/
Ya wacker than wack, weaker than my gran’s verbal attack/
Yo’ shit aint fell, currently no more than a whiz in a crack/
I’m back, this cat’s the weakest link, bottom of the food chain/
Constipation determined you could only spit lame/
Dogg this game is for the players, name one I can’t beat/
Anyone I couldn’t defeat, physically strong, mentally deep /
You gay son, that’s done, none can argue or moan/
You alone, groan when you realise you on your own/
Ya phone outta reach, gotta teach you a lyrical lesson/
Win number two for the number one, second-guessing/
I know it’s depressin, don’t think I aint been as low/
Everyone’s gotta build up an work for their dough/
guillotine? ya name should be hygene
to clean up the blood from spittin razors splitin ya spleen/
im the razors edge rapidly rippin ya torso
splitin ya personality so actually im battlin 2 halfs of a faggot/
im raw like fresh meat, yurs coverd with maggots
my techinque rip ya frail flesh til u skin deep like dicks in asses/
similar to acid, i'll melt ya mass to candle waxes
ya gross average in this battle is 1.2 votes, and thats after taxes/
like barry bonds ima batter this bastard
shatter ya image like already cracked glasses
oh yeah, sniffin coke, wont make u a classic
u can post or noshow, it wont even matter/
i'll decapitate ya brain outta head, fast or quick
or severly slice ya slimey face to potato wedges
then serve em to the hungry and homeless
this battle is hopless hope u focus like 20/20
and i aint talkin the newz........(after this line ,read my sig)
good luck,
imma go wit dalyricalwhiz on this one. both verses were tight but lyricalwhiz jus came harder. guillotine ya verse was tight but it wasnt really a battle verse. try to come wit more punches. keep doin ya thing tho. holla
1-0 me, uppin on some fuckin votes
i pretty much agree wit tyvo dalyricalwhiz just had tat extra step dont get me wrong ur verse was their but not like his so vote goes to dalyrical whiz
both verses were okay,guillotines verse flowed real well,and had some nice wordplay and an iight rhymescheme,but didnt have enuff hard, direct punches for me...
dalyricalwhiz juss seemed to come alot stronger,dont think it flowed quite as well,but had much harder direct punches and funnier wordplay than guillotines verse.
Vote=DALYRICALWHIZ
for me,won it mostly on the harder direct punches
~pz~
All of Guillotines wordplay was played out as hell...most of his was filler for weak punches that did nothing for him...No multies or inners...Nothing to make his verse complex...DLW came raw in his verse and I picked up a lot of alliteration...thats nice...
ya gross average in this battle is 1.2 votes, and thats after taxes/
thats the nicest line of this battle...lol..made me crack a smile
Overall DLW takes ths battle on all accounts. His verse was plain better.
My nicca whiz took this one. Clearly his content, punches and overall verse was betta. Good shyt from both of yall. Keep elevatin.
UP
GUILLOTINE:
I just took pills with alcohol an injected heroin In my dick
So I can have a mental block and still flow so sick/
OK,OPENER NOT REALLY FEELING THIS,IF FELT LIKE A FILLER LINE .
Ya wacker than wack, weaker than my gran’s verbal attack/
Yo’ shit aint fell, currently no more than a whiz in a crack/
BLAH AT THIS,FELT LIKE YOU WERE TRYING TO JUST RHYME
I’m back, this cat’s the weakest link, bottom of the food chain/
Constipation determined you could only spit lame/
FILLER,BOOOOO
Dogg this game is for the players, name one I can’t beat/
Anyone I couldn’t defeat, physically strong, mentally deep
NOT FEELING THIS
You gay son, that’s done, none can argue or moan/
You alone, groan when you realise you on your own/
NOT HARD SHIT MAN,NEED TO COME HARDER
Ya phone outta reach, gotta teach you a lyrical lesson/
Win number two for the number one, second-guessing/
BLAH AT THIS
I know it’s depressin, don’t think I aint been as low/
Everyone’s gotta build up an work for their dough/
NOT A GOOD ENDING ,NOT HARD OR EFFECTIVE WAY TO END YOUR SHIT
DALYRICALWHIZ:
guillotine? ya name should be hygene
to clean up the blood from spittin razors splitin ya spleen/
OKAY OPENER NOTHING TO HARD OR EFFECTIVE JUST OK
im the razors edge rapidly rippin ya torso
splitin ya personality so actually im battlin 2 halfs of a faggot/
NOT BAD AT ALL
im raw like fresh meat, yurs coverd with maggots
my techinque rip ya frail flesh til u skin deep like dicks in asses/
OK
similar to acid, i'll melt ya mass to candle waxes
ya gross average in this battle is 1.2 votes, and thats after taxes/
JUST BASIC GARBAGE HERE,NOTHING GREAT OR GOOD
like barry bonds ima batter this bastard
shatter ya image like already cracked glasses
oh yeah, sniffin coke, wont make u a classic
u can post or noshow, it wont even matter/
BOO AT THIS SHIT
i'll decapitate ya brain outta head, fast or quick
or severly slice ya slimey face to potato wedges
then serve em to the hungry and homeless
this battle is hopless hope u focus like 20/20
and i aint talkin the newz........(after this line ,read my sig)
NOT BAD SHIT FOR AN ENDING,BETTER THAN GUILLOTINES
UMM BOTH VERSES WERE NOT GOOD,BUT DALYRICALWHIZ EDGED THIS CAUSE HE HAD ACTUALLY HAD PUNCHES AND AN ATTACK TO HIS VERSE
VOTE DALYRICALWHIZ
DALYRICALWHIZ- 3-0
GUILLOTINE- 2-1