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VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
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30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
rematch -in-
15 power packed bars, matchem or less, let's try n get'em up by Wednesday
ya i'll try to post later today then 15 or less
here's my verse where are you ? you said wedsnday but anyway here's mine 16 lines like i said
I’ll pull out your eye with my vocal javelin/
Pledging for your life bleeding on your knees graveling/
Keying up a lyrical disaster to rain down on you/
Take my butcher knife and take a sample of your skin tissue/
You think you can beat me I’ll tie my arms behind my back and still throw more punches/
Swell closed your other eye and leave you throwing punches on hunches/
Easily avoid them slice open your arteries just to break your flow/
I fight dirty so in a race against you I’m cutting off your feet then saying go/
Started off this battle with eight open lines cause you too wack to be specific/
But don’t let those lines fool ya cause your death will be graphic/
Jab an ice pick through all your limbs and tap your spine with it/
Now you got no feeling in your body o left you as a quadriplegic/
Lil bow wow wanna be just changed the last part cause you wanna live in Texas/ (Dallas Texas)
Up here in Canada they say Texas and south U.S.A. in general really know what incest is/
Ya that last line will give me a lot of heat and you’re a lotta dick riding votes/
Your boy friend would probably say “ya he likes riding dick just look at our love notes”/
Son I’m done with you ending this battle my jabbing holes in your skull with bicycle spokes/
that's 17 lines, we agreed to 15//
Repitwa, how the fuck can I battle this emcee? he can't read//
bitch if you eva' talk about the dirty again// (dirty south)
we'll take yo pretend javelin and peal your fuckin skin//
and yo your rhymes is whack and weak homie//
them dick-suckin lines, fuckin faggot, blow me//
Thought I told you b4 I'll own you in the league or the triple V//
You dirty dick suckin faggot, thought you had it made?//
thought them lines bout Texas ain't been played?//
Well then you need to think again//
shit to batt me you need Dre, paper and pen//
You got a few swings but no punch//
I'll eat them shits, bagg'em for lunch//
This yo reaper talkin, yes I'm stalkin you//
Yo times up you just been abused//
Texas nigga drugged you and beat you around the room//
you woke up havin no clue//
and now it's time to rid the world of all weak rhymes//
got yo number son you next in line//
...since you broke the deal I broke it too. I posted two more lines than you.
uppin 4 votez
Vote=lil dallas
both verse were horrible. No complexity...mostly filler setting up punchlines that never came. No wordplay No multies...Lil Dallas gets this because his verse didnt sound so bad. Dirty boy tried his hardest to sound raw but didnt...Im not hatin but you guys need an incredible load of work...At least Lil dallas tried to have a personal about the line lengths...
Vote=lil dallas
ouch 1-0
Vote= DirtBoy69
DirtBoy69 had better punches and word play and creativity for example- Easily avoid them slice open your arteries just to break your flow/
I fight dirty so in a race against you I’m cutting off your feet then saying go/
Dallas didnt have that much creativity, both werent too good but my vote goes to DirtBoy69
YO VOTE LIL DALLAS
BOTH USED MANY FILLERS
THIS LINE IS SO DUMB
I’ll pull out your eye with my vocal javelin/
Pledging for your life bleeding on your knees graveling
GODD RHYME STUPID
GRAVELING IS NOT A WORD
GROVELLING IS
BUT THAT DOES NOT RHYME WITH JAVELIN
NEXT DUMBASS LINE
Started off this battle with eight open lines cause you too wack to be specific/
But don’t let those lines fool ya cause your death will be graphic/
DOESNT RHYME KID
Up here in Canada they say Texas and south U.S.A. in general really know what incest is/
THATS WAC I LIVE UP HERE IN CANADA AND WE NEVER SAY THAT STUPID STUPID LINE
U HAD A FEW GOODLINES NOTHING THAT STANDS OUT
LIL DALLAS
NOT MUCH BETTER AT ALL
DUMBASS LINES
and yo your rhymes is whack and weak homie//
them dick-suckin lines, fuckin faggot, blow me//
Thought I told you b4 I'll own you in the league or the triple V//
You dirty dick suckin faggot, thought you had it made?//
DICKSUCKIN FAGGOT TWICE IN2 LINES GOOD JOB
Yo times up you just been abused//
Texas nigga drugged you and beat you around the room//
AIIGHT STUFF
THE RESST WAS OK
BUT STILLMUCH BETTER THAN DIRTBOY
OUT
DirtBoy69
- But don’t let those lines fool ya cause your death will be graphic/
- Jab an ice pick through all your limbs and tap your spine with it/
Decent punch. Liked it.
You lost me with your ending. Shoulda reworded that or written something else.
LilDallas
- that's 17 lines, we agreed to 15//
- Repitwa, how the fuck can I battle this emcee? he can't read//
Hahaha. That was nice. I woulda reworded it a bit though.
- thought them lines bout Texas ain't been played?//
True.
This was a decent battle. LilDallas edged this one slightly cause I felt his verse more. What I mean is that I could feel his angry tone of voice coming through.
Vote = DirtyBoy69
I think DirtyBoy's punches wre harder than LilDallas. Plus, ya boy 'studied' DirtyBoy's verse, and fed off it. To me, that is a big no-no in batte. It just takes some off of your verse. Use this tip in the future.
3-2 me, but darkskyz should be a hate vote, he been hatin on me. But he half-ass explained his vote so 3-2.
yo nice shit to both of ya.....
but i was feeling dirtyboy style more
so shoot me !
but yo nice style, tight puches, to both.
its that i like dirty boys aggression more
thats why i was feeling his style.
vote = dirtyboy