Originally Posted by Ether Spitter
great flow...elegant...n poeticsm...ok...but heres where i jump on that ass...
what the hell do you mean?
explain to me....
Meditation of fragment glory, residual only through lost scriptures of fatigue…
where are your thoughts stemming from in this...sooooo....In thought of past achievements...consolidated in my being...are only left through past scriptures of the fatigue of the years from whence it was brought...lemmi know if im on the right track with this...
Hard ship lays desolate in desperate mammon, a love of riches in the sand…
....harship lays in the despiration of a richness personified in evil/evil influence? (thats what mammon means)...so are you saying that contrast or complmenting: 'a love of riches in the sand'...or are you just saying...a love of riches in the sand cuz it flows?..if so...how do these two things even correlate to make sense?
The spirits that once tormented our being, now acts as a endowment of revolt.
ok...you sound like a smart girl..but are you stating that a spirit..the torment of my soul, NOW acts as the 'endowment' of my revolt...meaning...is it giving cause to my want of revolution from this demon?...or what?...when really endowing something is to be a natural gift or ability...also is a form of contribution through money....explain this one to me
The cup of poets in the mist in which demonstrates so gracefully it’s beauty? …
nice....until you begged the question(in my opinion)
overall i thought this was poetic...but...i challenge you to now go beyond what it is you said...because obviously no one else is asking or questioning....i loved your work...now defend it....otherwise you just had a dictionary and thesaurus by you and poured your work into this...from it....
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