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20.
aight
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ribo-Nuke's sig on RM
another weak ass week. what bastard i catch?
RN?... now theres irony
cuz thats exactly what he'll need for after this match
check it
my energys 'brupt. i come in and leave my fuckin enemies punked
thinkin ur likewise?.. nah pussy, your motherfuckin similies suck
this is ... simply done. this kid is a chump believe me
either ya adequate..
... or get stomped. cuz ya aint sufficient enough to beat me
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
really theres no question... i'm the best n i'm cursin lives
but its clear...
... i failed as a butcher, bad as i just served rib eyes
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
u gotta be kiddin around. thinkin ya better when ya verse is threw
how're u gonna be a internet icon when i've never even heard of you
put u in an emergency room, but u'll be able to pay the good doctors
i'm storin so many feet in ya face, u can open a chain of footlockers
second coming...
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
this faggots done...
please don't flow me to death
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
spittin absurd flames drunk.. u havin trouble sober,
after this they'll call you JU when I make u double over.
I could easily snipe this fucker from a block away,
and we'll see who's the lowercase when I put the dot to j.
last week wasn't the only time you'll be losin hard,
duke, we've seen longer streaks produced by shootin stars.
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
you stick to wack sites.. we start trends you don't see
thats why ya usin concepts that were played at RM in 03
sharks tend to roam free, u can feel the tiger's wrath,
fight or chat.. you get cut both ways like fiber glass.
this writer's ass, to tell the truth I'm through talkin,
dude jockin?
my punches will have him seein double like shoe shoppin.
hard and wicked as well, ya better off to sit in a cell
J Walk the streets but crossin me you'll earn a ticket to hell!
^ fire imo.
good battle here.
jay came wit some iight.... :
my energys 'brupt. i come in and leave my fuckin enemies punked
thinkin ur likewise?.. nah pussy, your motherfuckin similies suck
ehh decent at best
this is ... simply done. this kid is a chump believe me
either ya adequate..
... or get stomped. cuz ya aint sufficient enough to beat me
wording was off it seemd, dope concept tho
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
nice
really theres no question... i'm the best n i'm cursin lives
but its clear...
... i failed as a butcher, bad as i just served rib eyes
ehhhh it missed.
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
lol iight..
u gotta be kiddin around. thinkin ya better when ya verse is threw
how're u gonna be a internet icon when i've never even heard of you
concepts played shit
put u in an emergency room, but u'll be able to pay the good doctors
i'm storin so many feet in ya face, u can open a chain of footlockers
too predictable
second coming...
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
decent
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
this faggots done...
wasnt feelin it that much decent tho i guess
u coulda done better
next.
please don't flow me to death
word
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
decent at best
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
good
spittin absurd flames drunk.. u havin trouble sober,
after this they'll call you JU when I make u double over.
nice
I could easily snipe this fucker from a block away,
and we'll see who's the lowercase when I put the dot to j.
decent
last week wasn't the only time you'll be losin hard,
duke, we've seen longer streaks produced by shootin stars.
ok
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
ehh could mean two different things here. but i get what ur sayin decent at best
you stick to wack sites.. we start trends you don't see
thats why ya usin concepts that were played at RM in 03
played concept kinda cool
sharks tend to roam free, u can feel the tiger's wrath,
fight or chat.. you get cut both ways like fiber glass.
dope
this writer's ass, to tell the truth I'm through talkin,
dude jockin?
my punches will have him seein double like shoe shoppin.
nice
hard and wicked as well, ya better off to sit in a cell
J Walk the streets but crossin me you'll earn a ticket to hell!
dope closer
vote - RN, came wit fire.
jay, u focused to much on ya flow ya punches was weaker.
my energys 'brupt. i come in and leave my fuckin enemies punked
thinkin ur likewise?.. nah pussy, your motherfuckin similies suck
meh
this is ... simply done. this kid is a chump believe me
either ya adequate..
... or get stomped. cuz ya aint sufficient enough to beat me
nice
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
nice
really theres no question... i'm the best n i'm cursin lives
but its clear...
... i failed as a butcher, bad as i just served rib eyes
iight
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
lol
u gotta be kiddin around. thinkin ya better when ya verse is threw
how're u gonna be a internet icon when i've never even heard of you
meh
put u in an emergency room, but u'll be able to pay the good doctors
i'm storin so many feet in ya face, u can open a chain of footlockers
iight
second coming...
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
nice
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
this faggots done...
meh
vs.
please don't flow me to death
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
iight
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
nice
spittin absurd flames drunk.. u havin trouble sober,
after this they'll call you JU when I make u double over.
iight
I could easily snipe this fucker from a block away,
and we'll see who's the lowercase when I put the dot to j.
meh
last week wasn't the only time you'll be losin hard,
duke, we've seen longer streaks produced by shootin stars.
iight
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
meh
you stick to wack sites.. we start trends you don't see
thats why ya usin concepts that were played at RM in 03
meh
sharks tend to roam free, u can feel the tiger's wrath,
fight or chat.. you get cut both ways like fiber glass.
lol.. nice
this writer's ass, to tell the truth I'm through talkin,
dude jockin?
my punches will have him seein double like shoe shoppin.
iight
hard and wicked as well, ya better off to sit in a cell
J Walk the streets but crossin me you'll earn a ticket to hell!
lmao.. nice
this was a good battle.. either way it could go really.. both had good lines both had meh lines..
to me overall Jay had slightly more consistancy
so imo V/jay
good read guys
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
vs
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
at first glance I would have said Ribo Nuke but after weighing in the quotables, Jay had a few more lines I liked, nice battle and the top line quoted from each person was dope
vote Jay
now go leave feedback on my verse
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
Witty..
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
Funny.
Nice verse Jay.. think you need to work on your wording a lot as a lot of your set ups just don't make sense at all. Which throws me off the punch.. altogether nice though.
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
lol
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
dope wordplay.
spittin absurd flames drunk.. u havin trouble sober,
after this they'll call you JU when I make u double over.
Nice..again.
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
True, lol
I liked this verse a lot. Sharp, witty, and short..
You did what you needed to do and had some with it too.
Good battle but..
Vote: RN.
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
vs.
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
sharks tend to roam free, u can feel the tiger's wrath,
fight or chat.. you get cut both ways like fiber glass.
hard and wicked as well, ya better off to sit in a cell
J Walk the streets but crossin me you'll earn a ticket to hell!
hmmm straight battle. jay came really weak imo. ribo was pretty good, i liked his wittyness throughtout the verse. jay had that rib eye punch that was closeto a quotable but wording wasnt good at all, with better wording ud probly take this match, seems like u rushed this week. i have ribo taking this battle.
v/ ribo
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
^Ha.
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
^Nice.
spittin absurd flames drunk.. u havin trouble sober,
after this they'll call you JU when I make u double over.
^Coo.
I could easily snipe this fucker from a block away,
and we'll see who's the lowercase when I put the dot to j.
Nah.
last week wasn't the only time you'll be losin hard,
duke, we've seen longer streaks produced by shootin stars.
^aiight.just wasnt wordedharsh enough to me,..but still coo.
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
^nah.
you stick to wack sites.. we start trends you don't see
thats why ya usin concepts that were played at RM in 03
^Inside joke.Not really feelin this..no proof.
sharks tend to roam free, u can feel the tiger's wrath,
fight or chat.. you get cut both ways like fiber glass.
^Good.
this writer's ass, to tell the truth I'm through talkin,
dude jockin?
my punches will have him seein double like shoe shoppin.
lol.pretty decent.
hard and wicked as well, ya better off to sit in a cell
J Walk the streets but crossin me you'll earn a ticket to hell!
^Nicely worded.good.
vs.
another weak ass week. what bastard i catch?
RN?... now theres irony
cuz thats exactly what he'll need for after this match
^coo.but a bit forced.
my energys 'brupt. i come in and leave my fuckin enemies punked
thinkin ur likewise?.. nah pussy, your motherfuckin similies suck
^not really.
this is ... simply done. this kid is a chump believe me
either ya adequate..
... or get stomped. cuz ya aint sufficient enough to beat me
^Nice.
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
^Nice.lol.
really theres no question... i'm the best n i'm cursin lives
but its clear...
... i failed as a butcher, bad as i just served rib eyes
^meh.aiight.wording.
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
^I remeber that movie,Lol.Good.
u gotta be kiddin around. thinkin ya better when ya verse is threw
how're u gonna be a internet icon when i've never even heard of you
^Ha.
put u in an emergency room, but u'll be able to pay the good doctors
i'm storin so many feet in ya face, u can open a chain of footlockers
^I like this.Yeah its predictable,but still..good.
second coming...
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
^lol.coo..
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
this faggots done...
^^Good.I get it..an Liked it.
Overall/-Good read by both,Ribo had sum inside jokes that i really didnt feel cuz of lack of proof..but had sum nice punches,Jay had sum witty punches.an overall consistant verse..well IMO.Good battle.
V/=J to the Mwah!
n u make it so fuckin easy - i'm like another contestin?
i'ma real bang for ya buck... kinda like ya mothers profession
listen... to show u what i think of ya spit in a noun
it is what it is man..
... n stephen kings already shown us that that shit is a clown
u can not touch us, the way we stop ruckus the block loves us
n if u fade me... i'm beatin ur ass for fuckin up my buzz cuts
ur investments arent a part of success n its got me baffled son
that the stock u gain in, always happens to be that laughin one
^flames ..lol
Jay - good verse dude. some pretty cool lines there, overall nice. we'll see what i can get from this ribs dude ..
vs
I stay usin those cannons my tools'll go blammin
a crypt for you aint got shit to do wit computer programmin
no point for ho's to start admittin this nerds lame,
cuz any chick that Blue Jay is just a typical bird brain.
^made me laugh
bruise with bars that'll have you flyin feet first..
said you've never heard of me then why the research?
Ribo - pretty nice, i think this was MUCH better than last weeks verse imo. but not quite enough to beat jay on this one. good lines. keep em comin'.
both did alright, but it was Jay by the hair ..
v. Jay
Rn is sick...
they both came with some nice punches
but this was a good ass battle. jay had the it line
the rib eyes, the buzz cuts,
ribo had the j. line, double over line, rm in 03 line...
i think it was close. I just think that rn... when he had
a great punch it was great but his other ones were awful
the crypt line, the ticket to hell line was embarrassing,
the shoe shopping was okay...
I think jay was more consistent and his hard hittin punches
hit just as hard. So thus I gotta give it to J.Walk even though
RM is nice