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Damn man....
...I took a little break from FL, celebrate guys, have cake n' bread,
The stage of my return, and I even don't have to tell u to break a leg,
'Herent was hangin down south, got beat up, n' ended up sucking ten,
So now all he does is stick up north...around a bunch of fucking men,
Ur pathetic, u were on your way to the store, Got hit n' whored fast,
Landed on the pavement next to chips, n' even the french fries ur ass,
Damn, getting your ass beat in other countries, let some air vent,
In jail, guards even beat your fuckin ass...everytime the CO her'ent,
Fuck outta here, Qualitative Statements? ya'll smell like goat cheese,
But we always QS...everytime we want the WHOLE party to leave,
Don't you get it? U can't beat me, go slim fast, don't even click fatty,
Cuz I can use a whole verse with fillers...n' still keep your bitch happy,
I was playin soccer, and looked at his face, lost the ball n' cost a goal,
Your ugly ass made get a turnover bitch...to keep cookin u on the coals,
Damn man, the way I just whored u like this, fucked up how u must feel,
But look, your not half bad man...because ur dead body was JUST killed,
16. Match me.
praise the lord! i would, but you can't save-your self with a couponQuote:
Originally Posted by Lord of Pens
i mean, this demon.......he's weekly bad, so just call him Lu's-pawn
smitened by your own angel? well now, how exactly did this happen?
circle Pens with men, and just watch him continually run lap-ins
come on little man, hit me, i'm leaving a wide open target today
i would get KO'd.........if this midgets arms could reach my face
fuck Lord of Pens, i merk kids like you, fuck it, ill rip out your soul
but ill flip you around to show you that you wont win in the POL
look at his bio in FD, 20 aliases, and this is where you've gotten
i've heard of this natural flow, apparently your blood stream's clottin
Final Draft you say? needed to close doors while you're blowing win(d)
step to me son, i finally have you bitch, to get dropped and penned
i bet your bitch's pussy is real cold, considering you never hit hardQuote:
Originally Posted by Lord of Pens
i would say...
...he's victorious over herbs, but he never even got his V-card
your lines are sugar coated ass...i'll take a bite out of your bun
in this closer, i should end your life<---but you've yet to get one
Lol. Up 1.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313937
^^
hit that shit up NOW!....
iight
VOTE: LOP
just a much stronger more attacking verse..i mean co you did a good job but you fell off here and there and werent too consistant while LOP was hitting you then teasing then hitting...he fell of maybe 1-2 but you co fell off more than him and shit son...so i vote LOP fo rmore harder and consistant punches!
Up 2
Up 3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314196
^hit that up
Both had decent verses in this battle, but imma have to go with Lord of Pens. I feel that he had a little harder punches. He also came with more consistancy and creativity. Coherent, you are getting a lot better, with every battle that your in. Keep elevating.
Vote - Lord of Pens
Both writers here had pretty good verse's, LOP had some nice new concepts with hard hitting punches and wordplay to top it off. wording was not bad from him and he clearly won this battle. Coherent. you had some fnny lines made me giggle a bit, some played concepts thought that lost you this battle, but ay.....ur getting better son.
v/LOP
Will poll when u hoe's hit up the sig vs. charles honestly
kool verse from both id say, i thought you both had good punches and the personals wernt bad not notthe greatest ive seen. i just thought LOP had the better concept and the wording helped you out a bit cus it was better den co's.
these are the bars that i thought stood out from the battle yo
Ur pathetic, u were on your way to the store, Got hit n' whored fast,
Landed on the pavement next to chips, n' even the french fries ur ass,
^^ this made me 'lol' LOP
Don't you get it? U can't beat me, go slim fast, don't even click fatty,
Cuz I can use a whole verse with fillers...n' still keep your bitch happy
^^ lol good
vs
coherent:
smitened by your own angel? well now, how exactly did this happen?
circle Pens with men, and just watch him continually run lap-ins
^^ ok
to bring thisto a conclusion i thought LOP was more consistant with the punches. so i vote him
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314218
^^^ hit that up both of you
Up 4, and i'll hit all the links.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314235
this battle was iight, both came iight with some iight punches lol, but lop took it for coming better, with better wordplay n' more effective punches coherent came iight to but lop just came harder n' better
v/LOP