10-12
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10-12
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see you in ten
my pen ....brought about your end and then i sent ya
to met ya
inventa...deep like the placenta...i tend ta
rise like the tidal....quit your bitches cryin like a midol
call him D.O.A. cuz he was dead upon arrival
with what i said im liable
to have you bled ...shred your head entire fool
maniacle
when im writin cruel
what im spillin got you feelin suicidal fool
you where you at?
i cant believe what i just read, there must b some type of error
a bullshit key i won't call a verse, is that wut u call the big terror
my punches will shatter ya face, make u eat your words
but wen it comes to shit like that
..............better in than out, at least thats what i heard
i could use some big puns, but since theres no terror well fuck it
i got easy wordplay that'll leave dis bitch torn like letoya lucket
he's already ate by my first lines so there no need for me to feed
i got punches dat make niggaz wig out dat black bitches couldn't weave
u need to edit your verse again press bacspace on ur last rhyme
and make sure u keep ur finger on it till u dnt see no more lines
it's worse than real, u posted, shlda let my lil sister write ya verse forreal
ur verbal skill get hurt n killed instilled in durt untill the hearse is sealed
Damn thats the wackest shit i ever had the misfortune read fool .....fuck a verse bro i think rhymes are more important..the last two lines were good though....you know the ones about your sister.....she was better though
Weak battle.. DOA got it with a better verse, but with these lines:
he's already ate by my first lines so there no need for me to feed
i got punches dat make niggaz wig out dat black bitches couldn't weave
V. DOA
Closed. Make a battle poll