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@plethora
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Killing Spree:
SHATONYOU AKA @Joe Boston Vs Grand Master Flash AKA @Plethoro AKA NO ONE knows who the fuck you be
Congrats champing a dead place, hope u choke on it bitch tits
you takin the crown makes since, cause no one knew either one of yall existed
KP’s severed necks, murdered vets. stress this pest? Why bother
Better go to God to help wit blackmail before this one sends you to Christs’ Father
I’ll put the tips to this whore, leave u on the floor with ya jaw hurt
a Flocka Know Hands will hit soo hard, you’d think the ambulance pulled up at Waka’s concert
u emoji soft, stop that thug talk, cause we all know u not one
it’ll look like the Apocalypse when I put the galaxy down and drop sun
news around is dudes an animal, went apes and now bro’s an idol
Go gorilla on the kid and I’ll kill a beast faster than authorities could load their rifles
Don’t believe the hype, this loaner isn’t on his fukkin way
This battle will have voters usher you to the backdoor like a hitch hikers’ lucky day
Know is built for war, should of told you not to full with me
Now America will celebrate Memorial Day…The same week your family reads your eulogy
If hoes surrounded this fag, he probably wouldn’t hound tits
Bet you’re a kid at sporting store way you’ve been playing around Dicks
ima heart stopper. like when i put the heater to yours
pull out the Techno.. til u cant feel that pulsating beat anymore
give u a choice. these hands or a heater, Mr. know
can get Mono or Cancer, or hopefully die from a combination of both
ya whole family ratchets, thats why i gave up the FL title
i let u have the Front Gold so it'd match your aunties smile
shoot while u gettin a copy of the news in the morning homie
gonna hear claps as u walk to pick up the paper like graduation ceremonies
open this phony fat fuck when the cal tre sparking
gonna see a couple coming out the back of the rolls like valet parking
arms squeezin ur girls neck as we fuck & nut is her fave
that chokeslam finish would make andre the giant turn in his grave
& idgaf how black u are. could look like ash or tar naked
cuz i got Light skinned shooters waiting to go in on some golden state shit
nah fuck dukin it out, rather blast & give K - 10
so if P-Squared up, i'd put 2 over P like a science math equation
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Congrats champing a dead place, hope u choke on it bitch tits
you takin the crown makes since, cause no one knew either one of yall existed
felt this personal could have been executed better. not a fan
KP’s severed necks, murdered vets. stress this pest? Why bother
Better go to God to help wit blackmail before this one sends you to Christs’ Father
lol..this was cool
I’ll put the tips to this whore, leave u on the floor with ya jaw hurt
a Flocka Know Hands will hit soo hard, you’d think the ambulance pulled up at Waka’s concert
this was cool
u emoji soft, stop that thug talk, cause we all know u not one
it’ll look like the Apocalypse when I put the galaxy down and drop sun
not a fan of sun concepts
news around is dudes an animal, went apes and now bro’s an idol
Go gorilla on the kid and I’ll kill a beast faster than authorities could load their rifles
ahh...this was nice
Don’t believe the hype, this loaner isn’t on his fukkin way
This battle will have voters usher you to the backdoor like a hitch hikers’ lucky day
this was aight
Know is built for war, should of told you not to full with me
Now America will celebrate Memorial Day…The same week your family reads your eulogy
punch was cool..set up was wack. jab here
If hoes surrounded this fag, he probably wouldn’t hound tits
Bet you’re a kid at sporting store way you’ve been playing around Dicks
lmao...could have been dope but this fell short.
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ima heart stopper. like when i put the heater to yours
pull out the Techno.. til u cant feel that pulsating beat anymore
nice
give u a choice. these hands or a heater, Mr. know
can get Mono or Cancer, or hopefully die from a combination of both
meh...light
ya whole family ratchets, thats why i gave up the FL title
i let u have the Front Gold so it'd match your aunties smile
dope!
shoot while u gettin a copy of the news in the morning homie
gonna hear claps as u walk to pick up the paper like graduation ceremonies
this was nice
open this phony fat fuck when the cal tre sparking
gonna see a couple coming out the back of the rolls like valet parking
meh..not a fan...& 3 gun bars in a row aint my thing
arms squeezin ur girls neck as we fuck & nut is her fave
that chokeslam finish would make andre the giant turn in his grave
cool conept but not a fan of this aproach
& idgaf how black u are. could look like ash or tar naked
cuz i got Light skinned shooters waiting to go in on some golden state shit
not a fan of this either..cool concept but not liking this approach
nah fuck dukin it out, rather blast & give K - 10
so if P-Squared up, i'd put 2 over P like a science math equation
nah...not feelin all them p's yo
overall....Cool battle. felt Pleth had a couple dope bars and a few cool ones than a gang that fell short. while Know had some nice bars and little misses. i got knowP for being mroe consistant
v/Knowp
major deciding factor with knowp I gotta give you a shout out the reason you won my vote "KP’s severed necks, murdered vets. stress this pest? Why bother Better go to God to help wit blackmail before this one sends you to Christs’ Father." my little brother is in the marine corps and this is just reminded me of my brother so much so thank you on top of that being a physicist 'it’ll look like the Apocalypse when I put the galaxy down and drop sun" hit home with me also. although my math game ain't that strong plethora with that last line to me it was dope "so if P-Squared up, i'd put 2 over P like a science math equation" but it just didn't hit home like knowp!
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KnowP
knowp
Congrats champing a dead place, hope u choke on it bitch tits
you takin the crown makes since, cause no one knew either one of yall existed
cool, punch personal..
KP’s severed necks, murdered vets. stress this pest? Why bother
Better go to God to help wit blackmail before this one sends you to Christs’ Father
decent, nothign special...
I’ll put the tips to this whore, leave u on the floor with ya jaw hurt
a Flocka Know Hands will hit soo hard, you’d think the ambulance pulled up at Waka’s concert
ehhh gunplay, not feeling this one to much bruh.
u emoji soft, stop that thug talk, cause we all know u not one
it’ll look like the Apocalypse when I put the galaxy down and drop sun
cool little punch in the set up, backed by self hype lol, ehh.
news around is dudes an animal, went apes and now bro’s an idol
Go gorilla on the kid and I’ll kill a beast faster than authorities could load their rifles
another self hype type punch, not too shabby though i dig it.
Don’t believe the hype, this loaner isn’t on his fukkin way
This battle will have voters usher you to the backdoor like a hitch hikers’ lucky day
need to lean more towards diss punches, instead of self hype ones, you're still attacking though.
Know is built for war, should of told you not to full with me
Now America will celebrate Memorial Day…The same week your family reads your eulogy
damn, this was dope, still doing the self hype angle though.
If hoes surrounded this fag, he probably wouldn’t hound tits
Bet you’re a kid at sporting store way you’ve been playing around Dicks
nah, not a good closer, can't believe you ended with this.
overall, you had a decent verse bro, I feel like you focused heavy on a self hype - punch angle, when it should of been more of a diss - punch angle, you where still attacking don't get me wrong, but Id prefer it to be more personal than self hypish.. you are able to connect them in some way though, which is cool man.
plethera
ima heart stopper. like when i put the heater to yours
pull out the Techno.. til u cant feel that pulsating beat anymore
basic "ore" scheme, not bad though anyway, self hype with you to.
give u a choice. these hands or a heater, Mr. know
can get Mono or Cancer, or hopefully die from a combination of both
a repeat, cool little hit at the end.
ya whole family ratchets, thats why i gave up the FL title
i let u have the Front Gold so it'd match your aunties smile
eh, nice personal I guess.
shoot while u gettin a copy of the news in the morning homie
gonna hear claps as u walk to pick up the paper like graduation ceremonies
not feeling this, not really a fan of gunplay unless there is a clever punch behind it.
open this phony fat fuck when the cal tre sparking
gonna see a couple coming out the back of the rolls like valet parking
really? you're spamming gunplay now, but have a okayish punch here with the valet parking.
arms squeezin ur girls neck as we fuck & nut is her fave
that chokeslam finish would make andre the giant turn in his grave
cool wrestling reference, not to creative though.
& idgaf how black u are. could look like ash or tar naked
cuz i got Light skinned shooters waiting to go in on some golden state shit
not feeling, if your going to spam gunplay atleast be creative.
nah fuck dukin it out, rather blast & give K - 10
so if P-Squared up, i'd put 2 over P like a science math equation
decent, here.. same angle with the gunplay though, atleast this was a bit more creative though.
overall, a few gunplay lines that are creative, is fine, but when you're spamming ones that are non creative, it's kind of corny for a text battle, I like your concepts man, I really do --- use them to your advandage and think of more creative ways to set them up, I am not a gunplay hater it's just alot of people just can't pull it off effectively, I don't think you did here, your last bar if you had more like that - it would ahelped you.
v/knowp
pleth spammed gunplay, and had one with a punch, knowp spammed self hype, and had a few that attacked pleth, alot of pleths bars didn't really have anything to do with knowp, but he did have the personal about the FL gold, pretty vague though if you ask me.
Vote knowP
KnowP had some good personals, consistent attacking punches throughout the verse. A few decent concepts but nothing too catchy.
Plethora would of got my vote had he not made the whole verse about guns. The graduation line was dope but wasn't feeling the other ones. Def feelin plethoras style though. Good setups and scheme.
One of the better battles I've voted on since joining the site.
Good job both of you
knowp wins