Week 5: Kill Spree (1-1) vs Diso (1-0) Diso Wins

LLL Season 24

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Kill Spree @Diso

Going 10

Ok.

Need ext

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti

Broooo
you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level


idk fuck off

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
decent..
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
decent concept.. not a harsh execution for me though..
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
okay.. cool.. liked the idea..
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
again nice concept.. but just lacked execution..
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti
cool closer..

vs

you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
eh..
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
nice..
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
stretch for me..
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
lol.. wish u reworded this.. still funny though..
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
cool...
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level
fuck yourself..

Felt this was pretty evenly matched. But, I felt Sprees Chrit shoulder line slightly edged this for him. It could go either way but..

V/Kill

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
personally woulda left the word yeah out of there but this was a jab
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
dope
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
weak
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
solid
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti
not a fan

vs

you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
i looked up meyhem and literally nothing came up so dont know about this one
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
d compose is played and it was the same generic flip ive heard before
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
retardation is a huge animal? that doesn't make sense tome lol
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
lmao aight
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
dope
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level
weak

its a close one. couple solid hits from both but thought diso came a little more consistent.

v/ diso

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Diso

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
Cool jab.
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
This was decent.
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
Funny but kind of light.
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
This was a light jab.
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti
Light jab

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Broooo
you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
Decent jab.
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
See on D- compose angles. This felt kinda bland.
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
This was bad, bro.
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
Concept had potential, but I feel like the wording here leaves something to be desired.
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
This was fire.
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level
This was not good.


idk fuck off

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Close battle. Spree had the line of the battle easily, but had too many misses. Diso jabbed away, and edges this off if consistency.

Vote - Diso

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
i dont get the word/play...pull up a vest?
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
i dont think it's just me ... you need a better metaphor
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
what
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
know your audience .. who/what is disc?
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti
not good man..


Broooo
you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
what
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
this is madd forced
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
your wordplay is needs work... and it's spelled elegant and elephant
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
no hate...this really doesnt make sense
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
wordplay... not feeling this
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level
not funny


this is close but being that diso was first and all spree had to do was out shine..and he didnt... my vgt: Diso


diso

Still on my phone so no bar for bar but

Diso came with some clever bars but I don’t feel like they really connected as bars. Vested interest was cool, really liked the concept but all it really said was that you wanna smash his girl. Springboard was direct but didn’t quite connect, then lunch break and the last three were decent concepts but didn’t connect hard.

Spree’s concepts weren’t as tight except for deliver which was lotb for me, but they were more direct. Didn’t really get the action reference. Di compose was cool, people are saying it’s played and maybe it is but I haven’t seen those battles so I can’t really fault him for it on my end.

V/Spree

Seen ya girls pics, the kinda breasts I can fully cup
occasionally I got a vested interest, yeah when I want that bitch to pull it up
ehh not feelin that
get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff
lol aight
Stick to construction, no1 wants ya comeback is a hunch mate
If anyone radios in to 'get back to it'....its ya boss saying, 'youre finished ya lunch break'
decent, wording blipped a couple times
Following and dickriding all of nc, as a builder I'm finding sick
I heard of bringing ya work home, but u must spend ya whole day grinding disc
meh miss for me
Everyone knows ya girl, shes the type that makes spree cry
Kinda bitch with an entrance fee,...a bag of coke and every type of sti
aight i'll give it to ya

vs

you the wackest here, so theres no need for tactics
all your verses meyhem, for the fact you dont succeed W/Action
eh aight
your live rap? is wild crap! Fuck is this nerd?
w/e Di Compose? will get stashed w/his body under some dirt
i liked that, smooth
your bars dont make sense. I aint lyin your hella bent
Retardations a huge animal.. you should be banned as Elagant Elaphant
not feelin' this
Im drunk but strong!!!!!!! a half verse this shit over
squeeze your body till your neck smothers your head like chrit shoulder
lol'ed
this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door
aight, cool wordplay
My phone broke & i hate you! fuck this lame rebel...
Your bars have a higher trash accent than Mimics complain level
wording felt off here

It's pretty damn close to me but on an entertainment level I think I just enjoyed Spree more on this one.. Diso had a couple connects but didn't hit as direct to me, and spree's misses were better than diso's misses creatively imo

Vote Kill Spree

get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff

Vs

this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door

V. Diso … these were the best from both but Diso misses were much better this time around imo.

get slumped every week, need help or I fear you'll drift
even try n springboard ya career, with u sitting at the edge of the nearest cliff

Vs

this glock a package pop off! shoot to your gut, whore
put two in Deliver, they'll find your body @ the front door

Overall vote - Diso had the better verse here and his misses were a lot better than kills
Kills verse seemed alittle rushed this week & it showed.

5-3 Diso wins