RW QF: mal diction vs FaqEyeReddit (Faq wins)

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2 titans of the text battling scene, @mal diction & @FaQEyeReddit , face off in this much-anticipated quarter-final fight to the death. Not only do they battle for a place in the semi-final, but also for the title of “black guy who made it the furthest in Ransom Writers”. The winner will face the loser of the semi-final between Virbius & Jack Hallows.
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Quarter Final
Only 3 months later than expected

Bars due Tuesday 8th April
Voting ends Saturday 12th April
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MV’s vote = 2 pts

Bag's vote = 2 pts

Each public vote = 1 pt

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Post your references so you don't get jerked

No extensions & absolutely no sportsmanship

in..

You dont want malediction, so I’ll drop without a curse
Your male addiction’s leaving you dropping your drawers without a purse
Let's see.. you're long winded and not funny and taking nothing from me
You monkeyed. Found in the worse position; Uttanasana, with a bum knee(1
The Faq’s are, you’re wack tard, while I’m unseen like a fenced-in backyard
You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
No, no homo or pause needed because you love to have it hard
You had to start. Cus you hold semen high on your list like Bag Mandela’s avatar.
Step into my lyrical abattoir. get hostel coward and it’s you I’ll have to mar(2
Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.
So I'll leave with this, or leave you with that. You ain't seeing me in battle raps.
Battle’s a wrap. You only come close but are not seeing this heat like candle wax.


1)Monkeyed is slang:means to fool, tamper, or mess with something thoughtlessly or mischievously
Uttanasana: is a yoga pose(google it)
2)hostel : is a bizarre movie that came out in 2005

Check 5 min fine tune

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Do you dirty and beat you down wit, hollows and put a light over ya head til- “you reek’a violence”..
fuck it let’s murder ya blood line one by one til you see im wilding..
Ima give the whole family headstones- mal it’s Easter island..
What guns you pop? Bitch that shit is mad fiction..
Who ever selling cuz drugs should stop before I gotta make an example out this fool and crash wit’em..
Ima spin on this dead man walking- crash victim, I’ll catch him standing up in front the rounds like an AAA meeting and spazz wit’em cuz the moment I seen niggas was digging ya plot I knew I gotta add diction..
He really in a RUSH TO DIE ima do this -sad trick bad, for tryna play wit me, ima make him bleed..
Since you in a rush my guy- mal think fast!
LIVE WIRE in the tub, here pussy- TAKE THE LEAD..
Family think it's fake news until he on a NEWS PAPER REEL, like Disney they gotta put his body in the land- of MAKE BELIEVE..I’m not wit the wrestling shit, chopper rounds got bald heads in the clip, it’s Big Brody…
But I’m nice with the hands, get ya shit split homie…
You’ll get socked in the mouth with these fists I'm Mick Foley…

Dirty- light over head eureka you reek stink..
Easter island - world wonder with a large group of stone carving with the same head..
Standing Infront of rounds alcohol anonymous meetings and gun rounds..
Seen ppl digging ya plot- liking your story telling, digging ya grave plot plays two roles here .
Add diction I have an addiction or I have to add him since he been getting killed like a dead man walking..
Lead- lead wire or the hot wire with current in the tub electrocution death scene.. fam don't believe until he in the news bury him in the ground to make them believe also Disney land is the land of make believe..
Big Brody got famous for clips walking around screaming I got a bald head also gun rounds full metal jackets are bald heads or round point tipped.
Mick Foley is an American wrestler known for putting a sock in ya mouth as a finishing move

You dont want malediction, so I’ll drop without a curse
Your male addiction’s leaving you dropping your drawers without a purseHaha was not expecting that, great ice breaker
Let's see.. you're long winded and not funny and taking nothing from me
You monkeyed. Found in the worse position; Uttanasana, with a bum knee(1 That does indeed look like a fucked up position to be in
The Faq’s are, you’re wack tard, while I’m unseen like a fenced-in backyard
You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car flowed nicely, the idea of kicking fatties out the whip is joke too
No, no homo or pause needed because you love to have it hard haha
You had to start. Cus you hold semen high on your list like Bag Mandela’s avatar. ohhh shit lol I'll never look at it the same again
Step into my lyrical abattoir lets go get hostel coward and it’s you I’ll have to mar(2
Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.
So I'll leave with this, or leave you with that. You ain't seeing me in battle raps.
Battle’s a wrap. You only come close but are not seeing this heat like candle wax.okay okay

Vs

Do you dirty and beat you down wit, hollows and put a light over ya head til- “you reek’a violence”.. daaaamn, that took me a sec but eureka / light over ya head is super nice
fuck it let’s murder ya blood line one by one til you see im wilding..
Ima give the whole family headstones- mal it’s Easter island.. not bad
What guns you pop? Bitch that shit is mad fiction..
Who ever selling cuz drugs should stop before I gotta make an example out this fool and crash wit’em..decent
Ima spin on this dead man walking- crash victim, I’ll catch him standing up in front the rounds like an AAA meeting and spazz wit’em cuz the moment I seen niggas was digging ya plot I knew I gotta add diction..good nameflip, it's hard finding original takes on "diction" but I like this one
He really in a RUSH TO DIE ima do this -sad trick bad, for tryna play wit me, ima make him bleed..
Since you in a rush my guy- mal think fast!
LIVE WIRE in the tub, here pussy- TAKE THE LEAD..lets go
Family think it's fake news until he on a NEWS PAPER REEL, like Disney they gotta put his body in the land- of MAKE BELIEVE..I’m not wit the wrestling shit, chopper rounds got bald heads in the clip, it’s Big Brody…not haymakers but definitely keeping the momentum of the verse going well
But I’m nice with the hands, get ya shit split homie…
You’ll get socked in the mouth with these fists I'm Mick Foley…ahhh Faq why you have to end with that? The mick foley / socked in the mouth bar must be one of the most-used lines in battle rap, always put your best / 2nd best bar at the end, people can be swayed by that last impression you leave

Enjoyed this battle, mal was fuckin hilarious in places which was an approach I haven't seen from him to this extent but I fuck with it, Faq was consistent with it throughout & that Eureka bar was my favourite bar of the battle, although I think mal's semen bar will probably stay with me / haunt me for the foreseeable future. It's a close battle and may come down to preference with mal's being super clear-cut but amusing & Faq's being wordplay-heavy so I'm gonna leave it open til at least a couple of other people have voted but I'm gonna go with Faq on this, much respect to mal though, that was an experience.
Vote Faq
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@Jack Hallows @Virbius @Slayerr. @MV @EyeDealIstic help me out on the voting here please

You had to start. Cus you hold semen high on your list like Bag Mandela’s avatar.
Step into my lyrical abattoir. get hostel coward and it’s you I’ll have to mar(2
Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.
Vs
Who ever selling cuz drugs should stop before I gotta make an example out this fool and crash wit’em..
Ima spin on this dead man walking- crash victim, I’ll catch him standing up in front the rounds like an AAA meeting and spazz wit’em cuz the moment I seen niggas was digging ya plot I knew I gotta add diction..
But I’m nice with the hands, get ya shit split homie…
You’ll get socked in the mouth with these fists I'm Mick Foley…


Overall a decent battle, mal came direct and with a lot of light Jabs but not a real haymaker although those two bars I quoted were hard jabs. FAQ had a lot going on in his verse but I didn’t find it as direct as mals for the most part but his quotables were real nice, I’ve not heard mick foley line before so it’s fresh to me and I rated

V/faq

Quote:

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Originally Posted by mal diction

You dont want malediction, so I’ll drop without a curse
Your male addiction’s leaving you dropping your drawers without a purse
-No
Let's see.. you're long winded and not funny and taking nothing from me
You monkeyed. Found in the worse position; Uttanasana, with a bum knee
-Trash
The Faq’s are, you’re wack tard, while I’m unseen like a fenced-in backyard
You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
-What?
No, no homo or pause needed because you love to have it hard
You had to start. Cus you hold semen high on your list like Bag Mandela’s avatar.
-Trash
Step into my lyrical abattoir. get hostel coward and it’s you I’ll have to mar
Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.
-Trash
So I'll leave with this, or leave you with that. You ain't seeing me in battle raps.
Battle’s a wrap. You only come close but are not seeing this heat like candle wax.
-Trash lmao


1)Monkeyed is slang:means to fool, tamper, or mess with something thoughtlessly or mischievously
Uttanasana: is a yoga pose(google it)
2)hostel : is a bizarre movie that came out in 2005

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by FaQEyeReddit

Dirty- light over head eureka you reek stink..
Easter island - world wonder with a large group of stone carving with the same head..
Standing Infront of rounds alcohol anonymous meetings and gun rounds..
Seen ppl digging ya plot- liking your story telling, digging ya grave plot plays two roles here .
Add diction I have an addiction or I have to add him since he been getting killed like a dead man walking..
Lead- lead wire or the hot wire with current in the tub electrocution death scene.. fam don't believe until he in the news bury him in the ground to make them believe also Disney land is the land of make believe..
Big Brody got famous for clips walking around screaming I got a bald head also gun rounds full metal jackets are bald heads or round point tipped.
Mick Foley is an American wrestler known for putting a sock in ya mouth as a finishing move

None of these bars rhymed.

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Yall are both ass. Please stop trying to text battle rap.

Vote neither

YG, you’re aware you quoted FaQ’s explanation post, not his verse, right? Anyone else (except for KnoX) I’d assume they were trolling, but not so sure in your case.

Mal’s was amusing and his flow was clean, some nice wordplay elements. I like the variety in his verse. Dude’s shown a lot of growth over the course of the tourney which is to be commended.

FaQ’s had quite a lot more intricacy in the wordplay, which is something I fuck with. Really enjoyed his verse. I also appreciate the increased clarity of his writing recently, and glad he’s writing explanations now. Maybe a stylistic preference but I’ve got FaQ taking this one.

Vote- FaQ