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NEW FREE (LET YALL KnOW IM STILL FUCKIN KING!!!)
FREESTYLE...
hey yall, yes im back n on my new, KING made shit
crown with some jade shit, picture perfect how im portrayed bitch
trap house with a naked maid shit, trap doors for who invade shit
secret buttons on my lamp shade shit, big walls like i palisade shit
my trap smells just like drugs so hell yeah i glade shit
n im ninja'd up so i evade shit, with tha lights off i raid shit
my trap like an arcade shit, im tetris, i blockade shit
cut it with my blade shit, close as fuck, like a fade shit
my bricks, on that homemade shit, from ships like slave trade shit
i dont fuck with no pre-made shit, cuz its not whats displayed bitch
my life aint fair, but i dont care, i just do that spade shit
had to tip tha scales in my favor, so yeah i over weighted it
n he was lame as fuck, so yeah, he way over paid it
tha game is so payday, so for yay, i way over played it
my whip, a trip, looks like a cup of ice, with lemonade shit
transformer, never a virgin, tha way my top gets laid quick
drop tops like a window shade bitch, flip flop, leather to suede shit
n my rims roll how i tell em too, like they on that replayed shit
yeah im real nice, high price, but i do persuade shit
like yeah bitch, u can have my dick, as long as u paid shit
everywhere im obeyed bitch, n i like gurls with golden braid shit
n hoes with that fire head, that make me wish i had stayed shit
i keep my guns real close, mayn they like my first aid kit
but truthfully, i rarely bust, cuz if they saw it, they'd shit
i call my guns stoves n pans, so dont get sauteed bitch
u better be afraid bitch, i got missiles aimed, with no delayed shit
all my life i prayed shit, finally got off my ass n made shit
n yeah GOD is good, but so are drugs, n i wanted to get paid shit
n fuck with some Beyonce hoes, so dude, i had to upgrade shit
my heart is dead, n my soul, as a whole, its decayed bitch
n its been over a decade bitch, since i was considered okay-ed bitch
im hidin like a masquerade bitch, n im on a mission like a crusade bitch
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA yall get at me bout this...im curious if yall think im holdin my crown down round my town...digg that...n get at ya boy!!! :salute:
- THA TRAP KING aka CAPN TRAP SPARROW
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...933/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...911/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...020/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...986/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...543/index.html
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Re: NEW FREE (LET YALL KnOW IM STILL FUCKIN KING!!
How many times did you say Shit?
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lol idk...alot...no good feedback?!
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lol dammit give me some feed back u fuckers!!!
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Haha aight.
It definitely felt like a freestyle called "LET YALL KNOW IM STILL FUCKING KING!!!". There were a few lines that made me grin, but not really any that were so dope they made of go "oh shit!". The multi's were there (though most of them were the word "shit") so it had that auditory consistency that's nice to listen to but kind of funny to look at - hence my original response.
Overall, for me it was an above average "self glorifying" verse that was pretty good stylistically and that is definitely summed up in this threads title.
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lol so do i hold my crown?...ive been gone for a min...n i need to make sure im still doing it right...
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yes, you are the king of trap music.. which still blows, and you still help it to blow... you said the word SHIT like a hundred times which wasn't creative at all, and in some places, it didn't even make any sense at all. BITCH <<< that word too... too much...
I've told you to be creative before, I mean... you have a better grasp on multies, but now you have an issue with using the same word... freestyle or not..
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it was aight
nothin complex but the flow was consistantly on point,which i gotta add was helped by the word shit in every bar..
but still it was cool
you aint no king but this peice would of been better as audio
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lol aint no KING?!...got dammit...yall gonna make me kill someone...
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lol Word... I think you used the words shit and bitch way too much. It's just not creative when you're rhyming with the same words over and over. There was potential for some lines to come out good, but were ruined with the shit/bitch endings. I'd suggest cut that out and spend more time on wording your lyrics. Also not being so repetitive with the words you're rhyming with.
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WTF yall talkin bout?!...i did that on purpose...im not no novice piece of shit wanna rapper...dude i know i over used it...idc tho...cuz i didnt over use tha first enders...yall get it?...just ignore my shit/bitch/it parts then...since yall wanna be suck fags bout it...
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Too bad for you, everybody knows that I'm the only fucking king of OM. Stick with audio dude... 'cus your topicals blow anal.
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TOPICAL? u wish...this was a free...nothing more nothing less...
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nice use of compound syllables n sound combined. i like the repeatishen with shit.
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lol why is everyone hung up on that?...i really dont get it...just enjoy my GOT DAM LINES!!!
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Because that's what wrecked all your got damn lines.
Honestly, you sound like every other generic, hustle/pimp/hoes/guns-influenced cock stain, that doesn't use intelligence to make music, they use colours and paint by numbers.
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lol my trap is paint by numbers...oh thats funny n u lames dont even get it...weakness...
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you used shit and bitch a lot in this free.....why?you didn't wanna put forth the effort or is that how you freestyle in real life when you cypher and shit?
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nah its just this flow im playing round with...i use many different styles...i just went that route on this piece...
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I don't get it? What, like I can't understand the lyrics you write, or the words you use? The fact that you said that proves, that you didn't and understand what I just said.. You have an ego the size of a watermelon, but have talent the size of a grape.
You're fucking completely correct, to understand the shit you write, and I use the word "shit" for a reason (many actually), I would need to be in a fucking self induced coma, from drinking Drano, while reading faggots like you, who came up with the concept that "shit" would be dope to put at the end of every single fucking line.
FUCK, the worst part is, YOU'RE not the mother fucker who came up with it. It's been used by thousands of wack rappers, and internet textcee's before you and you're just imitating them, because you have absolutely zero imagination, or creativity.
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Originally Posted by
DJKingDavid
like ur cock?...awwwww sry bitch...VD must suck...
I'm just quoting this towards further proof that you lack intelligence, creativity, or any of your own thoughts. You're just a recycling garbage can.
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whoa...no creativity?...thats def not true...but i suppose if yall gonna hate on this piece becuz of how i decided to say shit alot...thats fuckin lame...cuz this kills on AUDIO...ive already spit it...
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Then why didn't you put it in the audio forum? Cause that would make a lot more sense... fuck'tard.
And too be honest, we've ALL heard a hundred songs just like this one. So you'll get clowned there too.
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i see...well say what u will...
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is this in the audio sextion??you said youve already recorded it.
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ok for a free but didn't enjoy it...one reason was the theme...second reason..u were always rhymin shit with shit or bitch....u should do more thought out verses...this is kinda weak and very generic..yea it's a free but anyone can do better than rhymin shit with shit over and over again....
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OMFG last time i post anything for these UNGRATEFUL bitches...i hope u know ur all fuckin faggets...dont ever fuckin talk to me ever again...
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Originally Posted by
DJKingDavid
OMFG last time i post anything for these UNGRATEFUL bitches...i hope u know ur all fuckin faggets...dont ever fuckin talk to me ever again...
I'm quoting that so when you edit it... out of embarrassment.
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... this is all i saw man,
"shit shit shit shit shit, i'm the king and i eat shit. i watch my dog take shits. i don't wipe after i take shits. i get mad and break shit. scuff on my j's, 'cause it's fake shit. last night for dinner i ate shit. my momma's cookin' taste like shit. my girlfriend a dyke bitch. see that, last line i didn't use shit."
like, i'm not better then you, but a majority of the cats on this website are. seeing you come through with something that's complete shit, like this trash, is ignorant, like everyone told you. you come through spitting arrogance like every other mainstream rapper in rap. like i said, i'm no better then you, but a get a grip dude.
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same old same old...yall know im trying to sound like JEEZY n TIP
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why try to sound like a shitty rapper....you sound shitty enough on your own
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lol wow...a shitty rapper huh?...well this is why i love rap battles...cuz u haters just inspire me so much...i love it...ill fuckin shit on all of u!!!
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You don't "Shit" on anyone but yourself posting this.
What do you expect.? oh my god your amazing.
Shit if I wanted too hear someone sounding like T.I. or Jeezy.
I'd think I'd go to youtube and type "T.i. or Jeezy"
Man if your gonna ride someone's swag at least pick someone worth riding.
Leave this shit too your home boys and your beats.
O.m. is for lyricist's. And obviously. That name just don't fit you.
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I love how your attitude changes so irregularly. Fucking mood swings like a crackhead.
I see no inspiration in anything you write. Just repetition.
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Let me Getttum!, Let me Gettum :] hahaha.
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he has the look of heavy meth addiction in his whole facial region
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dam yall are so pathetic...i mean really yall think imma NO TALENT?...u must be kiddin me...cuz im signed n i have a mixtape droppin...not to mention im in a dope ass crew...n i got more street credit then all u lil fagget ass emotional/poetic wanna be rappers...
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you show absolutely no talent on this site