10 Lines
Due sometime tonight
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10 Lines
Due sometime tonight
I just posted my verse in the other thread..
i can't delete or edit my thread, and i can't post my verse twice so just post in the other thread
His Verse
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Originally Posted by slicktr1ckz
agreed, to re-schedule. close this
I didn't agree to reschedule. you didn't ask for any kind of extension. i posted my verse, you didn't. voters can i get a DQ or what?
haha, gimme 5 min. I like the bitch move tho pussy
Resort'll be quick to knock you out it would only take a hit
Im not talking snow days when I say you'll see the sidewalk, slick
nobody wants to be you see your style is wack as hell
If i tried to be slick, I'd resort to dq's as a way to give a dude an L
one word and you'll die quick, another and youll get ur bitch dropped
so we wont be playing horse, when you see this trick shot
killing you wont be so hard, my goon's glady take a stab at it
except when my boys cut you in half, it wont be magic tr1ckz
but in a way were partners, dont act surprised or be clueless
see you can just take the beat N... wait for the bruises
ill drop links later, in case you try to d
fuck a bitch move, your clown ass kept delaying your verse! decent drop though lets get some votes
its my primary mission to leave last resort with a bad score,
papa roach bitch, i'm cuttin you in pieces left under boards
i dont see the punch, seems lke you rhymed a bunch of words
you just a farmer, conjuring mixed vegetables in tar-pits
your produce is putrid, even starving artists refuse the harvest
alright
no hope of a deity, i'm bring blasphemy blast you back to middle English,
you livin by mark 3:29 and i stay bending this confined mind with evil ish
its orginal, but its streched
I blow the frozen snow in blizzards on top of Everest,
while you plummet with Mallory straight to eternal rest
meh
Homicide? nah i'm bringing cyanide suicide, and this masochist likes the shit
this is do or die, how you gunna win in the bathtub with your wrists slit?
not a good finisher
Resort'll be quick to knock you out it would only take a hit
Im not talking snow days when I say you'll see the sidewalk, slick
ok
nobody wants to be you see your style is wack as hell
If i tried to be slick, I'd resort to dq's as a way to give a dude an L
its alright, but ive heard it before
one word and you'll die quick, another and youll get ur bitch dropped
so we wont be playing horse, when you see this trick shot
meh
killing you wont be so hard, my goon's glady take a stab at it
except when my boys cut you in half, it wont be magic tr1ckz
could have been better worded
but in a way were partners, dont act surprised or be clueless
see you can just take the beat N... wait for the bruises
meh
got lost in all the free post, lol, well ill give the win to last resrt, cause he did a personal, and flow was more steady, slick, you streched your bars, you had it for a few moments, but then you got lost, anyways good looking out
V/Last
you just a farmer, conjuring mixed vegetables in tar-pits
your produce is putrid, even starving artists refuse the harvest
no hope of a deity, i'm bring blasphemy blast you back to middle English,
you livin by mark 3:29 and i stay bending this confined mind with evil ish
vs
Resort'll be quick to knock you out it would only take a hit
Im not talking snow days when I say you'll see the sidewalk, slick
nobody wants to be you see your style is wack as hell
If i tried to be slick, I'd resort to dq's as a way to give a dude an L
one word and you'll die quick, another and youll get ur bitch dropped
so we wont be playing horse, when you see this trick shot
decently close but i got last resort taking this with more consistency. he had more hits imo. slick came with some ok lines but it wasnt enough for this win,
v/last
uppp
Nothing
vs
Everything was pretty much consistent. The verse two bars really caught my attention and the third and fourth were alright! But I was really feeling the closer...either way LR takes this by a landslide.
v/LR
no hope of a deity, i'm bring blasphemy blast you back to middle English,
you livin by mark 3:29 and i stay bending this confined mind with evil ish
vs
Resort'll be quick to knock you out it would only take a hit
Im not talking snow days when I say you'll see the sidewalk, slick
v/resort ..i thought his hits came stronger
you just a farmer, conjuring mixed vegetables in tar-pits
your produce is putrid, even starving artists refuse the harvest
no hope of a deity, i'm bring blasphemy blast you back to middle English,
you livin by mark 3:29 and i stay bending this confined mind with evil ish
VS.
Resort'll be quick to knock you out it would only take a hit
Im not talking snow days when I say you'll see the sidewalk, slick
nobody wants to be you see your style is wack as hell
If i tried to be slick, I'd resort to dq's as a way to give a dude an L
overall Vote - Last Resort, he was alittle more polished from the two, and enjoyed reading his verse better executed personals he had lesser evils from the two. Slick had a decent but basic verse IMO. wasnt feeling like his execution was crisp when it could of been.
upp,
again
you just a farmer, conjuring mixed vegetables in tar-pits
your produce is putrid, even starving artists refuse the harvest
vs.
one word and you'll die quick, another and youll get ur bitch dropped
so we wont be playing horse, when you see this trick shot
killing you wont be so hard, my goon's glady take a stab at it
except when my boys cut you in half, it wont be magic tr1ckz
last resort came more consistent overall in this one. no hate. slicktricks, i liked that bar i quoted from u, keep ur bars like that n ull elevate, keep battlin tho both.
v - last resort