Keystyle

I wanna get up in the game and put up the lames that's in it/
I thought Foxy, Kim, Eve, and Shauna was the only fuckin' women/
Up in it, but now you got, Bonecrusher and David Banner/
Niggas comin' from Memphis all the way down to Atlanta/
Ja Rule is the fool that'll never keep it true/
A 2Pac and X wannabe thinkin' his shit is cool/
Rollin' wit' a crew that'll only murder in games/
Like FPSs, I bet a lot of 'em ain't even "heard of dem thangs"/
It's all good though, 'cause my plan is to get in and stay/
I'm from the hood yo', and I always plan to stay that way/
Back to my plans, I'm sick of these newcomin' bitches/
That be broke virgins talkin' 'bout hittin' women and switches/
Don't know the half of what they say, so I laugh at what they say/
Then I combat what they say then shoot from mags aimin' that way/
I know I'm on a mission, but a lot of people be missin'/
That in this world, you gotta hold your own or be kissin'/
Death in the mouth, but it ain't happenin' to me/
I'm just blastin' little things and straight up whackin' all of these/
Wannabe emcees, peep the things I'm tryin' to put out/
'Cause everything these mothafuckas have just put out/
Are blown out of proportion, as if so many of 'em is dope/
The only dope I know from 'em is what they snortin' up they nose/
Thinkin' that the things they say is relevent/
But peep the alliteration in the last line and find that my shit's intelligent/
Negligence has been stompin' through the game so much/
That's why so many of these rappers really ain't so much/
To deal wit'; a line from this would kill David Banner's album/
Crush Bonecrusher's bones and send his ass back to Atlanta/
Yeah, I'm just lettin' out all of my feelins and such/
Just to let all these niggas know: If they step up they'll get fucked up!










Post some feedback...it's kind of me letting of steam towards wack MC's and newbies in the game...

Good way to start your reputation on here...lol..I thought it was good...and you poured yourself into it...

peAce

As Shiznit said in your other piece. Read the rules. Only allowed 2 pieces on front page at a time (of one's own accord).

Still, easy mistake to make i guess, welcome to RB.

CLOSED FOR NOW.