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Originally Posted by Stranger
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Originally Posted by cookies
Stranger liked the first 3 bars then fell off after that
Cookies liked most ur verse but last 2 bars missed
V/Cookies
Vote-Cookies
Stranger nice 4 opening lines. I was digging the flour line/blocked 866 area code lines. The rest was ok. I think the curses hurt you more then they helped you. The wit displayed in your verses makes me feel like the curses were just quick cop outs. Let your pen go to work son.
Cookies I liked every other line in your verse. That was pretty consistent for me throughout the read. The first bar was setting up your second. It was enough to take this one.
Dia: head held high, opener ok, a bit simple. 866 had potential but again too basic imo. Didn't like some others tbh.
Cookies: More consistent here..Opener felt like you were trolling, Beethoven was OK. Cosplay was funny, Ronins PMs was oook. Last 2 were familiar.
V- Cookies
Stranger
He’s missing main ingredients, so damn this fucker for even testing me.
How the fuck u a cookie when there’s not a gram of butter in ya recipe.
Weak diss
Said u would hang yaself if you lose, don’t do it cuz you dread fail guy.
Guess that’s the only way you’ll go back to NC with your head held high.
"cuz you dread fail guy" is a reach to make it rhyme. Concept is ok
Ur skill level equals my minutes in brisk walk, my fucking shadow is doper.
Only one to take my reign is the admin that bans him b4 the battle is over.
Wtf at the setup... also, saying anybody could take your reign, even as part of the wp, is weak
You ain’t a cookie, you’re a flour/flower, the bottom is where ur placement is.
Man I hate this bitch, I’ll just fucking block his ass, like his area code is 866.
Did you really just write flour/flower. This flows well, but aint really a diss. The setup hit harder
You would never please a bitch, if one rejects you she’s passing up garbage.
It’s shameful the vibrator lasted longer, esp when it didn’t have enough charges.
I'm assuming u sayin she still wouldn't choose him even if she didn't have batteries? If so, poorly worded.
I don’t fuck with gunplay, fact is I witnessed more than this sissy faggot seen.
But if they predict zelph to blast me, that’s more reason to empty magazines.
Cool
Magazines the best bar if I had to pick. The verse as a whole flows well enough. The wording is up and down, and a lot of these punches simply didn't hit.
4/10
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Cookies
They bashed you in the mag, said you couldn’t win & u started gettin mushy
So that’ll be something for uterus solve on ur own, are u puzzled pussy?
Good wp, lazy punch. Subpar opener
Y’all have 1 shot to give this lame notice...I’ll be outside w the thang smokin
Either catch u out front or the big dogs runnin through ur crib like Beethoven
Aight
Dude has a face that could turn any broad gay...& if we mention ur bod...hey
You took an innocent game of Hungry Hungry Hippos and turned it into cosplay
Ok-ish, didn't need the whole 'innocent game' bit
Saddest fagit ever, u cheated against Useless & begged us not to believe him
give ur wife tht treatment, I’ll be all up in the hoes privates like they were Ronins PMs
Even if I knew who Ronin was, this was meh. The wife part was forced in there, had nothing to do with the set up.
He swears he’s been on a health binge, we caught him lyin’ so he’s hurt now
This is personal training.. the P90 will leave u shredded without the workout
Flows great but gun bars are meh
1v1 I’ll destroy u all day. Quick n easy, who said it would be a long fade?
So I’ll either blow ur top off or leave ur mouth stuck in ur cheek like Conway
Cool
Your closer and the hippo line were straight. Beethoven was aight. The rest were bad for their own reasons.
5/10
Not a single line in this battle blew me away. Cookies had more memorable lines, and a tad more consistency in his attempts.
Vote: Cookies
Stranger
He’s missing main ingredients, so damn this fucker for even testing me.
How the fuck u a cookie when there’s not a gram of butter in ya recipe.
Mehh...I chuckled tho
Said u would hang yaself if you lose, don’t do it cuz you dread fail guy.
Guess that’s the only way you’ll go back to NC with your head held high.
setup multi is horrendous...but i dig the punch...like bars like this
Ur skill level equals my minutes in brisk walk, my fucking shadow is doper.
Only one to take my reign is the admin that bans him b4 the battle is over.
reign rain has been done too many times and is at the point it's unusable in any flip
You ain’t a cookie, you’re a flour/flower, the bottom is where ur placement is.
Man I hate this bitch, I’ll just fucking block his ass, like his area code is 866.
goooone at the setup... Nah
You would never please a bitch, if one rejects you she’s passing up garbage.
It’s shameful the vibrator lasted longer, esp when it didn’t have enough charges.
he is a minute man at best so this is a fire personal
I don’t fuck with gunplay, fact is I witnessed more than this sissy faggot seen.
But if they predict zelph to blast me, that’s more reason to empty magazines.
very tired flip that was so so
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Cookies
They bashed you in the mag, said you couldn’t win & u started gettin mushy
So that’ll be something for uterus solve on ur own, are u puzzled pussy?
lmao so bad....obv cotic troll is obv
Y’all have 1 shot to give this lame notice...I’ll be outside w the thang smokin
Either catch u out front or the big dogs runnin through ur crib like Beethoven
this is terrible .. might have been half decent if the movie didn't come out before you were born
Dude has a face that could turn any broad gay...& if we mention ur bod...hey
You took an innocent game of Hungry Hungry Hippos and turned it into cosplay
what?
Saddest fagit ever, u cheated against Useless & begged us not to believe him
give ur wife tht treatment, I’ll be all up in the hoes privates like they were Ronins PMs
a private party / private msg meta....is this 03? Personal noted but fuck you
He swears he’s been on a health binge, we caught him lyin’ so he’s hurt now
This is personal training.. the P90 will leave u shredded without the workout
what?
1v1 I’ll destroy u all day. Quick n easy, who said it would be a long fade?
So I’ll either blow ur top off or leave ur mouth stuck in ur cheek like Conway
Conway like the trcukign company? Anyways really gay that you said you wanted to blow the top of his dick in the setup
Dia had a couple solid bars that was enough to win this one....Zelphs usually a beast but dunno what happened here, not a good verse and the troll intro showed he doesn't have the will to win
Vote Stranded
4-1 cook wins