Next piece: "Pain"

What u know about pain, slicin ya wrist..u sicka da rain//
About livin everyday in vane..decay..and watchin ya closest bein slain//
What you know about walkin through life eyes straight ahead//
Family doesn’t know doc’s pronounce you mentally dead//
A monotone beat plays through ya head//
Ya wake up and think back to days u could recall//
A time where you could remember joy, where u could play ball//
Times where you could walk through the streets and not worry should the angel’s call//
And not have to worry should your brother fall//
You couldn’t imagine things in my life that I’ve saw//
Night..day..snow..rain, they all the same, they all the game//
They all still pain, they all for fame, naw they all for name//
They all for respect//
Yall wouldn’t know wat its like to work for a check//
Yall wouldn’t know what its like to live by the teck//
All u know about is what industry kats say in ya deck//
That aint gangsta they neva seen life//
They neva seen sorrow, They never seen strife//
Pain is forever, u cant end it with a slice//
Pain is eternal, wont end with a blow to the chest//
Pain will never end, so move along with the rest……








don't sleep on this...post some feedback

I really feel the emotion in this peace...Parts of it was kinda simple...but overall it was nice ;) Keep it up...

peAce

yes it is good. but you might consider peeping the rules first.