Week 1: Fresh (0-0) vs. Bahriman (0-0) - FRESH WINS

LLL Season 24

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Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Fresh @Bahriman

10.

10 sounds good

@Fresh @Bahriman

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision

Fresh Aka Point Blank

Quote:

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Originally Posted by amen

you mean your wife with the flattest ass in history? Lower back and butt cheeks are the same bro

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All laughs dummy^^^
I fuck your flat hunny. Spank her like she be bad
Funny 1 hand print starts @‘er spine & ends @ the back of her knee caps
I got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
Probably rage quit to. This for big dogs so enough with this man!
Or I’ll keep point to the ground repeatedly, like practicing puppy commands
I’m a Wulf in these parts. Yet you never heard of me, hoe
Homicide’ll look for Blankensee his body was dumped off a Germany coast
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
The punchline is a little choppy but decent concept
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
nah
u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
Decent concept
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
Ive seen the concept before, but cool
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision
The setup is clunky as fuck... fix that and itd be cool

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All laughs dummy^^^
I fuck your flat hunny. Spank her like she be bad
Funny 1 hand print starts @‘er spine & ends @ the back of her knee caps
Nah...
I got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
No
Probably rage quit to. This for big dogs so enough with this man!
Or I’ll keep point to the ground repeatedly, like practicing puppy commands
I mean... its a concept... just not a good one
I’m a Wulf in these parts. Yet you never heard of me, hoe
Homicide’ll look for Blankensee his body was dumped off a Germany coast
Nah
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life
Eh... wording ruined this

v/Fresh and it wasn't close

u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
Thought this was ur best bar.

vs

I thought the ur last bar had potential, the rest just fell flat to me

Vote / Fresh

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Fresh

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
cool
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
I like the wordplay, wording was choppy in the punch
u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
cool
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
Nice. best line from you
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision
Nah this one's a miss

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Bahriman

Fresh Aka Point Blank
All laughs dummy^^^
I fuck your flat hunny. Spank her like she be bad
Funny 1 hand print starts @‘er spine & ends @ the back of her knee caps
Miss
I got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
decent
Probably rage quit to. This for big dogs so enough with this man!
Or I’ll keep point to the ground repeatedly, like practicing puppy commands
Not feeling this
I’m a Wulf in these parts. Yet you never heard of me, hoe
Homicide’ll look for Blankensee his body was dumped off a Germany coast
miss
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life
Could've been decent but the delivery was off

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I got Fresh here... both were a breath of fresh air after some of the verses I saw this week, but Bah's wording threw me off. Fresh's verse was cleaner all around.

v/Fresh

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
lmao I really liked this. Thought the wording/execution was great. Good bar
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
took me a minute but this was pretty cool once it clicked
u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
nah not feelin
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
alright
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision
nah


Vs



All laughs dummy^^^
I fuck your flat hunny. Spank her like she be bad
Funny 1 hand print starts @‘er spine & ends @ the back of her knee caps
not sure what’s happening here
I got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
light jab
Probably rage quit to. This for big dogs so enough with this man!
Or I’ll keep point to the ground repeatedly, like practicing puppy commands
had potential but nah
I’m a Wulf in these parts. Yet you never heard of me, hoe
Homicide’ll look for Blankensee his body was dumped off a Germany coast
nah
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life
ok solid closer


Thought this battle was pretty one sided. Fresh had some nice material and a couple of misses, but bah didn’t drop too hot and almost everything missed. I think Bahriman will pick it back up next week but for now..


Vote Fresh

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty

vs.

got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life

I got fresh here, bahriman is there but fresh was more solid thoroughly

u aint a wolf ur a sheep, n' no one knows ya name so im destined to sweep
you dont hear bah too often.. in fact everyone in the world is getting excellent sleep
okay... wording could have been better
bro your entire crew can get laid out by hands when I exhibit mine
i'll just walk up to demonstratin their shit out like I ran a van through a picket line
dont get it
u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
elastic ... could have been worded better and who is E
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
really bad wording.. very forced
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision
not feeling this closer

I fuck your flat hunny. Spank her like she be bad
Funny 1 hand print starts @‘er spine & ends @ the back of her knee caps
better than fresh's .. str8 diss
I got Elephant gun punches, while this bum-dudes ain’t sting
Only thing Elegant With Fresh? Is both them head to head in 1-2 rankings
ha ha.. okay str8
Probably rage quit to. This for big dogs so enough with this man!
Or I’ll keep point to the ground repeatedly, like practicing puppy commands
who is point.. good wordplay
I’m a Wulf in these parts. Yet you never heard of me, hoe
Homicide’ll look for Blankensee his body was dumped off a Germany coast
wording could have been better
You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life
cool diss and closer

i got bahriman winning this ... better wording and disses

vote -bah

u about to get fucked up, soon youll see there's no doubt or conjecture
we'll see how long 'Elastin this season when hes leaving this bout in a Stretcher
Or just no show, ud actually gain more respect, plus we see plenty
or u can try n win, suture self.. but you'll probably need at least twenty
i heard ur mom sells nudes for grocery stamps, what a decision
someone oughta give that horror due.. n its funny thats what u get from the vision

Vs.

You use to be cool. Everyone thought this rat was so tight
The new fresh is just a Stranger, the way your just a hack job with no life

V/ Fresh for better punches

Fresh Wins 7-0