Im a wannbe rapper!!!!!!

I got no more money, where the fuck my sences-at
Im a demented-cat with Rented-rapz
I basicaly take em from grim, get rich and spend-the-cash
Buy a house, 3 carz and use the rest-fa-gas
The copz chasin me, fuck i left-the-mag
Why they fuckin trippin, just cause im dressed-in-draged
Plus IRS is after me cuz I guess my Check-is-bad
& The Cripz pissed cuz I blew a bloodly nose in their bandana and left-the-rag
Red-with-black
Im like a Head-less-cat with no Neck-attached
Im sayin im a spineless pussy, Fame..Id never fuck with that
Only battlez I win are with a Techincality-flow
Even if some how My Salery-growz
Ill prolly end up just a retired fat man doing reality-showz

roflmao........roflmao................CLOSED

I Luv Your Flow Dude!

OMFG!!! No you can't be a rapper, not rapping like that. You need E-L-E-V-A-T-I-O-N. First off, fix ya flow. Then work on rhyming. Then work on your vocab, then fuckin ,ake your lyrics dope. The elevate until you've reached the top. thankyoubuhbyepleasedie!

kiss azz crazt

Neva drop shit like this agian.

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Originally Posted by Miss Clitoria Cummings

OMFG!!! No you can't be a rapper, not rapping like that. You need E-L-E-V-A-T-I-O-N. First off, fix ya flow. Then work on rhyming. Then work on your vocab, then fuckin ,ake your lyrics dope. The elevate until you've reached the top. thankyoubuhbyepleasedie!

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ur so wrong and harsh...............................U FUCKING SUCK DUDE *nominates for worst open mic of month*

I'll vote for that do you wanna buy tha plaque???

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Originally Posted by Rizzo

ur so wrong and harsh...............................U FUCKING SUCK DUDE *nominates for worst open mic of month*

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lmao and you say i'm harsh??? *dead*

Close this shit...now!!!!!!!!!!

u got multies....Butttttttttttttttttt...........thatz it..... you twist everything to suit the multiez u come up with and it showzzzzzzz....And Alot of the so-called multies u got the dashes in....a forced like a muthafucka....... Tryin using an actual concept/topic and following it instead of letting ya rhymez guide ya next time......


this will get closed though......... check the rulez before u post again

hahaha you vatoz swear like i care....and i think itz funny because im tryin to get banned from this site...and i have been...i keep droping freestylez without postin linkz...and u guyz never close it...you some stupid motha fuckaz...hahahahaahahahahahahahahaah

no, we jus enjoy clowning herbs like you

wow
u set urself up
it was stupid to begin with
u first off need mad elevation , u have horrible flo , and ur structure is way off . the topic was sooooo stupid , maybe i cud give u a few multis and u rhymed but it was mostly shit
but u can always improve

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Originally Posted by SoloSleepy

hahaha you vatoz swear like i care....and i think itz funny because im tryin to get banned from this site...and i have been...i keep droping freestylez without postin linkz...and u guyz never close it...you some stupid motha fuckaz...hahahahaahahahahahahahahaah

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lmao....why not just leave.... Idiot....lmao...your dropping Oms to get banned...ahhaha..moron... how bout u PM an admin and say...uh........ 'Can u bann me????'... think that would work better u ignorant fuck

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