Blais "Were Still Cutting In Line"

what up dudes n dudettes, please tell me what u think of this .

FREESTYLE SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uKtgz4zK_zI



Links
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...se-Logic-Beast
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...feat-Cody-Nash

First off...

Turn off autotune... its fucking terrible and makes you sound way worse than your actually voice would have sounded.

Flow is really choppy... not necessarily riding the beat very well or really finding a pocket. But at points you do... its weird.

Lyrically this is empty calories... not really any good punchlines or message

And this is not a freestyle... you have a fucking hook lmao

Yeah... can't say Id ever listen to this again...


Keep at it