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Killing It
I done came along ways, done alot things I'm not proud of.
Corrected alot of people, who thought they knew wat I was about cuz.
You can think watcha wanna think, I'mma get this money.
Shit is funny, reason why he can't exceed, is cause this bitch is a dummy.
Cause even I get hungrey, Somewhere in life it gets sunny.
You can be at the bottom and be an important piece like in rummy.
I'mma light a black and mild, attack ya style.
Hit ya so hard wit a line, your fly back a mile, I'll juss laugh and smile.
Grad ya bitch, see all the money, and grab a pile.
Stomp you and use the hair on ya head to wax the tile.
Paraniod like drug extortion, crazy like doctors who love abortion.
Paid in half a thugs portion, to kill you and to us that's important.
Doesn't matter who's supportin' RB, it's still a piece of shit.
The dick ridin' be a bitch and alot of people on here love to eat a dick.
So step ya game up, come holla at a pro, I'll be here all day.
Cause ya'llz girls say your dicks small, like a mobile homes hall way.
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u need 2 links or its closed
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crazy like doctors who love abortion.
^^swear that sounds fimiliar^^ not accusin but i think ive heard it somewhere.
This piece was a downsize to your last one. the rhymin in this piece was pretty simple except for.
Paraniod like drug extortion, crazy like doctors who love abortion.
Paid in half a thugs portion, to kill you and to us that's important.
^thats the best line ive seen you throw son for real. but to be honest with you. the rest was a little played out. alot of cats have said they hated rb..but still..they never leave. its ok to call cats fake. but to understand what real is you have to get the knowledge from the real.. so you have to know whos fake and whos real before you decide yourself. the flow was tight. the lines were a little stretched out. try an keep them a little shorter. it makes the flow tighter and readers feel the flow. overall, although the topic is kinda played. ill give you a 7/10 cause your startin to elevate. keep droppin kid.
-Peace.
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tHIS SHIT IS wicy wicy wack!!!!!
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this really wasn't very good at all,I didn't like the structure that you used it was basic and very noobish,your vocab was seriously bad, you need to learn some new words dude....I think you do have a lot of potential but you need to elevate big time...read SS verse and the tutorials to help you with that....keep dropping...peace
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uppin w.e bitches go fuck your moms or somethin
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nice multies here and there. nice rhymes.
nice flow. topic was alright i guess...
Complexity could be upped same with vocab
just keep at it man. peace~
