Week 4: Ryno (1-3) vs. Elegant Elephant (0-1) - RYNO WINS

Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.


@Ryno @Elegant Elephant

By any measure, you're not in reach; by far
and not seeing E, like the first letter on, Stevie Wonder's sight chart

U think ur bars super kid? Nah, I’m the Hitman here to part loser’s lids
The closest u’ll be to having a leg up this match, is me snapping it w/ a sharpshooter bitch

Elephant, I dig the concept. I think it could have been worded differently to maximize said potential, but even as is its a serviceable jab.

Ryno. This wasnt bad. Wasnt great either. The concept is okay, but this was set up & delivered really well. Overall a decent jab.

I like Elephant's concept more, but dont feel like he generated much sting. Ryno executed his concept better, and did a little more damage.

Vote - Ryno

I think E’s commas and wording hurt his concept a little but I also genuinely did like his concept more. Felt he coulda had a zinger here and fell short. Ryno had a good setup and punch, enough to take the W and execute his wording correctly. I wanted to vote for E but it was super close because of the wording issue for me.

Vote Ryno

Was digging rynos a bit more.

E had a good attempt though

Vote ryno

Elegant had an impressive bar but it was more self praising than a diss. Ryno had a solid 1-2 punch

Vote- ryno

Both had good punchlines,I dig both.
ryno came out lil bit harder compare to Elegant
Vote Ryno

E’s bar was one of the better I’ve seen from him. Needed to be harsher and worded better

I fuck with Ey is though sharp shooter/hitman concepts done been played this angle was simple and crisp

V/Ry

Elephant not bad at all, I actually liked it besides the Stevie wonder part. Ryno had a better bar though and takes this one pretty smoothly


Vote Ryno

i didnt 100% like ryno's bar but I also didn't get elegants bar., doesnt read smoothly & lacks a punch there. ryno the winner here

Ryno Wins 8-0