FL Contender Series: Bahriman Vs Elegant Elephant Vs Knoxville ( Bahriman Wins )

Rules:
10 lines min
16 lines max
unless agreed otherwise by opponents
due wednesday


@Bahriman @Elegant Elephant @KnoXville.

Check. Keep it at 10

ten is fine

You dudes are lunchmeat, I promise, you’ve never touched heat.
With y'all sub-lines/sublime I guarantee you’ll never be above me.
Saying ten lines.. Thanks kid fine.
I’m from a small town called spit box, and I dare y'all... get in line!
You dudes have no clues, beat down, done like I don't know you..
You’re like dude! who cloned you, got lines like prison phones do..
You peons get peed on need I preach on..
Chest-nuts and wall-nuts… balls on ya chin?? Need y’all speak on?
So next time you 2 sign up for a tourney, use caution, I boss son!
U F’ed C!! it’s about two squares out the ring ate like slaw son!

Just seen this check

Knoxville aka rican Theory

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Originally Posted by KnoXville

So whats up Pussy Im In Fitchburg nigga don’t be talking tough online wait till I slap the gums out ur pussy ass life yes I do get paid to battle BiTCH ur 2-1 vs me on a keyboard u Flamming BiTCH.

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Originally Posted by kill Spree

I’m in Harwhich at Ember coal and fire. That’s a two hr drive for you pussy pull the fuck up faggot

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree hours later

that’s what I thought you pussy. Guy talks all that tough talk won’t meet up like a man

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Lmao


That Addy drop shot this bird down, So no one hyping this “pro”
We saw knox see Kill’N Duck more than a Robertson on that Dynasty show
Paid to battle!!? Give me pennies & the coffin’s all good
Meaning..
this stick ‘bad Luck’ for this spic..& we see Knox on wood
Gun blaze these two fags, 1 bullet clap a rook N lame
Shotty got Rican EL everywhere & no one holdin Backwoods N Haze
& elegant just terrible. Every bar grows to be so shame
NE thing you think from ‘Elephant Tight Is’ still proof of Overgrown skulls w/no brain
This knife smash, your game get its spine slashed
So when I leave EleNox hacked? It’s nothing to do with cheating in Minecraft

knox no showed its bahriman vs elegant open for votes

Elegant Elephant
You dudes are lunchmeat, I promise, you’ve never touched heat.
With y'all sub-lines/sublime I guarantee you’ll never be above me.
sublines and sublime are two different words, so this does not work as wordplay.

Saying ten lines.. Thanks kid fine.
I’m from a small town called spit box, and I dare y'all... get in line!
where is the punch, this will not win you battles

You dudes have no clues, beat down, done like I don't know you..
You’re like dude! who cloned you, got lines like prison phones do..
what? this is incredibly basic, the punch is played and the rhymes are elementry.

You peons get peed on need I preach on..
Chest-nuts and wall-nuts… balls on ya chin?? Need y’all speak on?
This is the most pause worthy bar of the tournament right here.

So next time you 2 sign up for a tourney, use caution, I boss son!
U F’ed C!! it’s about two squares out the ring ate like slaw son!
This isn't good either.

- I think you need a lot of work, you had a lot of bragging lines which would have been dope if it was a dope bar, you need to be dissing your opponent instead of bragging about your self.

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Bahriman
That Addy drop shot this bird down, So no one hyping this “pro”
We saw knox see Kill’N Duck more than a Robertson on that Dynasty show
imo this was overkill, I didn't know where this bar aws going

Paid to battle!!? Give me pennies & the coffin’s all good
Meaning..
this stick ‘bad Luck’ for this spic..& we see Knox on wood
haha not a fan of gunplay but this was creative.

Gun blaze these two fags, 1 bullet clap a rook N lame
Shotty got Rican EL everywhere & no one holdin Backwoods N Haze
I'm not feeling this much, there's no punch

& elegant just terrible. Every bar grows to be so shame
NE thing you think from ‘Elephant Tight Is’ still proof of Overgrown skulls w/no brain
dope nameflip, I want to see more bars like this.

This knife smash, your game get its spine slashed
So when I leave EleNox hacked? It’s nothing to do with cheating in Minecraft
This was a dope flip on both of there names, the punch was coo too.

- I don't have any complaints you did what you needed to do, to win.

MVGT: Bahriman won this one pretty easily, maybe if his opponent showed this would have been a battle.

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Originally Posted by Elegant Elephant

You dudes are lunchmeat, I promise, you’ve never touched heat.
With y'all sub-lines/sublime I guarantee you’ll never be above me.
Wasn't big on this. Flowed great, bit didn't do much for me outside of that.
Saying ten lines.. Thanks kid fine.
I’m from a small town called spit box, and I dare y'all... get in line!
This felt like filler as opposed to an attack aimed at your opponents
You dudes have no clues, beat down, done like I don't know you..
You’re like dude! who cloned you, got lines like prison phones do..
Flowed great, and this would work in a swag in flow battle, but as a diss? It doesn't quite make the cut
You peons get peed on need I preach on..
Chest-nuts and wall-nuts… balls on ya chin?? Need y’all speak on?
I'm not going to lie. I would recommend avoid concepts that insinuate you will urinate and/or put your genitalia on other men.
So next time you 2 sign up for a tourney, use caution, I boss son!
U F’ed C!! it’s about two squares out the ring ate like slaw son!
probably your best bar. Your actually flipping a concept instead of coming off ass statementish, like some of the other bars. Decent jab.

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Originally Posted by Bahriman

Knoxville aka rican Theory








Lmao


That Addy drop shot this bird down, So no one hyping this “pro”
We saw knox see Kill’N Duck more than a Robertson on that Dynasty show
Solid personal shot. Not super heavy, but solid.
Paid to battle!!? Give me pennies & the coffin’s all good
Meaning..
this stick ‘bad Luck’ for this spic..& we see Knox on wood
This was good.
Gun blaze these two fags, 1 bullet clap a rook N lame
Shotty got Rican EL everywhere & no one holdin Backwoods N Haze
Kind of a stretch with the El, but I like the double nameflip, so it works for me.
& elegant just terrible. Every bar grows to be so shame
NE thing you think from ‘Elephant Tight Is’ still proof of Overgrown skulls w/no brain
A little wordy, but still pretty nice. Good bar.
This knife smash, your game get its spine slashed
So when I leave EleNox hacked? It’s nothing to do with cheating in Minecraft
This missed for me.

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Okay. Solid battle. I have Elephant edging out the last bar, and winning the flow category. But I have Bah taking the first 4 bars, and landing the heavier punches.

Vote - Bahriman

lol Welp ...

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Originally Posted by KnoXville.

My bad. Ill drop a vote since I no showed.

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There. I fixed it for you, bud.

bump

You dudes are lunchmeat, I promise, you’ve never touched heat.
With y'all sub-lines/sublime I guarantee you’ll never be above me.
nah
Saying ten lines.. Thanks kid fine.
I’m from a small town called spit box, and I dare y'all... get in line!
you live in a place called Spit Box? Lmaooo wtf
You dudes have no clues, beat down, done like I don't know you..
You’re like dude! who cloned you, got lines like prison phones do..
nah
You peons get peed on need I preach on..
Chest-nuts and wall-nuts… balls on ya chin?? Need y’all speak on?
ahh the classic same end rhyme bar, not feelin
So next time you 2 sign up for a tourney, use caution, I boss son!
U F’ed C!! it’s about two squares out the ring ate like slaw son!
almost had something going here


Vs


That Addy drop shot this bird down, So no one hyping this “pro”
We saw knox see Kill’N Duck more than a Robertson on that Dynasty show
decent
Paid to battle!!? Give me pennies & the coffin’s all good
Meaning..
this stick ‘bad Luck’ for this spic..& we see Knox on wood
pause
Gun blaze these two fags, 1 bullet clap a rook N lame
Shotty got Rican EL everywhere & no one holdin Backwoods N Haze
I think this is ok
& elegant just terrible. Every bar grows to be so shame
NE thing you think from ‘Elephant Tight Is’ still proof of Overgrown skulls w/no brain
elephantitis wordplay could’ve been dope
This knife smash, your game get its spine slashed
So when I leave EleNox hacked? It’s nothing to do with cheating in Minecraft
never played the game but ok


Wasn’t feeling much in this battle if I’m being honest. I’ve seen much better come from bahriman.


Vote Bahriman

Bah wins via KO