LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[Upgrade wins]
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@Joe Boston
@Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
20
@Upgrade
Hurt my feelings!
That episode with Suge last week now u think Joe dont have his mind right
throw dirt on my name cuz when ur body's 6ft in it im pissing initials at ur gravesite
Im not one to take light dont take Joe for a fucking slouch
get me to the point i wanna Pull Out
after the bloodspatter ill dispose of ur foldup couch
Never had a gun bout in ur life what u want this 9 or the uzi
When i shoot UP it'll have ur body 3 dementional like a Disney Pixar movie
Wtf i have to prove see? ur gonna hurt my feelings practice what u fucking preach
reputations so garbage ur open mouth smells like Trump at a Pennsylvania speech
Teach him the effects of the gun when the hollows hitting that chest
Live hood life? but Sharapova the net ill have his insides revealed like a Nike Wimbledon dress
Try your best to keep fitting in fag the ball's in ur court
Looking right Instanbul shit u deserve to get blown up just like that fucking airport
U never had support growing up especially having a fried brain to suit ya
Think about that 1st Grade u were dumb af in school and never had a bright future
Ur wifes into Karma Sutra so anyway she'll let me fuck it
I'll give her this Sweet Daddy D stuff it in her ass like Jeff Dunham hand puppets
U pulling corrupt shit thats the type of story i aint buying
Could give a fuck how defensive u get trust me you'll die quicker than Buddy Ryan
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
Keyed this for ya bud.
Joe Boston aka Nigga
This in an intervention. look dog,
Don't go saying you'll son me, homie that's some lame shit
Dude thinks he can compare me to his son cuz we're both on a 1st name basis
While your at work late, staying extra hours re wording your punch
I'm balls deep in ur girl, while ya keep sleep then I proceed to eating their lunch
You're getting played.. loyal to you but gets a mouthful once you leave sight
Only time she's grinding Joe.... Is after we've had a long night
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
TayTay abused you, treated you like shit and u just up and left, queer
As ya wife looked on w/ admiration cuz she's been trying to do that for years
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Maybe she's sick of having a pussy for a husband lame nigga you're soft
you're struggling to cuff ur chick, while she begs me not to take Em off
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
Killing you will do your son a favor, he'll be glad to see this faggot drop
It won't be a prank when I grab the glock, go to joes cubicle and office pop
Nah you deserve to suffer, I'll take my time too believe me Ive got the patience
I'll start off by giving bosnia beat down that'll damage foreign relations
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
That episode with Suge last week now u think Joe dont have his mind right
throw dirt on my name cuz when ur body's 6ft in it im pissing initials at ur gravesite
Liddle bland, but ok here
Im not one to take light dont take Joe for a fucking slouch
get me to the point i wanna Pull Out
after the bloodspatter ill dispose of ur foldup couch
Eh
Never had a gun bout in ur life what u want this 9 or the uzi
When i shoot UP it'll have ur body 3 dementional like a Disney Pixar movie
Not seen this concept before, wasn't keen on the wording, but it's ok
Wtf i have to prove see? ur gonna hurt my feelings practice what u fucking preach
reputations so garbage ur open mouth smells like Trump at a Pennsylvania speech
Not American, but luckily for you I follow American politics loosely, this was aight
Teach him the effects of the gun when the hollows hitting that chest
Live hood life? but Sharapova the net ill have his insides revealed like a Nike Wimbledon dress
That's really weird... I was looking at tennis wordplays this week... I feel this was a little forced
Try your best to keep fitting in fag the ball's in ur court
Looking right Instanbul shit u deserve to get blown up just like that fucking airport
Not a fan of the way you used this current event, again the wordplay is forced to me
U never had support growing up especially having a fried brain to suit ya
Think about that 1st Grade u were dumb af in school and never had a bright future
k
Ur wifes into Karma Sutra so anyway she'll let me fuck it
I'll give her this Sweet Daddy D stuff it in her ass like Jeff Dunham hand puppets
Nasty
U pulling corrupt shit thats the type of story i aint buying
Could give a fuck how defensive u get trust me you'll die quicker than Buddy Ryan
Had to look this up, again, british - don't follow american football - but it works. decent.
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
Nice wordplay, decent punch - cool.
Vs
Don't go saying you'll son me, homie that's some lame shit
Dude thinks he can compare me to his son cuz we're both on a 1st name basis
Ok
While your at work late, staying extra hours re wording your punch
I'm balls deep in ur girl, while ya keep sleep then I proceed to eating their lunch
Eh..?
You're getting played.. loyal to you but gets a mouthful once you leave sight
Only time she's grinding Joe.... Is after we've had a long night
Okayish
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
Statementish, but still a hard personal
TayTay abused you, treated you like shit and u just up and left, queer
As ya wife looked on w/ admiration cuz she's been trying to do that for years
Pow, right in the kisser
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Best line of this battle. Seriously I thought this was fire. Dope as shit.
Maybe she's sick of having a pussy for a husband lame nigga you're soft
you're struggling to cuff ur chick, while she begs me not to take Em off
Nice, ODing on the wife concepts a bit, but still a solid bar
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
Statementish but hard, again.
Killing you will do your son a favor, he'll be glad to see this faggot drop
It won't be a prank when I grab the glock, go to joes cubicle and office pop
decent
Nah you deserve to suffer, I'll take my time too believe me Ive got the patience
I'll start off by giving bosnia beat down that'll damage foreign relations
Think the wordplay was forced here.
Pretty good battle, why you fuckers went 20 i'll never know. Good luck getting decent votes! I think Joe, you had a few forced wordplays and some shit not connecting. You're closer was probably the only wordplay I actually liked from you, but it was pretty good so it makes up for the others a little. Overall an ok verse, nothing crazy.
Up - decent verse. Very personal-heavy and IDGAF if Joe say's they're fake, they were good lines, especially "Made N" - that shit was fire. I actually felt sorry for Joe when I read that line. Overall you were more consistent, and had LOTB so
MVGT - Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
Joe had the Pixar line, buddy Ryan, and the trump bar. Upgrade had his opener, neglect, and video mag. Even in quotes but I felt Upgrade took it. He was personal. Wasn't feeling all his wife concepts because the shit became redundant. And joes wording some bars let him down. All in all, I'm goin for upgrade.
Vote upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
Never had a gun bout in ur life what u want this 9 or the uzi
When i shoot UP it'll have ur body 3 dementional like a Disney Pixar movie
Ur wifes into Karma Sutra so anyway she'll let me fuck it
I'll give her this Sweet Daddy D stuff it in her ass like Jeff Dunham hand puppets
U pulling corrupt shit thats the type of story i aint buying
Could give a fuck how defensive u get trust me you'll die quicker than Buddy Ryan
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
vs
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Maybe she's sick of having a pussy for a husband lame nigga you're soft
you're struggling to cuff ur chick, while she begs me not to take Em off
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
pretty tough one to call here tbh. both had some solid hits and then some forced bars. however I gotta give it to the one who had less misses and a more consistent verse. hats off to both for going 20 on us. just don't let that shit happen again lol
v. joe
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Joe Boston
20
@
Upgrade
U never had support growing up especially having a fried brain to suit ya
Think about that 1st Grade u were dumb af in school and never had a bright future
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Upgrade
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
Joe's tendency to use similes seemed abusive. They were unappealing and generic. He did his best with wp's. Upgrade had solid personals but suffered in having bars where the opener didn't relate to the closer. This really hurt his delivery. But, Upgrade was much better here and I enjoyed the material I quoted.
MVGT - Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
Jb
Pixar, trump, 1st grade, buddy Ryan , n closer
Those I thought were cool, u had a couple more wp's that missed to me I mean that sharapova worked but I didn't like how u blended it in.. If ud a took more time on this bet it coulda been a lot smoother but overall had some cool shit
Upgraded
Grinding Joe, fl lll video, admiration, maiden cuff ur chick, video mag, office pop
Pretty solid overall couple I didn't like but maiden was slick couple a solid personals too...
Iight I got upgrad here I thought he had better wording which led to more effective punches.. Harder personals.. Joe had a lot a cool shit too but thought the way he worded the reference hurt a lil.. Still a pretty cool battle lotta cool shit from both...
Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
Never had a gun bout in ur life what u want this 9 or the uzi
When i shoot UP it'll have ur body 3 dementional like a Disney Pixar movie
Wtf i have to prove see? ur gonna hurt my feelings practice what u fucking preach
reputations so garbage ur open mouth smells like Trump at a Pennsylvania speech
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
vs
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
fuck lol
close battle here, some obv played and forced concepts all around guess its because the line amount, didnt expect 20 lol. this one was pretty fun these were the most outstanding bars from both but i'm going with upgrade on this one i felt the humor factor was good on both but he was the dominant in this 1. the video mag personal was fire went a bit too flat but the concept was there and maiden hit like a truck. trump bar of joe also had potential i found it pretty funny but you can extract much more from the whole trump shit. i'm having Upgrade here by a landslide, hard decision though great work
v/upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade
Joe Boston
That episode with Suge last week now u think Joe dont have his mind right
throw dirt on my name cuz when ur body's 6ft in it im pissing initials at ur gravesite
Im not one to take light dont take Joe for a fucking slouch
get me to the point i wanna Pull Out
after the bloodspatter ill dispose of ur foldup couch
Never had a gun bout in ur life what u want this 9 or the uzi
When i shoot UP it'll have ur body 3 dementional like a Disney Pixar movie (LOTB)
Wtf i have to prove see? ur gonna hurt my feelings practice what u fucking preach
reputations so garbage ur open mouth smells like Trump at a Pennsylvania speech
Try your best to keep fitting in fag the ball's in ur court
Looking right Instanbul shit u deserve to get blown up just like that fucking airport
If ur implying that ur goons will take me out ill meet u in that dark alley
Fuck respect before i address you as Cersei your block will look like the G.O.T seaon finale
vs
Upgrade
You're getting played.. loyal to you but gets a mouthful once you leave sight
Only time she's grinding Joe.... Is after we've had a long night
Coward, saying you neglect ur fam cuz you work two full time jobs is weak
Meanwhile he's signed up for an FL Tourney, LLL and the video battle league
TayTay abused you, treated you like shit and u just up and left, queer
As ya wife looked on w/ admiration cuz she's been trying to do that for years
Your wife resents you, u got chased off then resorted to racism goon
came back and Made N, ironic that's also the name she'll be using soon
Maybe she's sick of having a pussy for a husband lame nigga you're soft
you're struggling to cuff ur chick, while she begs me not to take Em off
Turn off the computer dead beat and for once just try being a dad
It's a shame that if ur kids want to see u they gotta go look at a video mag
Nah you deserve to suffer, I'll take my time too believe me Ive got the patience
I'll start off by giving bosnia beat down that'll damage foreign relations
Close one. Joe came out hard and had more creative concepts while Upgrade went for the jugular with the personals. I think Upgrade barely got away with this one.
Vote Upgrade
Re: LLL Week 9: Joe Boston vs Upgrade[open for votes]
@KnowP
u can seal this up good battle
@Upgrade
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