Week 1: Zunto (0-0) vs. Mac. (0-0) - ZUNTO WINS

LLL Season 24

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Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Mac.

check, 10

Sounds good

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Mac.

día is sick, friends with baron, two pedo kings
monsters & missing kids? you know that’s a stranger’s thing

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Mac.

got the crowd doin waves, surfing him to the first EMS on sight
call me Travis; plethora folk's dying in a rap show tonite

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You call those good? Listen I’ll…


Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack

i know a few things about you.. Mr. Mod

Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
tell me!
& talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse

Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
Kind of simple... but worded decently
Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
Cool
Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
Eh... not a fan of the concept... but again worded decently
n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
Nah
This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
Why black people? Just added extra words lol. Cool idea though

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Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
Super choppy... super simple
here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
No
tell me!
& talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
Nope
listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
Also no
we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
Also no... wording was bad throughout and just nothing that really connected

v/Zunto and it wasn't close

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Zunto

You call those good? Listen I’ll…


Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
ok
Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
solid
Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
Not feeling this one... cool but doesn't connect hard
n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
not feeling this one either
This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
Nah

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Mac.

i know a few things about you.. Mr. Mod

Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
wording is off, feel like this could've been way cleaner
here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
nah
tell me!
& talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
this one could've been sick. cool concept, bad wording and set up
listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
no
we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
no

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I got zunto here, better all around. I feel like Mac could've come hard with the CV and cliffhanger lines but they both suffered on the delivery, Zunto came cleaner and more consistent.

V/Zunto

Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
i like this
Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
dope
Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
lmao this is great
n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
didnt like this one
This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
nahh

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Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
statementish
here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
eh
tell me!
& talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
like the concept but wording hurts you here
listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
nahh
we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
dont get it but if i did i wouldnt like it

mac has to work on his wording he had a couple cool concepts

zunto had his first 3 bars and the italian bar had me dying laughing cause i had an italian boss who did it n the shits hilarious lmaoo

v/zunto

Zunto, town drunk was solid w/ the personal tie in. Easy mac was dopely executed. The rest was kind of light, but you kept the jabs coming.

Mac, you had alot of potential dope concepts, but your wording hurts you. Barrel off your mouth? The concept has a personal tie in & all, but you botched the delivery. Midseason was a solid jab. But the rest fell flat for me.

I got Zunto taking this.

Let the pound dump! For being trash at text u’ll meet the ground slumped
But we’re used to seeing you leave bars all fucked up.. like the town drunk
str8 2 bars
Tell this kid that’s he’s finished. End up in a box or swimmin w fishes
This shits too easy Mac.. I’m leavin u completely cooked within minutes
str8 diss ... could have been better though
Don’t need a gat wen I’m walkin. Bare knuckles, if Ima scrap then it’s often
So act crazy and u’ll see hands move in ur face.. like Italians talkin
i guess...if you said like gays talking it would have made more sense.. not strong just more sense
n If it’s Mac that im after..rest assured he’s gettin clapped by the master
catch u at night w the metal in my hand.. like the Hash Slinging Slasher
gun play lines ..blah
This is past rap. I’ll be at ya neck askin u where the cash at
Then im snappin the fuck outta them legs like black people at a crab-shack
good w/p .. and closer




Zelph repping a huge stain. the CV got a gap too. whats the reason?
you're KILLING it again. like when ur 1-2 on netcees died mid-season
str8 diss
here he comes wit the guns & weapons.. what, nothin else to rap bout?
how u gonna blast me when u can't even take the barrels off ya mouth
could have worded this better ... good set up.. just fell short on the punch
tell me!
& talk about mouths. zelph ran out of breath the bitch cant even banter
words on tip of the tongue? that cleft lip leaves us on a cliffhanger
could have worded it better
listen prick, dont threat me wit bangers. no tricks, pray I dont drop by
pull the chopstick & treat ya wit a chinese takeaway like hes peng shuai
no.. doesnt even rhyme
we know you're into guys, poser.. admitting it wont make it worse
now trust this is The Closer.. cuz only trans gettin dissed in this verse
i dont get this...

Zunto is winning this by a large margin .. mac just fell short work on your wording lil dude

Sorry guys break down from phone.

I felt Zunto connected most of his bars except the Slasher one wasn’t really feeling the wording. The hands in your face Italian line was dope. Opener was pretty decent. Closer was also dope.

Mac man wording wasn’t the best here. I was only feeling your opener. Good attempts but you rushed here and fell flat.

V/Zunto

Zunto - - - Town drunk was cool. Hash slinging slasher gave me a smirk, haha. Couple ideas that were worded good but we’re pretty light.

Mac - - - Idk man, not really feeling the way ur getting these ideas across. Hard to pick one that I enjoyed here. ‘The closer’ was maybe the best attempt here

Zunto Wins 7-0