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  1. February 4th, 2004, 10:45 AM #1
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    Edicius Ft. Rhytmictendecies - Insecure rhymes

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    Superficial ability connected with artificial capability...
    These rhymes lack versatility, with scare consistently...
    Invisibility – my rhymes are observed as see-through...
    If only you knew, that these words are insolently true...
    I try to decipher n’ construe, but my mind returns empty...
    A deep journey to find a intellectual meaning – if any...
    Retirement a luxurious prospect, am I done just yet...?
    Try to block out failed Rhythmical memories & forget...
    A new project? I look deep into my metaphoric mirror & reflect...
    Verse’s I thought were perfect n’ a futile original subject...
    However the prospect of fame is keepin’ me firmly in the game...
    The flame is burning out, & my exhausted brain gets the blame...

    We all struggle sometime, the confusing grows big yet we dont give up..
    out strength will guide us thru..we will never stop..

    Edicius:

    I write my struggles down,yet sometimes i struggle to write..
    than it all seems a little useless..some time..
    & my hate starts to ignite..
    Its like i walk on this path, w/ pictures sliding of my wrath..
    & im noticing darkness invaded..
    And the question keeps growing bigger..
    'what did me persuaded'..?
    yet the answer to that,is maybe revailed in my own depth..
    only im just a fool to comply..
    & only see the small ammount that is left..
    So i guess i just continue,..at doing 'what i think' ..i do best..
    Revailing small pieces of my life..w/ emotions..
    & this pain in my chest..
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  2. February 4th, 2004, 10:57 AM #2
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    iight...

    This was a good piece from both of you...

    Good Vocabulary... Creativity was there... Pretty good topic... You both portrayed it well... And in different ways each... Good

    Had good imagery in this... Can picture in my mind what a think your trying to get across... Nice...

    Keep it up...

    Check the OM in my sig... Drop some feedback... Thanks...

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  3. February 5th, 2004, 11:16 AM #3
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  4. February 5th, 2004, 11:20 AM #4
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    iight...

    My bad there...

    Here goes...

    Read the above post... Im not writing that out again...

    Rythmic... You had the nicer vocab on this... Wordplay aswell...
    Both had nice structures... Both kept it consistent through-out...

    Two different views of the topic... Both views where nice...

    Imagery was decent from both...

    Nice topic... Was unusual to me...

    Now hit up my OM's... Thanks...

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  5. February 5th, 2004, 03:30 PM #5
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    This was pretty decent. Didn't like the rhymes in the first two lines but it was prett cool after that. Edd, ya structure through me off for a sec, but one i got it, it was cool. I thought you verse was pretty nice, aswell. Nice collabo fellas.

    My fav lines:
    yet the answer to that,is maybe revailed in my own depth..
    only im just a fool to comply..
    & only see the small ammount that is left..
    ^pretty ill....the next lines after this are ill too

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  6. February 6th, 2004, 11:07 AM #6
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  7. February 6th, 2004, 11:54 AM #7
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    Drop a comment on... 'The Sky'... Please...

    You give good breakdowns...

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  8. February 6th, 2004, 04:35 PM #8
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  9. February 6th, 2004, 05:05 PM #9
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    good peice by both. had sum complexity in both. i enjoyed reading pretty much all of it. nice flow to'em both. sum lines culd be a little fixed up. the rhyming was difficult
    to follow at times. but it was overall nicely done. keep at it.
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    hit this up if you can in return please.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1162082

    thanx
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  11. February 7th, 2004, 11:05 AM #11
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  12. February 8th, 2004, 08:51 AM #12
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    this is exactly the reason i'm giving up writin'.
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  13. February 8th, 2004, 09:27 AM #13
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    This was a very good Open Mic and both of you had extreme vocab......I liked reading this stuff. You guys should all do a collab with Penskills.
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