Look into my beauty
you may think its great to be me
i stand and let you see
but what you dont know
is what you can't see...my devilish glow
this is my glow that i cannot show
look into my eyes
i can show you in your head what i dispise
if you stare into me long enough ill show your demise
stare unto me
the fate you now stand is meant to be
i am a flower as you can see
but theres something that you danot see
theres a flame...a fire inside me...
(this is a three saecond job... )
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wow...can sum1 pleez gimmie sum feed back......
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...anything...
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i think it was too rushed... it could of been elaborated into a greater piece..
nonetheless, it was still pretty good. i like the whole concept that you have going.
i would re-write it...return the favor
that was ill. you have a lot of talent. keep writing.
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