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    ..The Lovers..

    In the tale of when the inevitable became what was sought after,
    As two hearts begane to wander.
    Down a road that would lead to dicovery.
    Of how happy each heart with the other could be.
    But as the two hearts travelled different roads.
    They had different options, and yet the same they chose.
    For each knew what lay ahead.
    And if explored, they knew just how deep their love could get.
    So they delighted in the secrecy that was them,
    And went out together to lay their claim.
    On a piece of a dream that was yet untouched
    By the contaminating hands of all those that had once for the same ideals searched.
    In this tale of hearts that unknowingly found their way,
    The world was kept blind, so both hearts could never by others be swayed....

    it being a while i dropped a poem...enjoy.

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    I liked it, Pretty deep emotional poem in a way.
    It was like little story. It flowed real well, and the vocab was decent. Imagery was pretty good. Most of us can relate in a way to this piece. Nice Drop eyeronik.

    please check out "Krem's Final Drop" If ya get the chance

    peace

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    I apreciate the Love my "friend' I checked yours Out but dont quit on poetry man.

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    hey i like this peice alot n i agree wit everything krem said....especially in that everyone can relate to this poem in one way or anuther...

    ..........fav part...........

    On a piece of a dream that was yet untouched
    By the contaminating hands of all those that had once for the same ideals searched.
    In this tale of hearts that unknowingly found their way,
    The world was kept blind, so both hearts could never by others be swayed....

    keep droppin
    return tha favor

    ....bless

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    Thank you Miss Lovely.

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    I liked it. I rally liked the emotion in it!

    check out my poem, "A Rapsters Way" and be honest!

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    Apreciate yo feed I will check yours.

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    UppUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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    The Lovers.

    C'mon man i thought this was pretty nice catching Tittle. And no1 responded.

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