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    The Penis Revolt

    I was suckin on her tit, when I took a blindside hit.
    My dick wouldn't get big, till I gave that bitch a kiss.
    What the fuck is this? It's all about going soft...
    But it's hardened again, by her inner most thoughts.
    Jesus Christ, what's happenin? I'm lost, adrift...
    Cuz I can't fight the urge, ta buy this bitch a gift!
    Wanna make her smile, wanna be her bag of chips...
    She's all of that to me, and it's makin me feel like shit!
    I'm as selfish as they come, and when I cum they go...
    Cuz no one wants to wake up, to some hungover ho.
    But suddenly I'm fucked up, and find myself askin...
    "Does your head hurt, baby? Can I get you some asprin?"
    Arrrrgggghhh! I'm not a man! Testosterone stripped...
    Instead of buying new shirts, I'm like, "Honey, it ripped!"
    So she can stitch, I'm beginning to rely on her...
    Cuz love's a bitch, and the gun's a big calibur.
    Now if you don't catch that wordplay, you ain't rock...
    And the fact I'm Kissing up, shows she owns my cock.
    Cuz they're her favorite band, now guess what's next...
    Us being front row center, seeing geezer's in spandex.
    Oh the humanity! This bitch has me by the balls...
    Cuz I find I don't mind, being at her beck and call.
    But fuck that, I shook it, kinda like you would a quilt...
    Got me another bitch, but my dick went limp with guilt!
    Damn you, penis! Why'd you go and fall in love?
    The pussy might be good, but we've had others a cut above.
    "Listen up, jackass, I'll only speak this one time...
    She may not be a model, but she'll always stay in line.
    So I won't let you fuck this up, now love that bitch too...
    And if you ever try and cheat, I'll simply embarrass you."

    I've been beat, defeated, to honor I'm a prisoner...
    Cuz if I ever got fucked up, she'd be my first visitor.
    Gotta take care of that, after my dick speaking experience...
    Cuz not alotta bitches will love you, and really fuckin mean it.


    Cursed Since Birth...Lethal Khan

    New to the Game...Too Dope
    Last edited by Born To Kill; June 10th, 2004 at 10:51 AM

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    Pretty dope shit,flowed very well,off the tongue,lot's of good imagery and funny lines,decent vocab,good internals,afew mataphors and wordplay,true shit! was feeling it.simple scheme but came more complex coz of internals at some points etc.Good read,creative concept.

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    Nominating this for Legends. This is such a dope concept & you flipped it nicely. The flow on point. You seriously have come a long way & are becoming one of my favorite writers on this site. Its not that you are complicated or complex, but its your simplicity that works for you. Your story's are always entertaining. Well done man.
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    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Lmao, this shit was a nice piece haha, the last six lines had me laughin`.
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    OMG THEY TOOK MY BATTLE OUT OF LEGENDS.

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    ROFL.... OMG, this was hilarious.. LEGENDARY piece


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    LMFAO i cant stop laffing.....yea ILL is Right this is LEGENDARY


    dude B2K you are fuckin dope as fuck dude.....
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    OK.. that last part made you look like you was huggin his dick


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    lmao , thats the first time ILLs made me laugh that i remember. BTW i put this piece into legends. congrats on your 2nd (i think) legends piece BTK.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
    lmao , thats the first time ILLs made me laugh that i remember.
    *turns on the jeffersons* Movin on up


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    Dope and comical piece B2K

    The part about Kiss made me laugh
    Merk Squad...The Roster you weren't on
    Diamond Minds...The Roster you're not on
    LLL HW Champion...Been dope since forever

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    Thanks much for liking it...

    I appreciate all the feedback and nomination nods.

    Ya'll's cool, dudes!

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    Damn the first ten or so lines were ill. The flow was ill. I loved what you did with the concept. This was just a completely dope OM. Good job, homie.
    Hence Forward
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    funny,good shit.liked it,keep droppin

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    ^just because hes in legends doesnt mean you star smellin his shit nuggets.
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    someone make this into a audio
    im gonna rock this for days. nice narrator
    voice. ... lmao congrats on the legends.

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    Vote- BOOO.. on that wack attempt of sonnage


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