30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
LoL, ohhh shyt. I aint even know I was still signed in since my last accidental no show. Anyways though, signin in. E dub holla bacc n lemme know how many lines or bars (bar = 2 lines) you tryna do.
just match what-eva i drop
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aiight lets get down to business, u vs deniro aint even equal.. i take out dat desert eagle and set flames to ur people..u fuckin with dat lethal..1 dose will have ya ass bent over like u drunk a glass of diesel..make ur last scene of life flash with no sequal..just u gettin ripped destroyed by ur own ego/(me)
elements of each flavor i spit..so i neva expect to waste a target..on a punch hit..i neva miss..slit dis dude wrist.. den make ur lil brother drink a glass of piss..so he can stop talkin shyt/
u got dub mistaken fo dem newbiez u be battlin..but when u step to me its grown-men u battlin..my skeez on punches and metaphors, u aint handling..so i advise u to throw da towel-in/(wtc)
i got critics who only be active when-eva i'm on..so they can witness how i throw reproduction caps in ur mouth so skils of ur's can be born..just like shred paper u been torn..but da shyt aint even begin yet cuz dat nicca rep aint blow da horn/
<horn-blows*>
late competitors is schedule so hurry with ur verse.. if it aint in by friday a-no-show be da shyt dat hurts..but replyin is da worst/
cuz my structure of creation is mo bonified den da begining of human race..so how u expect to come at me un-prepared face-to-face..dunny u cant out-stand my pace..even if u keyed while u high off da blunts and coke u lace/
results be da same as da rest:..ko'd after da first 2 bars pounded ur chest..dont belive! den look at da test........ see i told'ya u want ready YET/
i know dis shyt is kinda plain from what u usually see from dub..but a nicca on a 8-9 workin shift..big niccaz know what i mean..
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uppin on cometaphore to drop
I'll rip off ya mouth to help me start off the apacolypse (a-pac-a-'lips')...then battle you in sign language since ya speech is anonamous// Killaz move in silence anyways, my intent is ominous...in this battle Im dominent, put ya name in the obituary to help you become prominent// Ya style Im bombin it, ya scripts Im stompin em...knocc ya rotten teeth out, make a bracelet n start flossin it// Claims everyone's feelin his style cuz homosexuals stalkin em...youre plans to win will not prevail kid, learn a lesson, Im chalkin em// learn the forecast, a thunderous metaphor blast...to ya head and thorax till ya head is tore bacc// And thorax in four craccs you poor rat...I leave you in a-maze-ment you cant hide from the sho cat// Viscious blows blind ya thought process till you turn to slow bat...then stomp ya brains out and view ya lacc of intelligence on my floor mat// Say hocus pocus, you lose ya focus like a magical spell...Roll up a dub in a swisha and leave ya wraps in a L// (lmao)
Good battle my nicca. My fault for takin so long. A nicca had some business to handle. Good lucc though. One Hunnid.
i think CoMetaPhoreTune took this one
his shit was flowin pretty hard punches were on point.better than e-dubs, these couple of barz killed it
"I'll rip off ya mouth to help me start off the apacolypse (a-pac-a-'lips')...then battle you in sign language since ya speech is anonamous// Killaz move in silence anyways, my intent is ominous...in this battle Im dominent, put ya name in the obituary to help you become prominent// Ya style Im bombin it, ya scripts Im stompin em...knocc ya rotten teeth out, make a bracelet n start flossin it// "
that shit was ill and the last bar made me laugh
i seen WAY betta shit from from e-dub
dub shit was coo, but it wasn't much to point out
good luck to both on next weeks battles
peace to both
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D.L.W
Thanks for votin n breakin it down. 1-0 my way. Holla bacc.
In case yall aint know, bats are blind. Just had to add that in.
Cometaphoretune gets my Vote..He Had A Better Flow..And More Direct Hits..Plus Better Punches..Overall He Came Better Then E-Dub..E-Dub Was Just To Basic With Shit..And His Verse Got Boring..But Comet Had Some Decdnt Shit And Took This Match..So he Gets My Vote..Pz..
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E-dub
^i didnt get it....i dont see how you are his egojust u gettin ripped destroyed by ur own ego/(me)
this almost made me laugh...good shit....eventho i dont no why you said his lil brother instead of himslit dis dude wrist.. den make ur lil brother drink a glass of piss..so he can stop talkin shyt/
cometaphortune
^This was all good shitI'll rip off ya mouth to help me start off the apacolypse (a-pac-a-'lips')...then battle you in sign language since ya speech is anonamous// Killaz move in silence anyways, my intent is ominous...in this battle Im dominent, put ya name in the obituary to help you become prominent
this some funny shitstyle Im bombin it, ya scripts Im stompin em...knocc ya rotten teeth out, make a bracelet n start flossin it
vote=cometaphore.....B/C he had overall a better verse....mainly b/c of the wordplay
props to both
cometaphortune took this. he had some ill wordplay and punches in his whole verse, and a lot of the lines made me laugh. e-dub had some pretty good stuff, but some of it didnt make sense, and just didnt hit as hard as cometaphortune.
holla
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Thanks for votin yall. 4-0.