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Thread: For All You Critics..........

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    Exclamation For All You Critics..........

    hALF THESE CATS IS BOOTY, I FEEL IT'S MY DUTY TO MAKE YA'LL FALL IN LOVE WITH MY FLOW LIKE LUCY
    SPITTIN OUT VERBAL AMMUNITION, LIKE LOADED UP OOZI
    YOU "DUDES" IS CLUELESS, I OBSERVE SMOKING A DOOBI
    bECAUSE THE REAL HIP HOP IS OVER HERE, WITH NO FEAR, IT'S TIME GET A COUPLE THINGS CLEAR
    THE WAY SOME CATS RAP, I SWEAR THEY TAKING IT UP THE REAR
    tHE WAY SOME CATS RAP, THEY WRITE IT AS THE HEAR
    I GOT LYRICS THE EAT AWAY AT EARS LIKE M. TYSON, LRYICALLY ENTICING
    I STREET FIGHT LIKE M. BISON
    THE FACT IS, YA'LL NEED A BIT MORE PRACITCE, WITH THEM SOFT LYRICS...SHOULD I BATTLE OR LAY YOU ON A MATTRESS*
    FOR GOODNESS SAKES...WHO TOLD YOU RYHME AT ANY RATE, I TAKE MC'S OUT ONE BY ONE LIKE ELIMIDATE
    THE TRUTH IS A COUPLE SHOTS COULD SEAL YOUR FATE...RUN FOR THE HILLS CAUSE THE COLD RYHME SPITTER IS OUT THE GATES
    I'LL TAKE YOUR DATE, SO PUT AWAY THE BAIT, YOU CAN'T SHIT ON ME, CAUSE I'M THE ONE BRINGING YOUR GIRL HOME LATE*
    gO AHEAD AND PULL THE CHROME, I KNOW YOU GONE HATE, CAUSE I MET HER AT 12 AND BY 1 I WAS SLIDING IN HOME PLATE
    I'LL BATTLE YOU CHARACTERS UNTIL YOUR WEAK HEART IS GONE, STARTED OF SLOW BUT I'M PULLING UP FAST LIKE "SMARTY JONES"
    wHAT'S MISSING IN HIP HOP?...HMMM.. THE ART IS GONE, I'LL CRASH THE STAGE AND HOLD THE MIC UNTIL THE WHOLE PARTY GONE
    I'LL ADMIT, I TAKE BACK SOME ACTIONS IN MY LIFE, I GOT LOVE 4 HIP HOP, SIMILAR TO THE PASSION OF CHRIST...............

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    i think i've battled you b4 somewhere, cant remember where though

    " Frost aint feelin me like winter mittens ".. yu remember that line?


    neways this was fire, some truly raw shit... but work on wording yur punchlines/concepts betta

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rekween
    i think i've battled you b4 somewhere, cant remember where though

    " Frost aint feelin me like winter mittens ".. yu remember that line?


    neways this was fire, some truly raw shit... but work on wording yur punchlines/concepts betta
    FIRST TIME ON HERE........BUT SEE I'M THE REAL J FROST, REPPIIN VA.GOOD LOOK ON FEEDBACK

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    Had a lot of wordplay, keep that up. Your concepts were alright. Line length could be straightened out. The topic was more self-glory than directly taking it to critics. Vocab has some room for upping.

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    yo that was dope really liked it shit ive only been in the business for four years im only 18 i agree though that was some raw shit though


    M-Pact

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    shit fucker haha

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