M.C. Force Vs Jay Mel

[Jay Mel]

Unlimited Bars
No Dickriders/Real Votes/No Crew Votes/No Biting Or Recycling
Lets Just Battle.

[Jay Mel]

listen doggie, normally assassins do da killin and not get killed/
only thing hot is ya over-charged cell phone, wen u forgot da bill/
ur an assassin how? i've yet seen a battle or KO from u/
and i'm da 1st nigga u decided to get ya 1st lost to?/
i dont need glocks, i'll give u an unstable amount of carbon monoxide/
cuz my acid deposition like rain i spit sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxide/<formula-acid rain>
u messin wit da kid J aka "Mail", me i done been da truth/
u like Canada rain, bout as "acidic" as watered down "lemon juice"/
my spits cut like blades and i'll reshape ya fade/
let u "clean house" only way u could "be maid"/<made>
ur about as "sick" as "doctors" "playin hookie" from work/
and u spit dirty like runnin to a "bookie" for "dirt"/
since u new to dis, here's a line, master ya own art/
pay me double for 1 bar, i'm ya punchline "loan shark"/
i'm well known in da streets and i can get u hit/
deliver da "box" to ya door make sure i get u "fit"/
im too violent, and hardcore so i'm an unregister abuser/
ur too soft for a "custom title" stay a "registered user"/


Just a free verse something to merk this emcee with...Just post it up homie!

[M.C. FORCE]

feelin froggie.... well then lep mail man

I gots the plain to sqwash ya wit every M.c's hand...

you straight up dumb, I spit venom and you spit cum

you should be strapped with a box and then nicked named a bum..

lookin like a south side reject going into LBC

Can't see me, Iill make you stand, cause im hard as rock

and you as soft as sand, flows nose pose with some nappy cornrolls

is that ya nose, or is it a clit I supose..

Bitches like you get stomped down on the floor

nick name you cancer cause you bought disease from a whore..

im not lying im bringing nothing but the true facts...



you won a lot but you might lose today

two legged bitch you do whatever an M.C might say

Thinkin ima lose to "get none" mail man

if you that gay you should get locked up in jail man

or locked in hell man, yeah just stay sucked like that man

needin some flow skills well go get some elite fair-en-hight

you fuckin dyke, take the next flight to san fransico tonight

nigga dude, nigga prud, lickin cum off ya shoe, don't know what to do

then jak off or play ya playstation 2

dust off ya shoulder cause im the eye, beholder...tooth molder

plus prime ruler

and your'a bitch made punk your flows are straight sunk, I know why you an't got a girl

cause you suck.. feel free to stay within phyiscs law's and ya medapause

still believing in santa clause still stuck on newtons balls...

wit ya Oxie glads and oxie fads but your still an teenager so get some Oxie pads ya

heard

[M.C. FORCE]

Damn my shit had no flow or anything
my shit was all messed up I basically wasted your time
its cause im not heated up right now dammit!!!!!

[Jay Mel]

Lol its cool, we all gotta elevate....Uppin for votes!

[Maintain]

Jay Mel lol bringing the science text book into the battles lol. Acid rain shit. MC your flow was off it seems, and i didn't get parts of your verse.

Vote-Jay Mel

[Jay Mel]

Thanks man, but i need some real votes please damn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jay Mel]

Uppin this!

[Jay Mel]

Feedback please, can someone please give me feedback....Thanks!!!!

[untold]

My vote goes to Jay. Force your strcture is wack man, yyou gotta sort that out for your next battle, dont leave gaps between your lines cus it looks shit. AS far as punches go Jay you whored him. Structure was aight and it flowed well.

Vote - Jay Mel

RTF - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=vapour+device ... ld ass battle needs closing

[ticked]

good battle

[Jay Mel]

Uppin this please.....come on lets go so i can win this

[Tim]

vote jay he came harder on all levels with a semi witty verse liked a couple of lines you had ther also had a couple coutables ill saw one played line and that is it good shit man aslo the other guy needs to work on his sturcture with a better rhymsceme he came very weak eay vote in my eyes


vote........Jay

[Jae-Mic]

vote is for mel...bettter punches and flow...didnt feel ne wordplay or personals...but i like how it all went togethers....forces flow was whack and no point in it at all...

vote=Mel...

but this is just my opinion...not a vote

[Def boi]

jay merked force bad.his flow was gud nd he had betta punches,nd force,u need to work on ur structure nd stuf.my vote goes to jay for overall betta flow nd punches.