Spittin Flames

[Lil Drew]

yo im new this game i don't need to introduce my name cause i want to get start on spittin some flames,
so i f you this freestyle is lame then post nuttin about what i gotta say,
cause i don't wanna hear it,
cause ur you gonna that is some wack,
but if you wanna start beef then bring yo heat,
where see whos gonnna shine the best who got rhymes to get off there chest,
but you betta watch cause punches that will knock you out i dont even half to touch u and i still knock you out,
so don't fuck wit me because spit flames
and thats spit and rhym in my game is all about//

[Lil Drew]

post coments

[Lingwistik]

you have a lot to learn my friend, don't take this as a "diss" or whatever, but you need to work on flow, structure, the punches weren't even that good, they weren't even really punches, work on it man

peace

[sILLable]

read tha rules before you post something...and elevate