meaning of love

[young hov]

I love wendy's
love tittie's but
I still don't know
what love really is
if I had a wife
would I love her
like I love money
or would I love her
like I love my mom
if I had a son would
I love him like music
or would I love him
like god himself
if we are having
sex are we making
love or are we just
fucking if I say I
love you do I mean it
or do I think I mean it
what happen's if I
wanna love you
but I can't and
if I think I love
you do I really
do or do I just
think I do if
I hurt you
please forgive
me it's just that
I don't know
what love really is

[young hov]

feedback....might be wack cause i just started doing poems and shit

[Jeremy King]

okay this was good but that structure has to go, understand? work on a better structure, vocab wasnt good, so try to use better wording for it and also it was too basic should hvae had more emotion to describe love within what you wrote

[Impossible920]

I Like it, just because I can relate, on to what is really love?

Cuz to me I think love is anything you take it as,
Just a word with alot of power behind it.
As if you said you cherrish somthing you could take our cherrish and put love in. So you could just say you love that instead of saying cherrish,
But I like where the peom was goin. just Ya vocabulary skills need some work on.

[King Humble]

i felt it
u had a str8 structure, but u get points jus for expressing your self i felt it though

[SurpurbSkillz]

this talked about the meaning of love, but u had a str8 structure
nice though, good concept

[young hov]

thank you .................