the rules r...
10-15 lines
due by tommaro(cuz im gone now)
U spit first
Battle Fair
the rules r...
10-15 lines
due by tommaro(cuz im gone now)
U spit first
Battle Fair
game ova you have no reason to take half of my name
but you are ova so i wont take that from you mang
so listen, ya aint shit but ok ill converse
he wants a day so he can think of a good verse
but ill take you out now so you outta the way
ill merk you.. finish you.. and leave nuthin but decay
you aint no rapper nigga yuzz a boy scout
so ima throw some punch lines and knock ya out
leave ya body scarred up and have ya face soar
the only time you'll drop a good verse is when bill gates goes poor
ima do you like i do my friends in monopoly
screamin at you "NIGGA PAY ME FOR MY PROPERTY"
the chances of you winnin is like tryin to find a four leaf clova
sorry foo.. ya lost.. thats it.. GAME OVA
so you gon drop tomorrow.. aight w/e then.i dropped now.. so all you gotta do is drop your verse.
name and mang dont even ryhme but beside that it was good
your just mad cause im white
ya man cuz u wite lmao jus playin man dat was a sik vs only change i would maid is here
you aint no rapper nigga yuzz a boy scout
so ima throw some punch lines and knock ya out
i woulda said dis to have a better ryme scheme
u aint no rapper nigga u a fukin boy scout
so ima throw some punch lines and knok yo fukin ass out
it may look like da others longer but count da syllables they almost the same
good lookin out i aint hatin but i no wat im doin but good shit tho
wtf? yall niggs are trippin.. hahahaha WOW.. all you did was add some cuss words in there.. but ok. it is how it is.
nah its da syllables ya kus words make it more intence ya man i no jus sayin though hahahahaha
no hatin no hatin but the original rhyme scheme has 11 syllables! lol.. aight w/e.
My rhymes smash urs and u no it game spitta/
This battle is like ur clothes they juss don’t fit ya/
You cant beat me wit ur played out rhymes so start adjusting/
My flow will fill ur lungs and force them into combustion/
U like a cigarette u about to get smoked/
U winning ur battles? U prob lost all hope/
U lost u cant stop ma flow is uncontrolled/
This is a story of a LEGEND and its about to unfoled/
FINSHER
Look u cant beat me seein ur last battles ur lame/
We aint in ur bathroom so enough wit ur games/
I got u dropping more than the prices of Wal-mart/
Damn u lost this battle And it Game-over with no Restarts/
Uppin *2* yah yah come on get em votes in
hit this battle up nee votes
you both got some skills, but the flow and punchlines of Game ova were better. he had more poer in his rhymes and lyrics.
i vote victory for Game Ova...
uppin we need these votes foreal...Ill make sure to drop a honest vote on ur battles
weak battle, but my votes gotta go to game spitta for better punches, and structure...
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well...
game-spitta - really bad structure man....also your flow and punches were pretty weak...flow mostly just because your structure was so off
game-ova - not much better, but at least your structure and flow was aite. your first bar was your best one, but after that it's all downhill...bunch of played punches.
Either way, the better flow and structure takes it...both had weak punches.
v/Game-ova
and peep the battle in my sig if anyone gets a chance.
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