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  1. November 24th, 2005, 10:15 PM #1
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    Doubt

    Undiscovered diseases, thats the doubt of life releases
    Lord Jesus, every fetus always sins like body feces
    Doubt and uncertainty is the epidemic that spreads
    Without eternity then we never considered dead
    If life came packaged of comfort with no disadvantages
    Then drugs would be gone free from worries of damages
    Sandwiches the 2 worlds to become one in an instance
    Assistance would increase and the whole world listens
    How great it would be but many causes create the bitch
    To fuck lives and depress the essence of life's images
    Thoughts integrate within minds unable to control
    Valuable gifts hidden and never seen seem subtle
    Individualistic critiques by many may be a burden
    Visualistic streaks plenty pictures closes the curtain
    Humanity becomes materialistic opposite of realistic
    The physical content of it portrays no real lyrics
    Its like we runnin on a charger to wake up full battery
    We move during the day wantin to burn all calories
    Lazy maneuvers limit us to our extent of movement
    We all wanna have a great body puttin fat to a nuisance
    But nothin lasts forever so just judge me at my grave
    Cause Im on land of the free and the home of the brave
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  2. November 24th, 2005, 10:19 PM #2
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    yo man this piece was sick b. the flow was pretty phenominal, the structure was even the entire way through. then creativity and imagery set down was extremely dope. the entire idea and the wordplay was also pretty dope. the multies you had in the lines were pretty even and consistent throughout the entire drop. the vocab was intense man..

    Keep droppin..wantin to see more from you b.

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  3. November 24th, 2005, 10:24 PM #3
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post3507683

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  4. November 24th, 2005, 10:30 PM #4
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    THis was a nice piece but I didn't really see why you called it doubt...I can't really say I doubt anything you said...really I'm serious...

    Nice vocab and mutlis and what not, I lied the whole verse really, it flowed well and all but its like somethin was missing I'm thinkin it was imagery, cuz I couldn't imagine anything about what you were sayin' it was like straight facts and left no room for imagination...honestly so work on ur imagery painting the picture for the reader nahmean?

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  5. November 24th, 2005, 11:33 PM #5
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    THis was a nice piece but I didn't really see why you called it doubt
    the topic really didnt have nuthin to do with this peice really...
    anywayz..ya rhymes scheme was good and complex......
    flow was smooth and strucutre was just about perfect,,
    i liked this peice man..i really do...keep it upp..linkz in sig..peace
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  6. November 25th, 2005, 12:33 AM #6
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    uppin, well a reason why it is called doubt is cause doubt really brings in the effects like the materialism I spit in this piece. Doubt and uncertainty basically is behind the radar which represents the cause in this piece.

    Thanks for the feedback guys.

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  7. November 25th, 2005, 01:57 PM #7
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    uppin and check my other one disguised hatred please

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