10 Line battle
Due 1 Hour from check in from both.
Good Luck
10 Line battle
Due 1 Hour from check in from both.
Good Luck
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u aint done nutting, but im still posting.
your one of the worst yet murda, you'll get wrecked when we collide
Ra your just to delicate, that's why all your verses get set to the side
my weapons are live, blasting faggots back to the closest closet
im leave Ra dead broke, againts me theres never a saftey deposit
working em over fully, but really i don't know why i'm break'n the fag
cause anyone's verse round here leaves ra raked and bagged
quit your faking man, no one wants to see a try-hard die odd
murda's bitch shit. i'm carry this win in my pocket like an ipod
picture this. i'll break all your bones cause your image is frail
murda was the case, tobad yah game could let yah just visit jail...
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fuck, waitin for ra to drop his verse, ill vote then in the meantime holla @ my open battles, & DROP UR LINX, pz
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i dont know who dis guy is,so call em an unknown middlewieght
its like u straped bricks to ya shins,while thinkin of better ways to elavate
ur just 2-4,another over posting herb,that has trouble findin respect
im your father Dep!ct,i planted a seed in ya moms,but decided to neglect
your wack as fuck nicca,the word is played but foreal u will neva skyrocket
your garbage,the only way ull blow up is by clickin grenades in ya pockets
u think u dope,nah reality check,ya lines sag more den ya grandmas chest
nicca copyed some bars from noob battles,and disguised at tryin his best
left em merk for dead wit 10 holes in his head
dep!ct u suck fam at least dats wat everyone says lol
iight i guess im postn and polln my vote now brb homies
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postin my feedback and shit now
iight this wasn't a bad battle from either side i just feel w/ no hate involved that depict took this win, reason, i feel dep. was more consistent with his punchlines and verse overall, had some decent punches in there, and seemed to flow good, some creative shit in some lines some seen before in different format no hate tho, not bad good shit, i thought you would have done worse but you did just a bit better with your verse than your opponent, nothing too stretched, and nothing seemed forced, ra, idk holmez i seen you drop better but not bad, I just feel you should have concentrated more on personals punchlines, you seemed to fall off in some spots, be more consistent and stronger with wordage, like i said not bad, but not good enuff, work on it holmes, pz
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vote on my open battles, HONESTLY & dont forget to poll ya votes & DROP LINX pz
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uppin for votes.
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dis was a decent battle ram i see you have elevated alot man hit me up on aim my sn is texcee u had some nice punches in there man nice shit your structure and flow was a lil off though try to shorted yo lines and make it flow better but yo punches were good and dep!ct u gotta come harder den dat man you lines were waaaaay to stretched and your punches were'nt connecting
v/ramurda
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3998065
vote on dat please^^
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Originally Posted by Pious Sk!llz Inc.
wtf are you talking about kid, sayin my punches be streched when our verses look almost identical in structure. lol. yo pious, i dont want your ass in Loreh homie, your a fool. but the vote can stand cause im not tryna sway.
damn sirus if i would of known Dep!ct was ur alias i would of came harder
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