(KiLlA ShYt) -Kamikaze Kollab-

[EyeCandy]

itz koo' jus do more collab's i'll be happy 2 read it aiite.. cudd ya check my o.m?

[Sin~A~Matic]

4 sho hit me up with the link

[Arsenic P]

i'm feelin in it.scratch n sniff had the hardest verse.the rest of ya'll were aight to but the bul really shined on this shit.keep it comin like this.i'm new so imma be watchin and give ya'll read feed back when i have time. this was an average piece and i know ya'll prolly can come way harder.1

[Sin~A~Matic]

i don't know how this OM uppin works but uppin for more feed

[ace baby]

5this shyt was bangen as hell niggah. your vocab was on point. i felt everything you were sayin niggah. evry persdon in this brought it hott in this joint it was the same thing but it was also somthing new lso niggah it was tight.

[Sin~A~Matic]

4 sho thank you

[dble-d]

muthafucker dats was the best thin u eva wrote nice man

[Sin~A~Matic]

o'm glad you enjoyed the collab

[Devils_Diamond]

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Ight a yo dis Kamikaze Crew Kollab

-DESOLATEVOICES-
yo the names desolatevoices and i got to speak my mind
with so many choices in a hustlas life you kno i stay on the grind
got mad flo hand heavyweight punches
leave ya ass packed in a trashbag like lil kids lunches
the dons here everyone take a knee
bow down bitches to the kamakazi royalty
i keep the pimp hand on the mic and the crowd appalled
steady flowin seein the future growin like i was peepin through crystal balls
so guess whats next in this world of text linining these bitches up like nazis
you cant fuck with us cause even if we die we take you out bitches its kamakazi

I was really feeling ya style. its all grimey but on point. it doesn't swagger to much from the topic. your punches were str8, structure was ight as well. i could really tell you took pride in these lines. and i aint front'n there str8. safe

-SIN-A-MATIC-
Who the fuck dat iz O G bagin Automatics
Those niggaz who suck dick get on ya knees For Sin~A~Matic
I break the habits of faggots who try to crush my shine
you can't hack the black act that'll send deadly shivers up ya spine
I kill lame o's with duck shoes and blazers
killa a nigga who ever fuck with with Scratch or Hell raizer
Do not get me wrong i'm really a cool fella
But you'll get fucked up, betta get lucky like juan tela Mela
Naw this ain't a diss this just a fact
The only reason you won the battle was cuz ya dicks were shoved up ya back
But I digress and go back to my present state of mind
Kamikaze on ya fuckin backposted on the corner toten a nine
and If you ever wanna battle you betta calm think and take fuckin time
Cuz we never hesistate to cover niggaz in sum slime


meh, alot of your rhymes were forced, which doesn't really appeal to me or any mc, but your still kept it consistent so i gotta give you that, no real good multi'z or lines worth mentioning on your drop. elevate and you can only get better

-HELL RAIZER -
yo nigga its Hell_Raizer in dis bitch to speak my mind ......
wanna b ass niggaz sayin they on the grind wen dey kno its my time to shine ....
u c nigga its all about Kamikaze , an if u talk shyt dey gon have to cum an identify yo body......
a yo i got luv fo all the niggaz in my crew , but bitch u talk shyt u betta bak it up or youll b lookin black an blue .....
im hittin dis niggaz wit sum crucial shyt , fuk any otha crew dey could hop on my dick ......
dawg i told u i cum wit it kwik , im sik an demented fukin wit us yo ass gon have half yo skull dented.....
dawg Kamikaze standin to tall to fall , us niggaz givin up our bodies screamin Kamiaze we could take all of yall.......

-Scratch-N-Sniff -
Understand its a pyro with many loose screws that u r facin
I'm insane unstable Scratch-n-Sniff proudly a mental patient
Kamikaze comin and u know cuz u heard tha boom bitch
they got 9's my crazy ass stepped in tha gun fight with a broom-stick
ready ta lay tha smack down like tha rock
leave a knot on u're forehead
I dropped bombs b4 this collab
this shit is a warhead
no not a warnin cuz I strike with no prior knowledge
stay on u're toes stay on u're feet
juss don't b anywhere that tha red dot is
and if it spots u then all that can b said is that u messed up
u're crew can't look u in tha face no more cuz u missin from tha neck up
so come get wrecked pup thinkin u a pit in this game of dawgs
Kamikaze got a lotta damn weight in 2 weeks we went from crew ta mob
and if I have ta killu I'ma kill u and show no mercy
clean up tha crime scene in a matter of minutes
but dawg where tha hell tha hurse b
plus tha tombstone said he died b4 he reached tha gat
call me curiousity bess know that I killed tha cat
and if I verbally explode bastards better duck from debry
bcuz bein too slow will get u burnt and murdered in tha 3rd Degree
cuz this is Kamikaze blazin emcees that think they buck
we got respect in our fam if u an outsider WE DON'T GIVE A FUCK


Yeah you layed it out nicely..well alot better then those other two cats above you. i can tell alot of your shit wasn't forced, i was really feelin ya opener n closer for your drop. you mad creative when it comes to text. stay up and keep blessin

-TheRealDeal-
Nigga understand that I spit venom like a like a rattle snake
The Kamikazis is The Real Deal bcause all the other crews are fake
Stop drulening over our fame because it makes you look like a slob
The Kamikazis would whoop and kill your ass faster than the mob
I have mad love for all the crew members....there my niggers
Kamikaziz won't have trouble to kill you by the trigger
I know that all you other MCs you all looking up to me
Well just to tell you....life isn't nothing but bitches & money
The kamkazis are and will make more money then a clan
We'll have you studdering...The Kamkazis are the main man
We will tear the shit out of any noob crew that gets in the way
After we we beat the shit out of you...you wont know what to say


Again like the first two people that spit, try re-wording your verse a little so it goes together alot nicer. also i'd work on your vocab. cuz your vocab sucks and thats putting it lightly. you need to use sum other wordz other then. money, mob, trigger, clan, fa realz...

-Gurbil-
WhEn GuRbIL SpEaKs It SilencES THe STrEets,
KAmikaze Co-ELite,
MeRkIn BitCheS gIvEn ThEM StitChes,
ThIS ShItS bETTER tHan CaMaRaCS cHRIT DIsS,
kAmIkAzE oN tOP oF ThE PiLE, GoT a FeeLInG WelL Be StAYIN hERE foR A wHiLE,
ScAriN bItCHeS MaKin tHEM Run A MiLE,
OthER cREws In Denial ThAt WerE tHe BeST,
u kNoW wHat They Say Its not juSt A RiVer iN eGypt,
I mEan It Im BreAKIN bItCHes BACks,
SayiN tHERe pArapLegic,
SaYin IM ThE shIT No NOt phesis,
Ye I HeARd yOU LyriCal F1ne3t,
You FukIN bITch AsS PuSsiES,
BuT DOnT WoRRY i wONt disS,
IlL jUs Wait until U lITtLE Bitches SEe This

Yeah this was a dope closer for a average collab by you guys, really feeling the flow, structure n concept was off da chain. all the guys above you can learn something from you. anway good shit. peace

[<Supreme>]

this was a gd om
flow was the best part of this piece i think as it was consistent throughout
the structure was mainly gd in this piece
the rhymin was gd in all of the verse except for gurbils - sum of the lines didnt rhyme
i didnt like gurbils VeRsE bEcAuSe It WaS hArD tO rEaD aS iT wAs CaPiTaLs AnD lOwErCaSe LeTtErS wHiCh Is ReAlLy AnNoYiNg WhEn YoU aRe ReAdInG iT
the verse worked well, and the concept of this piece was gd

keep @ it yall

[desolatevoices]

for real thanks for the feed yall

[Sin~A~Matic]

Coo

[Arsenist3rd*]

really enjoyin tha feedback glad ya'll liked it

[EyeCandy]

hey scratch u in aiite.. jus check in or w/e..

[Hell_Raizer]

yo okay we need mo feed iight ....