DVS u gonna drop feed?
DVS u gonna drop feed?
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Suprisingly, pretty good man. To be honest I just wasn't expecting to much from this, just had a weird vibe coming in and just thought it was going to be some hopeless strive to be "deep." But this actually turned out very poetic and... Deep lol. The entire piece had a very poetic and creative approach with the metaphores and descriptions that you had used. The flow was always on point, alittle stop and go which bothers me but I enjoyed the content so really the flow is whatever to me. Uuuuum, structure was very neet and organized, nothing was sloppy or stretched. Everything really came together nicely. Would have liked to seen more length to this... But for what it was I really enjoyed it man.
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Hey this was pretty nice i enjoyed reading this..it has a nice interesting and creative topic and thats alwayz good to have....flow was nice throughout and your wording was nice..made it easy 2 read and follow....rhymes were good..nice multies here and there...and overall this was a nice peice.......keep it up..peace
This piece was well.....excellent, meaning the emotions frustration and commotion of this woman is displayed excellently and this allows the reader to be engrossed with the verse. The mulites use was good and the structure was aight to. Personaly i really liked this, so yeah keep the whole thing Poppin'
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aight thats how i like it, lots of good feed, yo Atticus i'll hit ur shit up now
and props 2 DVS he caught wut i was getting at with this piece
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uppin again.
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yo diss peice was pretty good....topic was mad interestin and caught my eye..and after i read it i enjoyed it.....imagery was aight coulda been a bit betta same with complexity and vocab....ya rhymes were good overall and flow was pretty nice the whole way through,...overall this was a good read and i liked it..keep at it man you got tons of potential..peace~
aight thanks 4 da food feed thug.
up
rise.
god damn... leave feed bitches!
oh my fuckin god. common RB leave some feed!
i liked the wordplay and the flow
i think you did a nice job on that
pretty much everything
i think it spoke to me personally you know
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