iight this was not a great piece
i saw sum things that can turn u into a great writer
learn how to spell my nigga..no wonder u think school sucks
read otha OM they all have sum story to it
this piece was juss like outta a DMX video
rap iz a form of poetry plz respect it with not postin this nonsense
yo this was aight for a noob on dis but get not played things on this put some creativity...there was a lot of stretched lines that u had to fix and get a story line in there not just random stuff u would do wit ur niggas or something
very bad, elevate.
dayum i drop a good piece and i can't get feed
but everyone seem s to respond to this bullshit
is it because people on rb are quick to critize
then compliment?
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Originally Posted by Innovative Mind
So True
^^^ Quit Freeposting Bitch.
Where Did I Spell Anything Wrong, KID CRITICAL..
Battle Me.. Topical Or Whatever, Whatever, Whatever..
It Is True Though, That People Dont Like To Evaluate Nice Drops,
But Rather Hate And Talk Some Dumb Shit Just To Get Their Posts
Up.. I Been Around For Years My Nigga, And Imma Go Reply To Your
Piece Now.. Check Out My Other Piece, The Pain.. Then Call Me NOOB
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