$inister vs. lOOk$

[Flavin.]

10 lines
due by tomorrow midnight

[lOOk$]

No Poll?

[Flavin.]

read my pm
is 100 posts cool for the poll

[lOOk$]

Fuck It Leave It At 100 Den Homie. Dis Is My Check See U 2morrow

[Flavin.]

its 300 posts to vote

[lOOk$]

LMAO aight kool.

[lOOk$]

ill glady greet u, u can recieve my punches wit open hands
u have no fans...
u gettin recognition from LLL heads? dat i just dnt understand
its beyond a sin how ur abusin ur sisters agender
u'll neva reach the next level....
.......so whats makes u think u'll eva make it as a member
i see more pussy in u den a camel toe...fuck ur wack ass verses,
like dead fishes...
its so strange how simultaneosly dey keep on raisin 2 the surface
fuck pre-cumin give me ur all, it still wont be enough to excite
^^ bein polite...
ive had it wit ur wicked ways, im gettin rid of sinister tonight
ill conclude dis here, pull the curtains dis battles been blinded
only way u posin a threat...
is if u edit my punches and names ur self feeble minded

nearly forgot about dis

[Flavin.]

You’re an ugly kid, I merk and hurt your self-esteem dude
Time to face the facts, but even they don’t wanna look at you
Son its set in the stone, known through the land im gonna win it
Ill kick some dirt on your chances, and leave you six feet in it
Keep running your own crew, I found a flaw in the system, jack
How you aloud to be in, when you said you want no one wack
C’mon fag, quit acting tough, we know that your no vet son
You’re a dumb bitch, but at least you can go in one ^
N’ the name suits you kid, the looks of it, u got no chance in hell
Cus no matter your verse, I know you’ll be the first with n L

[Revelationz.]

here it is

ill glady greet u, u can recieve my punches wit open hands
u have no fans...
u gettin recognition from LLL heads? dat i just dnt understand
no punch, just a statement and it's basic
its beyond a sin how ur abusin ur sisters agender
u'll neva reach the next level....
.......so whats makes u think u'll eva make it as a member
decent, maybe played
i see more pussy in u den a camel toe...fuck ur wack ass verses,
like dead fishes...
its so strange how simultaneosly dey keep on raisin 2 the surface
Fuck no
fuck pre-cumin give me ur all, it still wont be enough to excite
^^ bein polite...
ive had it wit ur wicked ways, im gettin rid of sinister tonight
what? no
ill conclude dis here, pull the curtains dis battles been blinded
only way u posin a threat...
is if u edit my punches and names ur self feeble minded
played as fuck



vs



You’re an ugly kid, I merk and hurt your self-esteem dude
Time to face the facts, but even they don’t wanna look at you
lol, alright
Son its set in the stone, known through the land im gonna win it
Ill kick some dirt on your chances, and leave you six feet in it
nope
Keep running your own crew, I found a flaw in the system, jack
How you aloud to be in, when you said you want no one wack
played as fuck and nope
C’mon fag, quit acting tough, we know that your no vet son
You’re a dumb bitch, but at least you can go in one ^
no way
N’ the name suits you kid, the looks of it, u got no chance in hell
Cus no matter your verse, I know you’ll be the first with n L
decent



v/ sinister for having the better quotables, weak battle overall though. That's just feed since I can't vote but it would be Sinister

[lyrically_insane]

v/Sinister...

For having an overall better verse..not by a lot though..barely edged Look$ out...

Sinister had a good flow, meh punches..a little on the weak side, personals...were meh aswell, structure need a little fixing..overall a decent verse...6/10

Look$ you had too much played concepts homie...work on being a little more creative with your punches kuz I see potential. your punches were meh but played...flow and structure were coo. personals were a little off...5/10

No Hate...Ups to Both!...

[lOOk$]

^^ thanks for your voting 0-1 uppin 1

[Flavin.]

upp

[Vocab~$kill$]

ok....ok.... got to give it to $...
You’re an ugly kid, I merk and hurt your self-esteem dude
Time to face the facts, but even they don’t wanna look at you
Son its set in the stone, known through the land im gonna win it
Ill kick some dirt on your chances, and leave you six feet in it

vs

nothing.....

v/$

[Flavin.]

thanks for voting
upp

[Skully Hendrix]

ill glady greet u, u can recieve my punches wit open hands
u have no fans...
u gettin recognition from LLL heads? dat i just dnt understand
Statement
its beyond a sin how ur abusin ur sisters agender
u'll neva reach the next level....
.......so whats makes u think u'll eva make it as a member
TNL punches are played
i see more pussy in u den a camel toe...fuck ur wack ass verses,
like dead fishes...
its so strange how simultaneosly dey keep on raisin 2 the surface
No
fuck pre-cumin give me ur all, it still wont be enough to excite
^^ bein polite...
ive had it wit ur wicked ways, im gettin rid of sinister tonight
No
ill conclude dis here, pull the curtains dis battles been blinded
only way u posin a threat...
is if u edit my punches and names ur self feeble minded
Praising feeble? lmfao

vs

You’re an ugly kid, I merk and hurt your self-esteem dude
Time to face the facts, but even they don’t wanna look at you
Blah
Son its set in the stone, known through the land im gonna win it
Ill kick some dirt on your chances, and leave you six feet in it
Played
Keep running your own crew, I found a flaw in the system, jack
How you aloud to be in, when you said you want no one wack
Weak
C’mon fag, quit acting tough, we know that your no vet son
You’re a dumb bitch, but at least you can go in one ^
No
N’ the name suits you kid, the looks of it, u got no chance in hell
Cus no matter your verse, I know you’ll be the first with n L
Weak closer

Looks came weak all around. Weak attempts at punches fucked you up. Sinister came weak too but didnt need much to take this. The opener pretty much won it, even though it wasn't that great at all.

v. $inister

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300388
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