thx, i hope yall have alias's.....bump 4
thx, i hope yall have alias's.....bump 4
last up.
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this bitch talkin all big with 2000 posts and bitin all the lyrical files,
i mean if he had his way rappers b wearin skirts
..so thank god he sucks at free'styles
white boy i dont wanna b in yur audios, try and b the next eminem,
cause kid my lines are like trains, ...ya tracks and shit without em
^Okay. Second one made me smirk a little.
vs.
dude you suck alot, and i dont mean at punchlines yo
you talk alot i know
...bitch you're loud, n i dont mean when ur gettin beat by my pinkie toe
^Lol. Work on your wording though. Iight concept here.
i'll erase you off the earth's map dude, dont worry i'll do it fast
no trace of kid existing, we're finally rid of wack rappers atlas
^Coo.
Same amount of quoteables but Rico showed more wit here. He had better punches and the better verse. More consistant outside of the quoteables. Both have alot to work on but can be good soon. Just keep practicing.
\\//Rico
I would like to just take this time to say that rico iz a bitch.. he battled a fucking light weight here and talked shit to me called me out din said he didn't want to battle because he waz in LLL. lol been their and done dat bitch u scared but if u want a fucking vots so bad that u haft to fucking run to somebody who sucks to get it I will give u one
here it iz bitch
V/Jay-lo
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ya aint good homie even nursery books was givin you some advice,
battlein me juss made rico fail a grade, cuz i gotta school him twice
ok
this bitch talkin all big with 2000 posts and bitin all the lyrical files,
i mean if he had his way rappers b wearin skirts
..so thank god he sucks at free'styles,
hell naw
it took juss a sec an has to live with a loss from a kid from quebec,
cuz now ur like hurricane katrina, no one wanna talk bout ya wreck,
meh no
i knew he wouldnt leave after i killed him once i got the first glance,
cuz it doesn't take much to beat him like a bitch with low tolerance,
naw flow isnt good
white boy i dont wanna b in yur audios, try and b the next eminem,
cause kid my lines are like trains, ...ya tracks and shit without em
good
kid why read you shitty verse, all it looks like is a bunch of fillers,
^ya your right it isn't over by a long shot
...but you ain't no reggie miller,
no
it was a mistake battlein ya your horrible, i don't have time 4 hoes,
cuz i gave you fre'breeze to battle noobs,
...and you still couldn't win-dows,
played, but good
man i kno it hard to accept but ur shit gets worse after each line,
cuz what doesn't kill u makes u stronger, so better luck next time..
meh
buddy ya shit is old, you still in the time of Hera
yo shit stay played out son, kid....this is a new era
personal
trust me i would go easy but not in this case
go ahead n claim yaself Jack Malone
...the way i'll leave ya dead without a trace
meh
i'll be your witness you suck kid, i promise i wont caugh
fuck definitions nigga, cant define you
....so i guess you just be claimed a WALF
ok
dawg u aint raw, homie you can never own a reputation
no ur not my friend, i dont hang around with an animal mutation
meh
kid you have no no life, do something with your remaining piece
I kicked you outta children of the corn, you got in atleast
personal
dude you suck alot, and i dont mean at punchlines yo
you talk alot i know
...bitch you're loud, n i dont mean when ur gettin beat by my pinkie toe
pretty streached
i'll erase you off the earth's map dude, dont worry i'll do it fast
no trace of kid existing, we're finally rid of wack rappers atlas
funny
i write with rhythem while you stay with the same boredom
cuz if you were plural then i bet i will whoresome
meh
well first i really didnt like kid structure...and rico had one streached line....but both of the verses were ok. but i feel that rico was more consistant....but both verses were ok. but i feel tha rico cam a little more correct...
so
\\// Rico
sry i forgot....hit up the link in my sig...sry for the freepost....
ya aint good homie even nursery books was givin you some advice,
battlein me juss made rico fail a grade, cuz i gotta school him twice
ight
this bitch talkin all big with 2000 posts and bitin all the lyrical files,
i mean if he had his way rappers b wearin skirts
..so thank god he sucks at free'styles,
naw
it took juss a sec an has to live with a loss from a kid from quebec,
cuz now ur like hurricane katrina, no one wanna talk bout ya wreck,
no
i knew he wouldnt leave after i killed him once i got the first glance,
cuz it doesn't take much to beat him like a bitch with low tolerance,
naw
white boy i dont wanna b in yur audios, try and b the next eminem,
cause kid my lines are like trains, ...ya tracks and shit without em
good
kid why read you shitty verse, all it looks like is a bunch of fillers,
^ya your right it isn't over by a long shot
...but you ain't no reggie miller,
no
it was a mistake battlein ya your horrible, i don't have time 4 hoes,
cuz i gave you fre'breeze to battle noobs,
...and you still couldn't win-dows,
played
man i kno it hard to accept but ur shit gets worse after each line,
cuz what doesn't kill u makes u stronger, so better luck next time..
meh
buddy ya shit is old, you still in the time of Hera
yo shit stay played out son, kid....this is a new era
ight
trust me i would go easy but not in this case
go ahead n claim yaself Jack Malone
...the way i'll leave ya dead without a trace
meh
i'll be your witness you suck kid, i promise i wont caugh
fuck definitions nigga, cant define you
....so i guess you just be claimed a WALF
ok
dawg u aint raw, homie you can never own a reputation
no ur not my friend, i dont hang around with an animal mutation
meh
kid you have no no life, do something with your remaining piece
I kicked you outta children of the corn, you got in atleast
ight
dude you suck alot, and i dont mean at punchlines yo
you talk alot i know
...bitch you're loud, n i dont mean when ur gettin beat by my pinkie toe
streached
i'll erase you off the earth's map dude, dont worry i'll do it fast
no trace of kid existing, we're finally rid of wack rappers atlas
funny
i write with rhythem while you stay with the same boredom
cuz if you were plural then i bet i will whoresome
meh
v/Rico
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