you spit first
jrockzem
E-TO-THA-T
you spit first
10 bars
u got 30 minutes
no rules
Im Bout To Embarrass This Dude You Know Makem Feel Bad,
So Dont Catch An Attitude, Cause This Is The 1st Letter From Ya Dad/
I See Formula Milk Made You Weak And Was Rough To Your Flesh,
Crackhead Mother's Eyes Sat Out Furhter Than Her Chest/
Im Not Ashamed Of You But Ashamed Of The Way We Met,
Neither Of Us Could Af"ford" Kids, I Just Head In The Back Of A "chevette"/
To My Knowledge Sex Had To Be Done To Conceive A Child,
This Was Some Special "shit", You Traveled From Her Throat To Her Stomach And Out Through Her Bowes/
Maybe We'll Meet 1 Day, Sorry It Was Like This,
Your Mom's Bowes Backed After She Had You, And Your Siblings Came Through Her Piss
3RD BAR SHOULD SAY"I JUST GOT HEAD IN THE BACK OF A CHEVETTE.Originally Posted by JROCKZEM
ok dawg dont be talking bout my mom
you just mad cause ure moms black your dads white and u look like an islam
boy u shouldve never battled me
im like a legend your just a punk emcee
jrockzem ha whats up with that
from what i heard you can suck your own dick r you a fucking acrobat
well at least you can cause ure gonna need them skillz i know
cause no 1 else will suck your dick not even a hoe
youve been bitch slapped so ure leaving this battle with your tail between your legs
im done wid you so get your ass back on the block and go give them boys some head
lets get some votes
In all seriousness, to be honest to the lord above, both Verses were absolutly trash. I have never in my life seem a worse battle, Some of your lines didnt rhyme at all, not to mention failed to even make sense.
No wordplay and the one "ford" line wasnt even worth typing.
Bowes and child rhyme?...seriously but if i HAD to pick a winner i would choose J....But neither one of you deserve any kind of win. E...your shit was so general, and so...fucked up ...
"well at least you can cause ure gonna need them skillz i know
cause no 1 else will suck your dick not even a hoe"
After that line your verse should not even be finished...seriously ...
No hate either .. im just telling you how i saw it...and not doing this to be mean.. just letting u guys know.. need to come Alot harder.
.Tactic.
The Crew.
Hit this please.
A.S.P.I.R.E.-
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