Week 7 -Kid Blitz (0 - 5) Vs Sneeky (1 - 3)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

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Good Luck to you both

[Blackflags]

Blah....14...check!

[Blackflags]

I'm going now!

I've seen your shit before man.....not enough talent to sit here and waist time to write!

I'm gonna wire ya jaw shut kid, so you'll be ceasin' to speak
you have no spot to remain a mark, so you're just grease in the sheets
this feces is weak, and really........I can kinda tell
we're not buyin your fake attempts kid, and so you get no clientel
so find a cell....lock it up, admit that you suck and just call it quits
you're stretchin ya concepts to death, so really you're the tallest bitch
soft as tits...kid click ya seat belt.....cuz you're about to get wrecked again
kid's like, "don't mess with him"..that's right because I'm rippin you before you're checkin in
dear god.....this faggot is half a man..maxes out the queer meter
so you should STOP! grab ya palms palms and come back as our cheerleader
Kid, you got a fucking long shot, so get to aimin' it big
nothing remains of this pig, and I ain't mentioning his name or his sig.
Dog.......ya nothing but crap man, with even shittier fans
cuz you throw punchlines so played out...uh......you should just sit on your hands



14........

10 min key, match it!

[JDoe]

check....

[JDoe]

Double No Show.

Flowmatic Booted
Sneeky, did Sign Out (1 - 3)

Ya best chance by far, so dont expect a Flomatic herb
And we'll ponder ya words...
And why your avy favors Whoopi Goldberg.
Its a fact you wack, you only "bomb" on dates Mack
and iam just waitin for "Another" fuckin technotrack
Your 20, i can't recommend you drink yaself to death
what dont you get...
you aint nice, ridin off ya old LLL rep
DAMN!...been here since 02' why are you in jr. man
you were here...
When Spielberg debuted "Catch Me If You Can"
I'll beat ya ass with no gloves, this dude is plain atrocious
I might drop ugly, but your emcee rec is the closest
This Sneeky bitch talks shit after a DOUBLE NO SHOW
and thats half the reason your A.I. is confirmed homo
You have stretched structure, like Armstrong in the hands
your vets skill Off-Demand...
but you'll be HOT...burinin in hell with your fans

14.

*fixed misspelled words...

[Tebo]

I'm gonna wire ya jaw shut kid, so you'll be ceasin' to speak
you have no spot to remain a mark, so you're just grease in the sheets
ok
this feces is weak, and really........I can kinda tell
we're not buyin your fake attempts kid, and so you get no clientel
ok
so find a cell....lock it up, admit that you suck and just call it quits
you're stretchin ya concepts to death, so really you're the tallest bitch
ok, decent
soft as tits...kid click ya seat belt.....cuz you're about to get wrecked again
kid's like, "don't mess with him"..that's right because I'm rippin you before you're checkin in
I used this concept last week, it's pretty good
dear god.....this faggot is half a man..maxes out the queer meter
so you should STOP! grab ya palms palms and come back as our cheerleader
seen cheerleader too many times... ok but mehish
Kid, you got a fucking long shot, so get to aimin' it big
nothing remains of this pig, and I ain't mentioning his name or his sig.
ok
Dog.......ya nothing but crap man, with even shittier fans
cuz you throw punchlines so played out...uh......you should just sit on your hands
nah

Vssssssss

Ya best chance by far, so dont expect a Flomatic herb
And we'll ponder ya words...
And why your avy favors Whoopi Goldberg.
ok
Its a fact you wack, you only "bomb" on dates Mack
and iam just waitin for "Another" fuckin technotrack
no
Your 20, i can't recommend you drink yaself to death
what dont you get...
you aint nice, ridin off ya old LLL rep
concept was good, wording was kinda off base
DAMN!...been here since 02' why are you in jr. man
you were here...
When Spielberg debuted "Catch Me If You Can"
ok but not hittin him really....
I'll beat ya ass with no gloves, this dude is plain atrocious
I might drop ugly, but your emcee rec is the closest
nah...
This Sneeky bitch talks shit after a DOUBLE NO SHOW
and thats half the reason your A.I. is confirmed homo
heh
You have stretched structure, like Armstrong in the hands
your vets skill Off-Demand...
but you'll be HOT...burinin in hell with your fans
you kinda flipped the 2 words Sneeky used... no

Kid Blitz you need to elevate yourself to a more making sense punch, the finisher of sneeky was pretty weak you coulda done a greater 1 but you flipped his words around basically... Sneeky came harder here

V//Sneeky

[Stephen Mayfield]

Dog.......ya nothing but crap man, with even shittier fans
cuz you throw punchlines so played out...uh......you should just sit on your hands


vs.


NOTHING


vt/ sneeky

[JDoe]

bunch of fuckin d/r...

[Blackflags]

2-0 Me.......uppin'

Godd battle Kid......Will post links before deadline!

pz.

[JDoe]

yeah...honestly this is the first time i tried...but w/e uppin for votes

[Donald Trump]

I'm gonna wire ya jaw shut kid, so you'll be ceasin' to speak
you have no spot to remain a mark, so you're just grease in the sheets
coulda been worded better
this feces is weak, and really........I can kinda tell
we're not buyin your fake attempts kid, and so you get no clientel
nah i wasnt feeling the wordplay
so find a cell....lock it up, admit that you suck and just call it quits
you're stretchin ya concepts to death, so really you're the tallest bitch
should've worded this better
soft as tits...kid click ya seat belt.....cuz you're about to get wrecked again
kid's like, "don't mess with him"..that's right because I'm rippin you before you're checkin in
Woah this was too stretched
dear god.....this faggot is half a man..maxes out the queer meter
so you should STOP! grab ya palms palms and come back as our cheerleader
nah this wasnt really a punch
Kid, you got a fucking long shot, so get to aimin' it big
nothing remains of this pig, and I ain't mentioning his name or his sig.
ehh this could ov been better but ok
Dog.......ya nothing but crap man, with even shittier fans
cuz you throw punchlines so played out...uh......you should just sit on your hands
nah wasn't feeling this closer

vs


Ya best chance by far, so dont expect a Flomatic herb
And we'll ponder ya words...
And why your avy favors Whoopi Goldberg.
Nah more of a statement
Its a fact you wack, you only "bomb" on dates Mack
and iam just waitin for "Another" fuckin technotrack
this wasn't a diss
Your 20, i can't recommend you drink yaself to death
what dont you get...
you aint nice, ridin off ya old LLL rep
good concept bad excecution
DAMN!...been here since 02' why are you in jr. man
you were here...
When Spielberg debuted "Catch Me If You Can"
nah this wasnt good
I'll beat ya ass with no gloves, this dude is plain atrocious
I might drop ugly, but your emcee rec is the closest
i didnt really understand this
This Sneeky bitch talks shit after a DOUBLE NO SHOW
and thats half the reason your A.I. is confirmed homo
Wasn't feeling this
You have stretched structure, like Armstrong in the hands
your vets skill Off-Demand...
but you'll be HOT...burinin in hell with your fans
Hell lines are played

v-Sneeky

[one way]

Nothing

vs

Nothing



*flips coin*
































vote........sneeky for attempting wordplay and punches, but still wack at them

[Blackflags]

4-0 me....man, I need to be in bed and not on RB...lol

yeah I know I sucked this round...like every other...But I seriously didn't put any effort into it!

cool

[Blackflags]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...47#post5506947
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...55#post5506955

Will Edit With The Rest*

[Nashvillain]

I'm gonna wire ya jaw shut kid, so you'll be ceasin' to speak
you have no spot to remain a mark, so you're just grease in the sheets
^na,wasnt feelin this
this feces is weak, and really........I can kinda tell
we're not buyin your fake attempts kid, and so you get no clientel
^ight
so find a cell....lock it up, admit that you suck and just call it quits
you're stretchin ya concepts to death, so really you're the tallest bitch
^no
soft as tits...kid click ya seat belt.....cuz you're about to get wrecked again
kid's like, "don't mess with him"..that's right because I'm rippin you before you're checkin in
^ok
dear god.....this faggot is half a man..maxes out the queer meter
so you should STOP! grab ya palms palms and come back as our cheerleader
^decent
Kid, you got a fucking long shot, so get to aimin' it big
nothing remains of this pig, and I ain't mentioning his name or his sig.
^weak
Dog.......ya nothing but crap man, with even shittier fans
cuz you throw punchlines so played out...uh......you should just sit on your hands
^ok closer

***VS***



Ya best chance by far, so dont expect a Flomatic herb
And we'll ponder ya words...
And why your avy favors Whoopi Goldberg.
^wack
Its a fact you wack, you only "bomb" on dates Mack
and iam just waitin for "Another" fuckin technotrack
^statement
Your 20, i can't recommend you drink yaself to death
what dont you get...
you aint nice, ridin off ya old LLL rep
^ight
DAMN!...been here since 02' why are you in jr. man
you were here...
When Spielberg debuted "Catch Me If You Can"
^umm no
I'll beat ya ass with no gloves, this dude is plain atrocious
I might drop ugly, but your emcee rec is the closest
^na
This Sneeky bitch talks shit after a DOUBLE NO SHOW
and thats half the reason your A.I. is confirmed homo
^ok
You have stretched structure, like Armstrong in the hands
your vets skill Off-Demand...
but you'll be HOT...burinin in hell with your fans
^weak closer


not a very exciting battle,but my vote goes 2 sneeky 4 coming wit harder punches and a better overall verse

V//sneeky