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There you go.
Wu-Tang Forever
Nothing Was The Same
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Last edited by Kontroverzy™; March 20th, 2008 at 09:22 AM
Rap Pinocchio, every time you spit your fuckin nose grow, no holds barred,
don't trip, I wouldn't spend a dime on a stamp for you post card.
You're a dead duck I got more dough than a bread truck,
Come out the mouth get headbutt fuck around I'll leave your ass bed struck.
You the next up, don't make no promises of victory cause you a vet,
Gimme Cookie owe supporting fans apologies and ended up in debt.
I'ma bred buck, I mimic insanity, I live in profanity,
the Devil's not at the level to ever go hand to hand wit me.
Cause my level of mercey's unearthly so curse me,
you'll get a curse back when your hearst leaves,
I'm thirsty for immorality and immortality,
suicide bombers in armored cars dont got the balls to battle me.
So who the fuck are you thinkin you so controversial?
.Kontroverzy. stuck watchin T.V. cause he heard rap's commercial.
Tryna sound witty but I figured from your check in you's a clown,
or how you told t_oR_N his shit elevated . . . down.
Get a dictionary and look up oxyrap you moron,
cause your lines taste bitter but you find sugar to pour on.
I'll say in the last line what you'll say in your whole career.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ".Kontroverzy's queer."
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game over..
Your dead pussy, facin kon u'll need more then band-aids & stitches
cuz i'm taking out head & shoulders like shoppin wit bad haired bitches
fucka punch, i'mma treat Que like the bitch he is n' engrave slaps
& face it, you couldn't get noticed even if u rocked a fuckin wave cap
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
see i'm hardcore, hang u off the rooftop, blood rushin to ur mind
walk away
n' leave this bitch on hold like i had to switch to the other line
u got a great imagination, n' i got Ak'z & macks for heavy thinkers
n' i admit ur kinda tough,
cuz ur just takin the "liqs" like irish drinkers
.
.
.
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now imma proceed to blow, leave ya memories in snow
n' have u permanentely nailed to boards like jesus, yo
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
u'll bleed from toes, if u dare put a foot in my path
his raps like comedy,
cuz when he talks they just feel the urge to laugh
im killin this fagget, like it's the right thang to do
u a doo doo rapper, ur hiphops lookin like a dyin kangaroo
u a bitch son, i'm laggin my comp like i needa grip ROM
N' this kids so fulla shit, 2 gurls & 1 cup culd have their own sitcom
Rap Pinocchio, every time you spit your fuckin nose grow, no holds barred,
don't trip, I wouldn't spend a dime on a stamp for you post card.
no
You're a dead duck I got more dough than a bread truck,
Come out the mouth get headbutt fuck around I'll leave your ass bed struck.
no
You the next up, don't make no promises of victory cause you a vet,
Gimme Cookie owe supporting fans apologies and ended up in debt.
no
I'ma bred buck, I mimic insanity, I live in profanity,
the Devil's not at the level to ever go hand to hand wit me.
no, self glory anyways
Cause my level of mercey's unearthly so curse me,
you'll get a curse back when your hearst leaves,
no, no, no, WTF... im about to boot you
I'm thirsty for immorality and immortality,
suicide bombers in armored cars dont got the balls to battle me.
SELF GLORY DUDE
So who the fuck are you thinkin you so controversial?
.Kontroverzy. stuck watchin T.V. cause he heard rap's commercial.
NO
Tryna sound witty but I figured from your check in you's a clown,
or how you told t_oR_N his shit elevated . . . down.
decent, but madly played
Get a dictionary and look up oxyrap you moron,
cause your lines taste bitter but you find sugar to pour on.
hell no
I'll say in the last line what you'll say in your whole career.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ".Kontroverzy's queer."
...wtf
you better PM me for help THIS WEEK and put it to USE next week or i swear you will be in a do or die match.
vs.
Your dead pussy, facin kon u'll need more then band-aids & stitches
cuz i'm taking out head & shoulders like shoppin wit bad haired bitches
decent
fucka punch, i'mma treat Que like the bitch he is n' engrave slaps
& face it, you couldn't get noticed even if u rocked a fuckin wave cap
na, too simple
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
NICE
see i'm hardcore, hang u off the rooftop, blood rushin to ur mind
walk away
n' leave this bitch on hold like i had to switch to the other line
eh, iight
u got a great imagination, n' i got Ak'z & macks for heavy thinkers
n' i admit ur kinda tough,
cuz ur just takin the "liqs" like irish drinkers
no
now imma proceed to blow, leave ya memories in snow
n' have u permanentely nailed to boards like jesus, yo
too simple, bad wording
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
lmao
u'll bleed from toes, if u dare put a foot in my path
his raps like comedy,
cuz when he talks they just feel the urge to laugh
na, too simple
im killin this fagget, like it's the right thang to do
u a doo doo rapper, ur hiphops lookin like a dyin kangaroo
decent, could have been worded ALOT better
u a bitch son, i'm laggin my comp like i needa grip ROM
N' this kids so fulla shit, 2 gurls & 1 cup culd have their own sitcom
lmao... nice
with a few more weeks of elevation... i could see me pushin you to a HW match or even LLL by the end of the season.
vote - Kon
Last edited by N. James; March 19th, 2008 at 11:28 PM
Rap Pinocchio, every time you spit your fuckin nose grow, no holds barred,
don't trip, I wouldn't spend a dime on a stamp for you post card.
nice opener.//.
You're a dead duck I got more dough than a bread truck,
Come out the mouth get headbutt fuck around I'll leave your ass bed struck.
okay filler.//.
You the next up, don't make no promises of victory cause you a vet,
Gimme Cookie owe supporting fans apologies and ended up in debt.
haha......funny.//.
I'ma bred buck, I mimic insanity, I live in profanity,
the Devil's not at the level to ever go hand to hand wit me.
self-glory.//.
Cause my level of mercey's unearthly so curse me,
you'll get a curse back when your hearst leaves,
nice punch.//.
I'm thirsty for immorality and immortality,
suicide bombers in armored cars dont got the balls to battle me.
self-glory.//.
So who the fuck are you thinkin you so controversial?
.Kontroverzy. stuck watchin T.V. cause he heard rap's commercial.
nice punch.//.
Tryna sound witty but I figured from your check in you's a clown,
or how you told t_oR_N his shit elevated . . . down.
too funny.//.
Get a dictionary and look up oxyrap you moron,
cause your lines taste bitter but you find sugar to pour on.
started out good then fishtailed.//.
I'll say in the last line what you'll say in your whole career.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ".Kontroverzy's queer."
funny closer good nameplay.//.
Vs.
Your dead pussy, facin kon u'll need more then band-aids & stitches
cuz i'm taking out head & shoulders like shoppin wit bad haired bitches
thats mad funny.//.
fucka punch, i'mma treat Que like the bitch he is n' engrave slaps
& face it, you couldn't get noticed even if u rocked a fuckin wave cap
haha...good punch.//.
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
nice punch.//.
see i'm hardcore, hang u off the rooftop, blood rushin to ur mind
walk away
n' leave this bitch on hold like i had to switch to the other line
good punch here too.//.
u got a great imagination, n' i got Ak'z & macks for heavy thinkers
n' i admit ur kinda tough,
cuz ur just takin the "liqs" like irish drinkers
wow....dope.//.
now imma proceed to blow, leave ya memories in snow
n' have u permanentely nailed to boards like jesus, yo
harsh punch.//.
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
nice punch.//.
u'll bleed from toes, if u dare put a foot in my path
his raps like comedy,
cuz when he talks they just feel the urge to laugh
filler.//.
im killin this fagget, like it's the right thang to do
u a doo doo rapper, ur hiphops lookin like a dyin kangaroo
no.//.
u a bitch son, i'm laggin my comp like i needa grip ROM
N' this kids so fulla shit, 2 gurls & 1 cup culd have their own sitcom
huh?.......NO.//.
v/ kON.....HAD MORE PUNCHES AND HAD BETTER PUNCHES.
some of que's lines were just self-glory.
2-0 to kontroverzy.
Q: You focus way to much on having multies in your verse instead of having punches that really do anything. I think you could probably get the idea with some help, but this week you didnt have much at all. you need to work on wordplay and having much harsher punches. you need to focus on attacking your opponent instead of just rhyming every word.
Kon: Your verse actually had punches, and you actually attacked Q. All around you came a lot better but from what ive seen you do i think you still could have done a lot better. You took this one easily.
v. Kon
Tryna sound witty but I figured from your check in you's a clown,
or how you told t_oR_N his shit elevated . . . down.
Vs.
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
u'll bleed from toes, if u dare put a foot in my path
his raps like comedy,
cuz when he talks they just feel the urge to laugh
im killin this fagget, like it's the right thang to do
u a doo doo rapper, ur hiphops lookin like a dyin kangaroo
u a bitch son, i'm laggin my comp like i needa grip ROM
N' this kids so fulla shit, 2 gurls & 1 cup culd have their own sitcom
V-kontro for havin more punches, no hate tho
"Four letter words or four syllable words won't make you a poet
It will only magnify how shallow you are, and let everybody know it."
-Gil Scott Heron..Infekted Penz.
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.Nightmares.
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
im killin this fagget, like it's the right thang to do
u a doo doo rapper, ur hiphops lookin like a dyin kangaroo
u a bitch son, i'm laggin my comp like i needa grip ROM
N' this kids so fulla shit, 2 gurls & 1 cup culd have their own sitcom
well-spit & solid...
vs.
Nothing...u have the right idea but wording etc. is off...
V/Kon...
Heaven's Guardians Of True Hip-Hop
absolutely nothing
vs
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
^ lol @ that
Que-C needs to improve alot..but that's what this is for. Kontro had a pretty decent verse, a few standout lines, and he took this with ease.
que-c had a pretty bad verse. most was just self hype and horrible punches. u def need to read some LLL verses and try and learn from their drops. Kon had an alright verse. the teacher punch was cool but needed better wording for it to hit hard. needless to say u attempted punches and thats what matters.
v/ Kon
It's time to do the thing - that's word to ya wristwatch
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2nd horrid battle ive seen this week
que its clear you dont understand the point of text battles as 3/4 your shit was self glory. kon had a decent verse....thus you were easilly beaten. there really isnt much to say. kon easilly wins this.
v/ kontro
nothing
vs
trust me i got guns galore, spit flames that'll leave ur outer skin tore
so if this faggets on a roll........ it's cause stop & drop came before
you a skeez fo sho, constantly on your knees for doe
Que must be applyin to be a teacher,
cuz this tricks givin brains like THEY NEED TO KNOW
v/ kon
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