Eye Am. ft. Lecomp.

[Ntalek]

A gesture.
Failed to wave
but noticed.
Within a glimpse,
a moment captured.
Stored in memory.

Blink and you’ll miss It.
A revolution occurs every time
You close your eyes...

Glinting.
Seeing only-what
it is capable to comprehend.
Yearning to know explanitons
of thee expression.

A pearl in a shell.
It is easy to replica
What you perceive, yet extremely
Difficult to find the true
Beauty in the most simplistic
Objects.

When it's defined by intersexual thoughts,
displayed by high, fashionly cut fabric.
That appeals to all the main muscles
that reveal feeling.

Hating that you feel the fire burning
the midnight oil inside.
Your thoughts are only tinder.

The third eye,
Gasoline pupils.
Arsonist. Sinful sights
Charred vison,
a glimpse of home
through my flaming oculus
Satan's child.

The sixth sense,
It does not belong to you.
It is the eye of
Humanity, and what
We all share, which is why
It is unclear if it exists
At all...

Who is to say green is green,
In my mind, green may be
What your mind sees as blue.
It is hard to see the truth
Until you look through
Someone else’s eyes.

Blind towards realizaton.
Knowledge clothe in stupidity
Ray Charles minus the piano.
The consistant thud,
'dun-dun.......dun dun'
.........dun-dun...........

I question our ability
To accept perspectives,
When it is obvious
That the windows to
Our souls, are tinted.

Death to the vision
of your last breath.
Blind to the sound
of the clocks final tick.

Warped in an intergalactic mindframe.
Supressed by today's yesterday's.
What we so call reality has
vanished.

All that is left is spirit.



"words only describe what the eye fails to comprehend"
-Ntalek
Eye Am.
Written By: Ntalek ft. Lecomp

[Compton.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6324635

Uno link. Will get another now.

[Compton.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-365745.html

Deuce link.

[Ntalek]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...th-365711.html

[Truth Iscariot]

Damn yo this was dope, The Imagery was nearly perfect, Lecomps Stanzas, were a little abstract but still very very cool, Your wording was Good as well, and it had this Somber dark tone to it, which got me into it emotion wise.

This may be worth a nom

Good look both of you.

[Orc]

I liked this. You both meshed really well. The wording was nice throughout apart from a few slip ups by both..

''Yearning to know explanitons '' & ''It is easy to replica
What you perceive''..

Both were minor slip ups but I thought I'd point that out. Overall this was dope though. Nt had some great imagery and Le provided a great sort of abstract tone. The overall concept was great and really enjoyable and I really loved how Nt finished the poem, it was just a nice way to close it. So yeah, my feed is short but my comp keeps freezing. So good job guys!


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ul-365197.html

RTF, PLEASE!

[Compton.]

Arghh replicate* lol.

Props on the feed son.

Upping for more.

[Spekz.]

This turned out to be a good collab... With the styles you both took it made it very fluent, but at the same time your executiongs where different..ntalekt you where informative, more as the story teller that kept ideas flowing, while lecomp seem to work off of your story n bring in the deep imagery n abstract thought...which i thought really worked well it keep each stanza fresh n made the piece very easy to enjoy. The concept it self was a nice n fresh concept with a broad attack yet you where very precise with the content...overall it only got better as the piece went on..and with that said i thought both of your bests stanza's where ur lasts.it just got really powerful around that part n the piece..and finished well.

nice job.

[Ntalek]

appreciated..ups..

[White Abyss]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nd-366129.html

feed this poem for me and I'll feed this later tonight, please and thankyou.

[Compton.]

Moar feed.

Pls.

[P. Mortuus]

Damn you two should collab more often you dudes almost was the same person here.Both styles fit together just about perfect.The imagery was at a all time high from what I've seen Lecomp do so far......*oh and I know your not new
Emotion in the piece nearly matched the imagery it was very well inserted.I'm basically just telling you guys what other people have been this shit was pretty dope good jobs.Please leave feed one or both of you dudes on the link under.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-366280.html

[Know-It-All]

This piece was a very well written piece as well you two have similar styles. This piece was excellent with the imagery taking my mind mentally out of this world into your own personal sanctuary. I really enjoyed how much emotion each of you put into this piece. I only have one complaint like Burden said you had a few slip ups in your thought process which is normal for writers. I also loved the slick thin structure it mad this piece easier to read honestly. over all this was a fantastic piece with perfect imagery and emotion, with only a few slip ups thrown in there.

The third eye,
Gasoline pupils.
Arsonist. Sinful sights
Charred vison,
a glimpse of home
through my flaming oculus
Satan's child.

The sixth sense,
It does not belong to you.
It is the eye of
Humanity, and what
We all share, which is why
It is unclear if it exists
At all...

for some reason I am drawn to these two stanzas i can't explain it I just loved them the most.