This is a peice im working on now, still has a long way to go but want feedback ofr this bit to see where i need to work on most. Cheers
This life is too short to be abused and wasted,
Where all unique, where all gods creations,
This life is too short to be abused and wasted,
To disobey the life your givens just haness,
Its true when they say, that life’s too short to waste,
The average lifespan, seems to have passed just today,
From a toddler, to teenage, to elderly, than deceased,
From children, to grandkids, than to double great,
But some just cant wait, and contemplate the blade,
And contemplate the hate, cause death by disgrace,
complete devastation, to the family that loved and raise em,
But once they taste their grave, gave no consideration,
left their heads in cloud, like their into aviation,
the pain conqured salvation, so pictures are erased,
to rewind to the day and age, where you never took place,
that’s why,
This life is too short to be abused and wasted,
Where all unique, where all gods creations,
This life is too short to be abused and wasted,
To disobey the life your givens just haness,
