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Thread: The Way Yal See It...

  1. October 2nd, 2008, 02:26 PM #1
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    The Way Yal See It...

    The Way Yal See It

    Antarctica does not freeze,
    Greenland is full of color,
    N i spend a lot of time
    With my bro n his baby's mother.
    Lebron does not hover,
    Tony lives in a spaceship,
    N he's modest like
    Him makin money really ain't shit.
    I am never the plaintiff
    N the judges are so fair,
    Plus my house is so small
    That i can't even go there.
    Black men do not struggle,
    Hard times do not exist,
    Harsh rhymes i can't spit,
    I give em no damn twist.
    Relationships always sink,
    Every chick's a slut or trick,
    Stevie's eyes never blink,
    N life's composed of nut n shit.
    Readers will fully comprehend this,
    Leave honest n helpful feedback..
    This is just another vent piece
    N the OM doesn't need that...

    Last edited by Tony B; October 2nd, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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  2. October 2nd, 2008, 02:27 PM #2
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ll-378518.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...rb-378818.html
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  3. October 2nd, 2008, 03:12 PM #3
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    haha,,,kinda funny...everyone in OM is kinda obsessed with "Venting" pieces
    I think its cool cause thats when alot of honesty and emotion comes up.

    It was cool how you were making fun of that....
    this rhyme reminded kinda of Kanye west or something it was spacy like that.
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  4. October 2nd, 2008, 03:15 PM #4
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    lol yea i dropped somethin similar to this about a week ago (i think u left feed) n since then it seems like everyone's doin it hehe

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  5. October 3rd, 2008, 01:38 PM #5
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    uppp
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  6. October 4th, 2008, 11:54 AM #6
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    seriously...?
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  7. October 5th, 2008, 11:17 PM #7
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    grrrrr
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  8. October 5th, 2008, 11:45 PM #8
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    lol good stuff man...my bad i didnt see this before i dropped my vent piece...i liked the content it seemed like you were addressing alot of the hate that people put out with their silly opinions and just making light of the crap that people say...so the rhyme scheme was simple but surely thats what you were going for...so no prob there...you had a sarcastic emotion which was good for this piece and had bits of imagery in alot of your short lines...good job man...hit me up on:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-379297.html

    ^^^this

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  9. October 5th, 2008, 11:48 PM #9
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    Re: The Way Yal See It...

    hahaha
    crazy man
    its like a drug trip in writing...
    hahaha
    i love pieces like this... all fantastical and that coz your rhymes dont have to makes sense so you can just go perfecting flow
    I liked it.
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