Black Hornet Vs 2121

[Black Hornet]

10-16 lines due in 24 hours after check
must check in within 1 hour of this thread posting
post 2 links to threads youve voted on.
no editing your verse.

[2121]

yo i said 5 bars check

[Black Hornet]

check...10 lines= 5 bars homie. 16 lines=8 bars....2 lines=1 bar.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...200/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...192/index.html

[2121]

The boy down under bout to lay you 6 ft under, these lines are so bright they leave a mark like lighting and thunder, accepting this battle was a blunder//

Leavin this cat speechless, rockin punches so quick he gunna be left toothless, my strategy's simple walk in the ring & dispose of the trash consider this is an exhibition match //

this reminds me of marriage i'm beatin the same pussy repeatedly, my lyrics arnt even heatedly, this cat shouldn’t even spit just admit you’ve been defeated.//

This cat be rippin his shit while I be rippin him like jack the ripper, I’ve burnt this dude easily like burning paper with a zipper//

The black hornet be buzzing around like he can sting like a bee,thinking he the best thing well im the mortein your buzz just been exterminated//
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zipper- type of lighter
mortein- shit that kills insects

[2121]

yo i aint good at setting that shit out i dont battle that much

[2121]

when you going to spit i wanna go to bed

[2121]

10 hours to spit dude.

[Black Hornet]

noone respect u not even yourself son...if u need followers u should be beggin for some
cus currently on FL you'd be the only chump...who has fan support totalling negative 1
u got MC hammer type flare in ya jams.. cant touch this- drop you like parachute pants
diss prarie doggin like a Caribou Camp...you attract wackness with your pheramone man,
black jack, jack black you hear the laughter?...21 confused like his 1-2's backwards
your flow similar to Will Smith but wacker..u'd prolly make it as an actor, not a rapper,
homie ya verse take up more dead air than morticians..
every diss was like a handicapped competition,
you might get a vote from someone who hates me...
fuck it, theres seems to be lots of dickriding going on lately,

[2121]

uppin

[Black Hornet]

uppin 1

[Black Hornet]

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[KnowP]

none

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noone respect u not even yourself son...if u need followers u should be beggin for some
cus currently on FL you'd be the only chump...who has fan support totalling negative 1

Not a good battle. Both seemed to not even try to come creative. Punches were lacking and even the rhyme scheme was very horrible. both need to elevate dramatically
think of new punches and concepts

v/ Black for better attempts

[Tim]

Black gotta say ight verse but it was hella strecthed and thing turned out sloppy with the stucture, but you did your thing with a couple decent punches. Thought you could have came harder but i guess you must have known your oppenent might have dropped like that, so pretty easy 1 sided battle

vote...Black

[Black Hornet]

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[Stylez 905]

The boy down under bout to lay you 6 ft under, these lines are so bright they leave a mark like lighting and thunder, accepting this battle was a blunder//
This was a nice concept, but the length kinda threw me off
This cat be rippin his shit while I be rippin him like jack the ripper, I’ve burnt this dude easily like burning paper with a zipper//
This was a good idea. I dunno about everyone else, but where I'm from the lighters a Zippo, don't know about a Zipper though

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noone respect u not even yourself son...if u need followers u should be beggin for some
cus currently on FL you'd be the only chump...who has fan support totalling negative 1
Lol. I liked this for an opener
u got MC hammer type flare in ya jams.. cant touch this- drop you like parachute pants
diss prarie doggin like a Caribou Camp...you attract wackness with your pheramone man,
This made me laugh, mostly the MC hammer bit
black jack, jack black you hear the laughter?...21 confused like his 1-2's backwards
your flow similar to Will Smith but wacker..u'd prolly make it as an actor, not a rapper,
This was a niiice personal bro, I liked it. Liked the punch, too

Overall - 2121: Your verse was hard to get into, for me anyway. Mostly because of the length of your bars; I know you said you don't really battle, so I'm not holding it against you. In terms of a well formed verse, I'm going with BH. You had a nice setup to a multi in your closer, but it didn't even rhyme at the end.

BH: You got this one for me bro. I liked the personal, delivered well. Some of your punches made me laugh, but even some of them were a little stretched too. But when you hit the 1-2's backwards personal, I liked that bar the most.

No hate either way.

V/ Black Hornet