57 Lives - Damn

[Weiss57]

Damn I'm fly, you know where to find me, up in the sky, damn
24/7 always high, beautiful girl beside me, don't even try
Damn right one ofa fuckin kind, you know I'm always on yo damn mind, bitches
Neva get rid of me, ridin' high, nd always livin' free

Damn, I be stackin' so much green, stacks even pass up me
Damn, I can't even see, Ima tree killa, enviornmentally demalishing
Where the end may be, it neva stops, favorite color stays green
True color of many things, money, weed, evagreen, foreva green mothafucka


Work in progress bitches...Class bell rang..

[sir headless]

I dont know what you think you are doing but u have to write much more o.O
Rhymes are kinda easy, flow is decent !

[Weiss57]

yo if you had the instrumental youd hear flow mothafucka. 1st of all iv'e smoked my vocab away nd 2ndly i keep it simple so dumbasses like you can understand it. i kno your tryin to help but think before you speak. damn brotha.

[Malice]

very short, up the length and if you are worried about reppin the flow just record it and post it in the audio section, postin in text is about developing your lyrical vocab and structure and all of that

[Quest.]

shit sucks.....whats great bout this? nothin.....u sound just like every other rapper that is out now....i stack green, i'm so high in the sky....shits played....u just need to select all the delete this shit and start over.....strengthin ur vocab, be more complex....Etc...ur not as dope as u think u maybe.....ur way below average if anything

[Weiss57]

i jus started 2 weeks ago. so fuck you. nd it goes wit the instrumental mothafucka

[moose35]

yo if you had the instrumental youd hear flow mothafucka. 1st of all iv'e smoked my vocab away nd 2ndly i keep it simple so dumbasses like you can understand it. i kno your tryin to help but think before you speak. damn brotha.

If you want people to give you feeds then stop calling people "dumbasses" when they tell you it was a decent song. The dude was right, it's really basic, with no deeper meaning. If the "flow is so fly", then record it.

[Cody Nash]

closed. read the rules. ya'll need to stop feeding pieces that don't follow the rules. work with me here.. c'mon.