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Thread: Third track from A2Z's album... "Uphill battle""

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    Third track from A2Z's album... "Uphill battle""

    aight this is my first topical drop on my album "XYZ"


    [Hook]
    This is an uphill battle//
    Struggling up the ladder, looking for a handle//
    Something to grab on to, something to grapple//
    Everybodyt his is an uphill battle

    Picture this: a young boy still wet behind the ears//
    Trying in the rap world getting nothing but jeers//
    What the fuck would you do? Give up?//
    Drop all your dreams and say enoughs enough?//
    Nuh uh, no way not for this cat im trying//
    Im goinna suceed or while i trying im dieing//
    Cuz I can't give up... can't take this rap world and quiet up//
    Imma speak my piece even f i get shot up//
    Theres low blows and backstabbing, theres no other way//
    Ya gotta struggle to the top, to the place where it plays//

    [hook]

    Baby momma gotta love her... but she won't stop yelling//
    Will there be police involved? Theres no fucking telling//
    Ya try to reasonable, ya ask her nicely//
    After all, ya don't wanna kill ya wifey//
    But no, she aint having it, she just keeps bitching//
    The rent, the baby, the car SHE WONT FUCKING LISTEN//
    Ya getting so pissed, the anger burns inside//
    Your Adrenaline kicking into hyper drive//
    But mind says 'kill her'' but ya heart says 'no'//
    Remember she put up with ya nagging yo//
    'Aw who cares, she fucking deserves it'//
    Does she really? Or are YOU the one who started shit?//
    So ya back down let her screams wake the dead//
    Its an uphill battle ya'll but ya gotta use ya head//

    [hook]

    Sitting at ya desk... thinking about tonight//
    The big rap battle... the shits gonna be tight//
    But you got homework about as high as you//
    Ya sit and think... What the fuck do you do?//
    Ya already flunking, but ya almost at a D//
    If ya get up to a C you can get in the University//
    But the battle... How can u miss it?//
    But ya got ya life ahead of ya... ya can't just say piss it//
    Let it go and watch ya lif slip between ya fingers//
    End up desperate for money, being the man that pulls the trigger//
    Unload three and a super market guy//
    Run out the door and theres fourty cops outside//
    10 year minimum for armed robbery//
    All because u up and said "Fuck the D"//
    To go and battle, something that wouldn't even win?//
    Fuck this dude, pick back up ya pen//

    [hook x5]

    uppin for feedback on my TOPICAL verse
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    yo do i have to uppin it already?

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    this drop was better than tha other one , , , ,but it still lacked wordplay ,

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    uppin
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    i didnt find it that good...its aight like my man Bash said its lacked word play complexity and all that good shit...keep elevating though...wahid

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    yeah, but this song is serious not fancy this song is supposed to tell a story, so i tried to avoid all the metas and wordplay ya knwo what i mean... this is one of the few serious songs on my album so i needed to make that evident
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